AT farmhouse
Nivam: mom hum log abhi vacations se aaye or aaj aapne phir farmhouse ka plan bana liya. Lagta hai aapka dil nahi bhara ghum ke.
Navya: nahi bhai actual me aaj kuch special hai isliye yaha aaye hai
Nivam: kya special hai
Aaditya: tumhare rishte ki bat ki thi 1 jagah pe to vo log aaj yahi pe milne aa rahe hai
Nivam (feel akward): ye aap log kya kah rahe ho, mujhe nahi dekhna koi ladki, aapne bina mujhe bataye kese decide kar liya
EVe: itna gussa kyu ho rahe ho, tum to koi decision le nahi rahe the to humne bula liya and agar tumhe pasand na ho to mana kar dena
Navya: bhai 1 bar dekh lo suna hai vo sunder hai, aapke profession se hai, and acchi family se belong karti hai
Nivam: tum chup karo, kuch samajh bhi raha hai tumhe
Navya: kyu aapko koi or pasand hai to bol do
Nivam (with nervousness): aisi koi bat nahi Suddenly they saw a car stopped at main gate. Its Shreya sachin and purvi
Nivam: ye log yaha pe
NAvya: VO actual me help ho jayegi na or sachin ke aane se tumhe support bhi mil jayega
SAchin: kese ho nivam to ready ho tum
Nivam look toward shreya. She was looking beautifull in red dress. He lost again in her. Sachin asked again.
Nivam (came reality): kya yar, kaha phasa rahe ho mujhe. Tumhe malum tha to mujhe batana to tha
Sachin: kyu tumhe to shadi ki jaldi thi na.. meri shadi me to bola tha na tumne...
Nivam: mazak kar raha tha me...
Shreya look toward navya and she was feeling irritate and tried to avoid her.
EVE: vese sachin kah raha tha use bhi shadi nahi karni thi and aaj to vo purvi ko chodne ka nam hi nahi leta hai
Nivam: uski bat alag hai or meri alag.
SAchin: don't worry. vese aapko kuch help ki need hai
EVe: pahle sabko aane do phir
Shreya sat a chair and think about herself: mujhe kyu bura lag raha hai, kyu itni becheni ho rahi hai... is navya ko me tolerate bhi nahi kar pa rahi. Aaj phir aisa lag raha jese sab kuch kho rahi hu... kyu...
NAvya: hey shreya! Kuch soch rahi ho
Shreya (with a jerk): sorry! Vo me washroom hoke aati hu. And she asked root of washroom and went toward it
NAvya: mujhse bat kyu nahi kar rahi ye. Even trip pe bhi ye mujhse jyada bat nahi karti thi... meri hone wali bhabhi is tarah avoid karegi mujhe..
Purvi: bad me batati hu tumhe iska reason bhi. Then they all discussed
Nivam: me aata hu 2 min
Sachin: kuch kam hai kahi bhag mat jana
Nivam: yar bus karna. Aage hi bahut pareshan hu .
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Nivam went to batroom side, Shreya standing there beneath a tree.
Nivam: kya hua. Aaj to washroom hoke bhi ja nahi rahi ho and us din jungle me washroom nahi tha to pahle dundna tha.
Shreya: vo me kuch soch...
Nivam: don't worry yaha pe sab safe hai tum ja sakti ho
Shreya (with frustation): nivaaaaaam please, sorry i mean sir... vese aapko navya ke sath rahna chahiye na abhi. Aap ke liye to aaj bahut bada din hai
Nivam: navya ke sath kyu?
Shreya: kyu? uske sath shadi jo fix ho rahi hai
Nivam (shocked): tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai... me navya ke sath shadi kyu karuga..
Shreya with irritate tone: special jo hai aapki life me
Nivam: o madam. Vo special nahi rahegi kya meri real sister hai vo . pahle meri mom and ab meri bahan... tum sach me 1 bar doctor ko dikha do
Shhreya: bahan... ye aap kya..kah rahe...
