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Chapter 8: Regenerate/ Rewrite
"Min, Min! Min talk to me what do you want me to do?" Mercury panicked as he pulled he and his sister, soaking wet out of the Lake once their parents had run off.
The space suit lay slashed and full of bullet holes at the bottom of the lake.
Minerva coughed up water and blood groaning as her body began to glow.
"Oh thank god she's regenrating!" Mercury pushed himself back and took cover as the great force of energy exploded from his sister. When it had dispelled she was no longer a gangly teen of reddish blond straight hair with brown eyes and pale ghostly skin. Now she was curvacious with lots of black curls that spiraled all over and were very long. She had ruby lips, tan skin, seemed even taller, and when she opened her eyes they were a bright emerald color.
"Min?" Mercury blinked, "Wow..."
She slowly sat up rubbing her head and looked at her new curls. "Finally got mum's curls then...wrong color though..."
"You're gorgeous...you...your absolutely gorgeous!" he grinned.
"Down boy. Let us not forget you are my brother," she smirked.
"Oh please. I'm merely complimenting your first...well second body. You should have good fun with it. This is your River Song form I gather. A hot one," he smirked.
"Cheeky young doctor," she smirked and expelled energy from her mouth groaning in pain, "And I'm still cooking. Get me out of here before someone finds us."
"Right." he nodded setting off the manipulator.
"Impressive new face brother," Minerva grinned looking at her brother after he had regenerated.
He had just died, as it were, when they had gotten into a little battle with some Homo Reptila for a bit of sport.
"I thank you," he bowed. "We look more like twins now," he observed looking at his face in the mirror she was holding up as he fixed his hair.
He now had dark brown hair. It was short with a bit of fringe hang over his eyes much as the new incarnation of their father they had see in Utah.
Mercury's eyes were bright green like his sister's and he had a nice tan as well. He was the same height as her and had a sturdy build, but was still on the thin side. He was glad of that it made crawling into tight spaces, for sneaking up on the enemy easier.
"Well shall we start the real plan now then? Enough with Madam's plans?" Minerva flicked her long mane.
"Indeed sister. Let's start rewriting mum's past!" He grinned typing coordinates in his manipulator and took her wrist as a new plan began to unfold.
Tick tock and all too soon,
You and I must die.
Tick tock, goes the clock,
He cradled her, and he rocked her,
Tick tock goes the clock