AN: So someone actually wrote a story...gotta give props to the guy, it's different from what I have. I would have preferred a bit more words, but hey, it's probably gonna get an update that has better content than what I publish...(This chapter was written after re-watching the SAW series.)

Story Start:


Naruto slowly opened his eyes, 'Wha-' He tried to move his hands, but couldn't. "Ah, I see that you have finally woken up..." A man standing next to a table walked towards him, "Hello, my name Rasputin."

Naruto tried to say something to the man, "Umap!" His mouth was gagged with something.
His heart started beating faster, he knew what was about to happen, he looked at the table again. There were scalpels, knives and other torture devices there, his breathing started getting heavier.

Rasputin stood next to Naruto, the blond was tied to the floor with shackles that negated his powers. The older man stepped on Naruto's arm, "This is the first time, that I have seen such a young fellow in the army..." He lowered his head closer to the boy's face, "I'm curios, how did a child like you manage to kill thirty mages of the alliance?" He tilted his head, as if waiting for the boy to answer, "Well, it doesn't matter, we have plenty of time to talk later..." He pulled out a knife from his pocket, "For now, I will do god's bidding..."

Naruto's eyes widened, 'KAGUYA! I'LL KILL YOU FOR THIS!'

The man brought the knife closer to Naruto's exposed back, then slowly inserted it into his skin. Naruto violently shook, trying to stop the pain, but it only made the knife cut deeper. The man kept cutting until he managed to remove a handful of the boy's skin. "Don't move boy, god has told me to prolong your judgment...If you keep moving..."

The man grabbed Naruto's face, "Ah, now I remember..." Naruto tried to scream as the man started cutting lines at one side of his face.
When the man was done, there were three whisker like marks dripping with blood from Naruto's face, "Yes, YES! That is how you are suppose to look like!"

He forcefully turned Naruto's face to the other side, "Now for your other cheek."
Naruto had tears streaming down his face, the salty liquid going into his open wounds, 'STOP! STOP IT!' He could only groan out of his gag, as the man cut another three lines down his face.

Once the man was done, he stood up and looked at his handy work, "Yes, now you no longer look human."
Naruto's body started thrashing around when the man went back to peeling his skin, the boy tried to pull on his restraints but he could do nothing, he was powerless, this body was weak, he was too weak to do anything.

Several hours later

The man had finished skinning all of the boy's back and legs, his muscles were visible and bleeding. He stroked Naruto's new facial wounds, "Tell me boy...Do you hate me?"

Naruto was shivering, his back, and legs had just been skinned, but he kept a glare on man, trying to convey the amount of pain he would inflict after getting untied. Rasputin did not like how the boy was looking at him, "It seems that you still have some fire in you... Let me help you put it out."

He walked to a corner of the room and from what Naruto could hear; pulled a lever, then water started dripping on Naruto, *Plip- plip-plop -plip...*
Rasputin opened a door, "I'm going to sleep now, I hope you enjoy your sleep." And just like that, he slammed the door shut.

Naruto stayed quiet on the floor, the water kept dripping on him, 'This is nothing... I'll get out of here, I'll bust out and I'm going to hurt you so much...'

With Tanya

Tanya had not yet made it back to HQ, she didn't have any gear that she could use to fly. She was near the mountains that separated the two nations at war.
'I'm almost there... I just need to make it to the mountains and then fire a signal...'

She was walking with a slight limp, she ran her fingers over a small scar on her forehead, 'That idiot almost killed me!' Naruto's self-explosion caused pieces of debris to hit her forehead and chest, 'I probably have a cracked rib because of you...'

Tanya had been running for over forty hours now.

Next day, with Naruto

He was shivering, there was water mixed with his blood all on the floor, he couldn't sleep and he couldn't think with the never ending dripping of the water from the ceiling. *Plip- plip-plop -plip...* The cuts on his face had stopped bleeding a few hours ago, they were going to be scars.

He had been going in and out of consciousness because of the blood-loss, 'How long have I been here... it's probably only been a couple of hours, but I feel like it's been days.'

The door opened and Rasputin came back in, "Hello my friend! Did you have a good dream?" He looked at the shivering boy, "...well, I had a beautiful dream, and god spoke to me again, god has told me to punish you some more!"