Nivam: o god. Ab tum ye mat kahna ki tumhe malum nahi
SHreya: sorry, i m really very sorry, mujhe sach me nahi malum vo... sorry sir
Nivam: itne dino se tumhe malum nahi
SHreya: nahi. Mujhe laga ki vo aapki Girlf... mujhe itne dino se aisa lag raha tha, mujhe laga ki aap usse pyar
Nivam laughed: ya pyaar to karta hu but as a brother.
Shreya, in mind (after thinking about purvi): purvi tujhe to me chodugi nahi...to nivam to phir aaj kon aa raha.
Nivam: mujhe khud ko nahi malum par mujhe shadi karni hi nahi hai jo bhi aa raha ho usse...
Shreya: kyu
Nivam: kyuki mujhe aisa lagta hai ki me ab kisi ko pasand karne lag gaya hu
Shreya (again felt sad): kon- kise
Nivam came closer to shreya: tum sach me janna chahti hu
SHreya with some nerviousness: vo...
Nivam: tumhare hisab se kise aana chahiye meri life me
Shreya: mujhe... mujhe nahi malum
Nivam with a dare: agar me tumse shadi karnaa chahu to. shreya look toward nivam with wide eyes
Nivam: Kuch kami hai mujhme,
Shreya: aisa kuch nahi hai. aaj aapko dekhne ke liye aa rahe hai or aap ye sab bate...
Nivam: tum kya chahti ho shreya,
Shreya: me kya matlab..
Nivam: do u love me, ya abhi bhi daya sir ki yado me rahna chahti ho..
Shreya: daya sir mere ateet ki ek yad thi... ha aaj bhi me unki respect karti hu... but iska matlab ye nahi ki aap har jagah mujhe unke sath jode
Nivam: to matlab... tum mere sath aage badna pasand karogi, i know ab tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho,
Shreya: aisa... kuc... nahi...
Nivam: soch lo varna aaj jo bhi ladki hogi use ha bol duga Shreya silenced n lost in nivam eyes
Shreya: nivaa.. vo aap ki mom ne ... unko bura lag... unhone invite kiya...
Nivam: matlab tumhe is bat ki tension hai... hone wali sas ki itni fikar... i like it... and he kissed on her cheek
Shreya: aap ye sab... abhi... she pushed him.
Nivam: again came closed to her: abhi nahi to phir kab... tum bata do
SHreya: aapki mom... nivam put a finger on her lips and they lost in each other..nivam came much closer to shreya, he hold shreya's face, shreya was feeling his breathe on her face, and after that... he kissed on her lips then shreya hugged nivam tightly...
Some time later... Nivam saprate from her: bus ab koi bhi kuch bhi kahe me us ladki ke liye mana kar duga
Sachin (who acted like entered recently): soch lo nivam kahi nuksan na ho jaye... vese yaha pe tum log kya kar rahe ho,
Nivam: kuch nahi vo bus kuch work ki bate
Sachin:. 1 tip deta hu, ab ye work ki bate har jagah pe karna chod dena varna biwi gussa rahegi tumse... personal experience hai
Nivam: biwi kyu bol rahe ho abhi shadi nahi hui meri
Purvi entered: sachin aap yaha bat Karne k liye aaye the
Sachin: oh sorry... vo log aa gaye hai mil lo chalke shreya was feeling uncomfortable
Purvi: chale shreya hum bhi
Shreya: me washroom hoke aayi tum log chalo
Purvi: me bhi tere sath hi chalti hu. Vese itni der se kya kar rahi thi Sachin and nivam went toward location.
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EVe: Are nivam aao betho ye log tumhara hi wait kar rahe the and she introduced girl's mother and father. Nivam looked around them
Navya: kyu bhai... bhabhi ko dund rahe ho Nivam saw her with a angry look.
Sachin: vese vo bhi aa rahi hai bus 2 min wait karo use kuch kam aa gaya apni friend ke sath aa rahi hai vo
Nivam: ma mujhe aap se kuch bat karni hai
Aditya: hum ab ye bate bad me karege
Nivam: mom please 1 min sun lo
EVe: excuse me! aati hu, chalo kya kahna hai...
