Comments:
Yeah, same, I like Izaya and Prussia duo, I'm just saying it's bad for everyone who tries to mess with them (;
-Silver
Let's hope no one TRIES to mess with them(*cough cough Asano*)...
Naes151:
looking good can't wait to see what happens when last order turns up at the school
You read my mind… I'm thinking about having Last Order be kinda like Kiyoko from Karma has a what?!
RedOmega:
PLS UPDATE! I WANNA SEE MORE! OMG!
Kk
Guest:
This chapter was ok but the scenes were quick and not very in depth. because of how it's presented the characters seem one dimensional and somewhat flat to me anyway. You might want to try and flesh out the characters more try to show what they are doing instead of telling us then changing to another scene. For instance in the scene where Nagisa is helping Accelerator up the mountain you could have explained how much trouble it was and what happened during the trip to the classroom like say Accelerator nearly tripped and fell several times or his cain got caught in a whole and he spent a few minutes trying to get it unstuck with Nagisa's help he cussed like a sailor Nagisa's ears turned red and Karma fell down laughing at how vulgar Accelerators words were. Then there was the scene with the class from the main campus for one thing yes it is sometimes easy for Accelerator to get angry however he only ever gets that angry anymore unless Last Order Yomikawa or Yoshikawa were hurt he is mainly just annoyed at everyone usually. In that scene he wouldn't even bother with those idiots he would have just ignored them and moved on if they didn't take a hint then he could just give them a death glare or insane smile. I hope this helps you I can't wait till the next one.
Thanks for the feedback! It helps a lot. I will try working on making the character's more in depth.
Accelerators P.O.V.
I glanced at the woman standing next, smoking a cigarette. Just a few minutes ago, she was giggling and hugging Koro-sensei. Tch. What a joke. I went through my mind on what happened so far. Wait. Karma had seen the batteries. What a pain… I could feel Karasuma-sensei's eyes studying me, but I payed no attention to him. Instead, I watched our new sensei out of the corner of my eye. She's a professional assassin, huh? I smiled. Maybe this assassination thingy is more fun than it seems. I had had a chance to look over her file with Karasuma-sensei. She had great beauty and a fluency in ten different languages. Her top mark goes to infiltration. Not bad. She started to leave. Karasuma-sensei and I watched her.
"If you want to keep up appearances, you'll have to play teacher," Irina Jelavic looked at us with a mixture of smugness, disdain, and disgust.
"This job will be over before that happens," she strode out of our watching post. Karasuma-sensei sighed.
"Accelerator, when will you explain about your name and your… necessities?" I grimaced. Karasuma-sensei looked at me with a half-amused expression.
"I'll tell you in due time, sensei,"
"Alright then," I moved around him to walk to the teacher's lounge.
"Where are you going?" I whipped around and smirked.
"I need to make a call...alone,"
"*sigh* go ahead…" I turned back and kept walking towards the room. Once I entered, I dialed a number and lifted the phone with my left hand.
"Hello?"
"Yomikawa, it's Accelerator."
"Accelerator! Is something wrong?"
"Tch. People are starting to ask about my name and my electrode."
"That is a problem…"
"What do you think I should do about it?"
"It's not too bad if the secret gets out…"
"What the hell does that mean!"
"I'm saying that… You are permitted to tell E Class about your past and current situation,"
"What about the rest of the school?"
"It's best if you keep it secret from them."
"Ok then…"
"I gotta go!" Click. Great. Looks like I'll have to tell my class. I don't know now whether to be happy or sad. As I walked out of the room, I saw Karasuma-sensei. He knew something was up.
"Who was that?"
"I just spoke to my… guardian. I'll be telling the whole class during English the answers of your concerns."
"Well then." Karasuma-sensei walked past me towards the door that led outside.
"Oi!" I whipped around. Karma was standing a couple of feet in front of me, smirking.
"What's going on?" I asked.
"Heh. Bitch-sensei has some men plotting something. It's time for English or as she calls it 'study hall'," I groaned. Karma laughed. We walked side by side into the classroom where half the class already was. Once everyone else filed in, we started our 'lesson'. Really, it was just us sitting there and the bitch conspiring(XD that's one of my vocab words). I want to touch her. This time when I'm on guard. I want to change her blood flow and kill her. I smiled to myself. This was an assassination classroom, after all. Wait, what am I thinking?
"C'mon, Miss Bitch, are you teaching us or what?" Maehara questioned.
"Yeah, Miss Bitch,"
"I mean you are a teacher here, right, Miss Bitch?"
"Quit your "bitch"ing!" Bitch-sensei sighed.
"Accelerator, your P.E. coach said you had something to say to the class," Great. I walked to the front and stared at the classroom blankly. I sighed and started. (I get kinda (more) OOC around here, so sorry)
"I've been question a couple of times on this, so I guess I may as well answer. First, I guess I'll start with my name… I've been experimented on by scientists my whole life because of my esper abilities-"
"Esper abilities?" Nagisa question, eyes growing wide, "I didn't know those actually existed."
"You know about them?" I asked. Nagisa nodded.
"Aren't they kind of like scientific magic?"
"Yeah, anyways, I have an ability called 'Accelerator' hence my name, which can do numerous things. I forgot my actual name, though. As for my crutch and stuff, I had to protect someone close for that. There was a project called the 'Level 6 Shift Project (At first I wrote Shit project XD)' where if I killed 20,000 clones, I would become a level 6 esper. That kinda failed, though and I had to protect one of the clones. That's basically it." No one spoke, so I returned to my desk.
"Yeah, whatever, you're just a kid," Bitch-sensei replied.
"Tch. What a bitch," I muttered. I got a nod of approval from Karma.
Bitch-sensei had tried to kill Koro-sensei, but that had failed easily. At least she found out what type of a teacher she has to be. Now she actually teaches.
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