The water stopped after the man pulled the lever again, "Today, I have something special... I want you to meet my little friends..."
He put a cage of rats in front of Naruto's face, the rodents squeaked as they clawed at the cage.

Five more men came into the room, "Is this the boy?" Rasputin nodded his head, "I want him to lay on his back."
Naruto watched as the men loosened his chains from the wall, 'This is my CHANCE!' the moment one of his chains became a little loose, he reached for the gun strapped to the man's waist, but his arm was stomped down by another guard, "Do you think we are stupid boy?" He started squeezing Naruto's neck, "You killed a friend of mine! And now you'll pay for your crimes!"

He lifted Naruto by his neck and flipped him over. Naruto winced when the hard wet floor hit his back, his lack of skin on that area caused the pain to grow.
"That will be enough." Rasputin ushered the men to go outside after making sure, that the boy was tightly secured to the floor again.

"That wasn't very nice, you should never try to grab another man's gun." Rasputin walked to the table and grabbed a bucket, "I'll have to discipline you..."
He pulled out a couple of rats, put them into the bucket and then placed the bucket upside down on Naruto's belly, "My little friends are very hungry you see, so you'll help me feed them." He them pulled out a metal rope and tied the bucket to Naruto's abdomen.

Naruto could feel the rats on his belly, they were scampering and scratching anything, trying to get out of the bucket. Rasputin tilted his head, "Did you think that was it?" He grinned, walked to the table and brought some coal and a lighter, he placed the coal on top of the bucket and lit it on fire.

Slowly the bucket got hotter, and with it, the rats inside got more frantic with their scratching, it got to the point where the rats started biting Naruto's belly, trying to dig into his flesh and escape the heat. The boy started convulsing, trying to get the bucket off of his body, the rats were eating him alive. But the bucket stayed in place, Rasputin held it there with a pair of thick gloves. The screaming of rats mixed with Naruto's groans of pain echoed.

With Tanya

She had just been rescued by a group of soldiers, at the moment, she was sitting in a tent with the soldier's commanding officer.
"Has any word from my battalion arrived yet?" The officer turned his face to her, "You seem to be in a hurry, I did not expect you to go back to the field so soon..."

Tanya looked into her cup of tea, "I have an important rescue mission to conduct, I can rest after the mission is complete." She had violent thoughts about killing all the ambushers, 'I'll make them pay for that ambush... I'll hunt them down like the animals they are!'

A man ran into the tent, "Sir! I have a message from Second Lieutenant Vicktoriya!"

With Naruto

After almost an hour of the rats digging into his flesh, he had finally passed out. But his sweet release was short lived as his face was sprayed with ice cold water.
Naruto jostled back to reality, his body wasn't being ravaged by rodents anymore, but they had torn through a lot of his kin on his abdomen.

His eyes widened, 'There!' Just for a moment, familiar black markings had appeared on his belly.

The man had also noticed it and dropped the knife he was holding, "That-" He pointed at the boy's abdomen, "-It was the mark of the demon!" He covered his ears for a moment, contemplating something, "I-" He looked around the room, "I need to kill you right now!"

Naruto's wounds started healing, in front of the man's eyes, "DEMON!" The man stumbled back and knocked a few tools off of his table, "I must end you!"
Naruto's skin had almost fully come back and his eyes gained slits, his nails slowly grew and became sharper.

The man started knocking things out of the table, trying to find something. "My knives! Where are they!?"
Naruto was now pulling on his restrains with new monstros strength, Rasputin finally found his knives on the floor and grabbed one.

The floor started cracking as Naruto pulled on his shackles that were embedded into the cement, "I am doing god's WORK!"
The man stabbed the knife into Naruto's chest.

The boy stopped pulling on his restrains, Rasputin grinned, "HAHA! I'VE KILLED YOU! YOU DEMO-" His throat was split open by Naruto's sharp nails. The boy was enveloped in a red cloak of energy. One by one, he yanked the chains out of the ground.


End.


AN: Sorry for the shorter chapter, it was actually twice as long, but...you know when you're writing and you don't save it and like after an hour and a half of joyous writing, you click on the save button, but then it says, couldn't connect... yeah.
I had to re-write the first half of this shit, and now it just looks like nothing but torture porn.
Tell me if I should delete this chapter and just re upload a better one in a couple of days, or if I should write the second part and upload it in a couple of days.
Fuck it all, I'm going to bed.