Nivam took her one side and say: mom mujhe ye shadi nahi karni hai me kisi or se pyar karta hu
EVe acted like shock: ye bat tumhe pahle batani chahiye thi. Ab in logo ko mana karna
Nivam: mom please
EVe: thik hai me mana kar deti hu in logo ko.. tumhari khushiyo se bad ke kya hai mere liye...
EVe came and say: sorry aap logo ko bura lagega but mera beta abhi shadi nahi karna chahta to aap log ye bat...
Girl's father: ye sab kya hai sachin, purvi ne kaha tha ye log khud rishta jodna chate hai par ye sab
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Shreya and purvi came there... and shreya shocked to saw her parents
Purvi: uncle 1 min.. aap bat suniye...(toward nivam) nivam sir aap sach me is shadi ko aage nahi badana chahte
Nivam: purvi ye sab tum ne decide kiya yar pahle mujhse puchna to chahiye tha
SHreya again shocked... and then she turned to their parents: ma papa! Aap log yaha pe kya kar rahe hai
Nivam also shocked to heared this: ma papa! Matlab
SHreya: ye mere mom dad hai but in logo ko yaha pe kisne bulaya
SAchin: ye log apni beti ka rishta leke aaye hai... but afsos nivam ko ye shadi hi nahi karni
SHreya and nivam both feeling akword ... SHreya: matlab
Purvi: matlab, me to soch rahi thi ki nivam sir tujhse shadi karna chahte is liye mene uncle aunty se bat ki but yar unhe ye rishta manjoor hi nahi
Nivam: aisa kuch nahi hai purvi, vo with a nervious tone mujhe koi pareshani nahi is rishte se. Ab mom ka itna man hai to mana kese kar sakta hu
Navya: ahm ahm. Mom ka man hai ya tumhara sidhe sidhe bolo,
Nivam: tum chup karogi.
EVe: and shreya tum...SHreya nodded with a shy smile.
Purvi: wow is bat pe to muh meetha hona chahiye
Sachin (slowly with shreya and nivam): tum logo ne to muh pahle hi mitha kar liya hai na
Shreya (with wide eyes): sir aap
Sachin: tum mere ghar pe sab dekh sakti ho to me kuch nahi dekh sakta
Shreya bent her head...nivam confused...:iska matlab
SHreya: bad me bataugi
Nivam: tum log har chiz bad ke liye kyu pending rakhte ho
Purvi: ye dheere-2 kya bate chal rahi hai...shreya sabka muh to tujhe mitha karwana chahiye vese and she turned and hold the sweet's tray but suddenly she wobbled and hold a chair...
Sachin: dekh ke chalo... but before sachin complete his sentence purvi fainted and fallen down. SHreya's mother held her... and tried to wake up her
Shreya: ise kya ho gaya
Sachin: 2 din se tabiyat kharab thi but is exitment ke karan rest bhi proper nahi kiya and upper se bureau or womensera ke pending kam, shayad is karan ye sab
Nivam: hume ise pahle doctor ko dikha dena chaiye
NAvya: abhi to acchi lag rahi thi achanak se behosh kese ho gayi
EVe: sachin shreya tum log ise leke jao. Hum log bhi aate hai
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And after some time in car purvi regained consciousness, purvi: kya hua, hum log kaha ja rahe
Shreya: tumhe doctor ke pas leke jar he hai,
Purvi: me thik hu mujhe kya hua. are hum log farmhouse pe the and sweets baki thi
Sachin: ye sab bad me hota rahega
Purvi: but meri bahut iccha thi sweet khane ki hum log phir se chalte hai.
