Hi guys :) I really appreciate every single review on the first chapter :) I really try to better myself in the ways you guys suggested :) and I do apologize for my bad grammar once again :/ I'm still learning the English language and I just can't write so good so far :/ Hopefully I'll get better by the time :) but I can't change from one day to another :/ Well... I hope that you will enjoy the fanfiction :)
Chapter 2
-Judy's point of view-
-1 month later-
Nick's acting weird recently. Not like he wasn´t acting weird normally, but this is different. Every day after or before work he goes somewhere. Wonder what is he up to.
-police car- somewhere in zootopia-
„Nick can I ask you something?" I said
„Yes, of course." He replied
„What've been you doing the past month or so? I mean whenever I ask you to go somewhere or something you have A) work to do or B) are extremely sleepy."
An embarrassing moment of silent come in.
*gasp* "Ok" he said, „I think it's time to tell you…"
„Today's special…..and you find out why tonight. I'll ring at you at around 6 p.m. K?
I said „Yeah….ok"
I special day… I wonder why?
-Judy´s apartment – 5:57 PM-
I still wonder what's so special about today…. Did he do something stupid? Maybe he's undercover or something? Or has a side job and has ben promoted or something? I really do wonder….
*Ring!* *Ring!*
I opened the door and saw Nick standing there but….he wasn't alone….a really small fox was with him.
„Hi Carrots." He said
I replied „Hi..." in a wondering tone
He then starts explaining „Well Judy I'd like to introduce you to this young fox lady….. Vixie Wilde….my daughter from today's day on."
Vixie added with a really silent voice „Hello Ms. Judy"
I replied „Hello Vixie…" in a worrying tone and even more wondering face
-Nick´s point of view – 15 minutes later-
She was pretty surprised. As I'd like to say „she didn't see that coming" HaHaHa
I've been visiting Vixie the past month every day. About two weeks back I asked her if she would like to stay with me. She repeated the word „Yes" like seventy times. You know how she was silent and shy at the beginning….well she opens up pretty quickly when she get's someone better known. You could hear it 15 minutes ago with Judy. She was speaking so silent, you couldn't almost hear her and now she knows her and speak totally normal. She has such a cute voice tho. I can´t resist. No chance there.
After a talk and explaining what I've been the past month doing.
I said „I was a lot of paperwork and running around offices but it was definitely worth it." And smiled at Vixie
Judy replied, „Are sure that you can handle it?"
I proudly replied „Yes, yes I'm." and smirked at her
I added „I know that the first month or two are going to be difficult, but when we get used to it, it's going to be fine." I said and smiled at her
- Nick's apartment -
I opened the door. Vixie entered first and I right behind her.
„So here we are." I said
„It's nice here." Vixie said and smiled at me
„Do you want a tour around here?" I said with a voice full of enthusiasm and a big smile on my face
„Yes that would be really nice you " she said and smiled back at me
„Well….you can call me just Nick….or daddy if you want…..it doesn't have to be today…." I said a bit unsure
„Ok daddy" she said with a wide smile on her face
Man that was quick.
I gave her a little tour around the apartment shown her her room, the bathroom, the kitchen and the living room.
„And where are you going to sleep? I haven't seen a second bed here somewhere. Are you going to sleep in the bath or something?" she said worriedly
„Don't worry about that." I said and smiled „I'm going to sleep on the couch. It's pretty comfy and I'm used to it." And I smiled again
She smiled and hugged her tail with both hands.
„So now…I think that we shall get you washed and into bed. I guess that you can take a shower on your own." I looked at her confidentially „Or should I be there with you?" I said and grinned
„No thanks" she smiled „I can do that on my own." And she laughed
When she cleaned herself up I went and put her into the bed.
„So Vixie I'm going to be awake for a few minutes. If you need an extra pillow or glass of water just ask. Good night." I said and smiled at her
I was about to leave the room when suddenly I heard her say „Daddy? Could you tell goodnight story? Pleeease."
„Well… I don't know any goodnight stories sweetheart" I said with a worried face
„Then you could tell me how you meet Judy." She wide smiled
„Well I guess that I could do that-„
„Please tell Pleeeease." she interrupted me
„Ok I'll tell you." And I smiled at her
I told her a good half of the Night Howler case. And the just as we were chased by Mr. Manchas I said „Ok well continue tomorrow" and smiled at her
„Please just tell me what did you do?" she said super hyped for the continuing
„Nope" I replied „You gonna have to wait for tomorrow. So now go sleep to make it sooner." I said and smiled at her
She quickly got covered with the blanket and lied on her side
„Good night daddy." she said while yawning
„Good night Vixie." I said and closed the door
That girl just stole my heart from my. She is such a cutie tho. I wonder what the next day will bring to us.
Yeah I almost forgot to tell you. I'm definitely going to slow down the update speed in hope that the grammar and just the whole looking of the stories going to better itself. So see ya later :)