Sachin: pagal ho 1 mithayi khane ke liye hum log phir se chale
Purvi: ha to itni khushi ki bat hai ... mithayi to banti hai
Sachin: hum pale doc ke pas chal rahe phir dekhte tumhari mithaiya
Purvi: sachin but mujhe pahle sweets khani hai, abhi khani hai samjhe
Shreya: kya paglo jesi jid kar rahi hai
Sachin: uske pagalpan tumne dekhe nahi abhi and they reached hospital
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Purvi: me kahi nahi ja rahi me bilkul thik hu... and mujhe icecream ya sweet kuch khana hai hum log pahle kisi shop me chalte
SHreya: pahle doctor ke pas chalte phir chalege.
Purvi: shreya, u know mujhe kitni solidly iccha ho rahi..
Sachin with angry voice: ab bus karo purvi. chup chap andar chalo... bahut ziddi kar li
PURvi's eye filled with tears. Purvi: shanti se bhi bol sakte ho ye bat
SAchin: sorry baba... ander chalo, 1 bar checkup karwa lo phir chalte hum log. ok They entered
Suddenly tarika bumped them. Tarika: are tum log yaha pe kya kar rahe ho, and purvi vo tum to shreya ke sath..
Purvi: tarika... shreya or nivam dono ne ha kah di hai...
Tarika: wow sach.. Congrats shreya.. is bat pe sweet to banta hai
Purvi: vohi to me bhi yahi kah rahi but ye log mujhe sweets ki jagah dawaiya khilane ke mood me hai
Tarika: matlab
Shreya: behosh ho gayi thi ye farm house pe...
Taarika: kya, tumhe sach me pahle doctor ko dikhana chaiye
Purvi: me thik hu thodi si thakan ki vajah se ye sab. Faltu ki tension le rahe ye log
SAchin: mene appointment le liya hai 5 min me number aa jayega.
Purvi: dekhna kuch nahi niklega report me
Sachin: ya we will see. After some time sachin and purvi went inside dr. Cabin. Tarika and shreya stay outside and waiting for them
Doctor check purvi and asked her for UPT test purvi confused... and suddenly she realize about her missing period time
After some time, they get positive report. Purvi was feeling very happy
Sachin: kya hua kuch tension ki bat to nahi hai na
Dr.: tension ki bat to hai... responceblity bad rahi hai aapki, inka pura dhyan rakhna padega
Sachin: me samjha nahi
DR: she is pregnant but phir bhi 1 bar blood ka bhi sample le lete hai report aane par sure ho jayega...
After exit from cabin, oUT SIDE Purvi hugged sachin tightly and she started to cry
Tarika: kya hua, tu ro kyu rahi hai
SHreya: sir sab thik to hai na
SAchin: ya sab thik hai, mene pahle bhi kaha tha na shreya, isko rone ki adat padi hui hai .
Purvi with wipe her tear: Sachin please
Tarika: kya hua sab thik to hai na
PURVI (with open smile): ya. Sachin pahle mujhe ghar jana hai phir bat karege
SHreya: abhi to tujhe sweets khani thi na
PUrvi: ya ghar chalo sabko khilaugi, hum log sab sath me khayege .
SAchin: ya abhi hum logo ko ghar chalna chahiye
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At sachvi home:
Tarika shreya sachvi enterd home and purvi saw her family also sat with all other members
Purvi (with a surprise): ma, chachu aap log kab aaye US se
PM: tu hume bhool gayi par hum log nahi bhule
Purvi: me aap logo ko nahi bhuli hu
PF calling purvi: purvi beta, mujhe maf kar do, mene tumhe hamesha rulaya
Purvi: papa aap ye kya kah rahe hai, ,mujhe aapse kabhi bhi koi shikayat nahi rahi (looking toward her chachu): chachu papa thik to...
Purvi's uncle: puri tarah to nahi but phir bhi ab inme kafi had tak progress hai...
Sachin touched all feets: vese aap sab log sahi moke pe aaye. Abhijeet, daya and devki entered in hall
Abhijeet: hume malum pad gaya, shreya or nivam ki shadi fix ho gayi
EVe: humne sabko bata diya hai sachin
SHarda: vese sachin purvi ko kya hua Eraji bata rahi thi ki...
SAchin: ma vo thik hai, vese abhijeet sir shreya wali news ke alawa bhi 1 or good news hai
DAya: tum konsi good news sunane wale ho fir
SAchin: actual me sir aap bhi mama or fufaji dono banne wale ho.. ma aap dadi...
PurviM: sach me. Matlab me naniiii... Purvi hugged her mother and say: yes
nidhi (purvi's sister): wow its to good . me masi banne wali hu
TArika and shreya: or hum bhi and they hugged purvi tightly
sanchi: matlab ab to 1 sath badi party organize honi chahiye, ab is ghar me mujhse chote logo ki team bhi ban rahi hai...
Sharda took nirvi in arm and say: Aaj mera pariwar purvi tarah se khushiyo se bhar gaya hai
Shreya's mother: to ab jald se jald shreya ki sagai ke sath sath or bhi moko ke liye taiyariya shuru kar deni chahiye
Nivam: bhai is khushi ke moke pe 1 acchi si pic to ho jaye... and sabke muh bhi meethe hone baki rah gaye hai
Jayant (with sweets plate): me hu na, mujhe pata tha sab log bato me lag jayege or mithayi ka arrangement koi nahi karega
Saanchi: tum ho na in sab kamo ke liye, to hum logo ko tension lene ki kya need... and all laughed
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AFTer whole day celebration at sachvi room
PURVI sat on sofa with closed eyes, SAchin (sat beside her): kya hua
PUrvi: bus kuch nahi us pal ko yad kar rahi jab hum logo ki shadi tay hone wali thi and me kitni tension me thi
Sachin: aaj vo sab kyu soch rahi ho
PUrvi: bus aise hi soch rahi hu, us din agar me mana kar deti to aaj itni khushiya rahti kya mere pas
SAchin hugged her: are baap re... but ab kuch nahi ho sakta ab tum inme phas chuki ho or ab to bhagne ka koi scope bhi nahi hai
Purvi: vese sachin aap ko kya chahiye beta ya beti me soch rahi hu nirvi hai hamare pas to 1 beta hona chaiye
SAchin: mujhe to kuch bhi chalega, kyuki me to next chance bhi lene wala hu is bar jiski bhi kumi rah jayegi next time uski kumi dur kar dege
Purvi: kitni lambiiii planning chal rahi hai aapki
Sachin: kum se kum 4 or jyada se jyada... Let me think
Purvi: shut up and she hug him tightly... and they both slept in each other arm with a dream of new journey...
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After one month all celebrated shreya's marriage celebration... and first time purvi got a chance to tease shreya..
After marriage, In nivam room..
Purvi (slowly to shreya): sachin or mujhe dekha tha na tune... 1 sath... ab dekh teri first night pe kya hota hai
Shreya: kya karegi tu
Purvi: bach ke rahna aaj kal secrate camre lage rahte hai kahi par bhi... malum hi nahi padta..
Shreya: purvi tu aisa kuch bhi nahi karegi
Purvi: ab bolne se kya hoga.. ab to sab setting ho chuki hai... vese tune bhi mere pics liye the, video banaye the,,, ab mer bari
Shreya: pleasseeeeeeeee.
Tarika: kya hua kya bate kar rahe ho mujhe chod ke
Purvi: vo humne iske room me jo camra lagaya she winked tarika.. uske bare me bat kar rahi
Tarika (act): ooooo haaaa...vese ab to tera room me rahna riski hi rahega shreya...
Purvi: ha na yar.. phir chahe tu aaj 1st night mana ya kabhi or..
Sachin, Navya and nivam came inside... Shreya saw nivam and she thaught something
shreya: nivam! aap janna chahte the na purvi ke dar ke bare me... aaj me yahi story sunati hu tumhe bhi, navya ko bhi... . bada maza aayega...and mere pas bahut sare pics bhi hai... navya tumne to inki shadi ka bhi 1 bhi pic nahi dekha na.. me dikhugi.. pure detail me and she saw purvi with evil smile.
Purvi: bahut blackmail kar liya tum logo ne mujhe... and she came closer to sachin... sachin was looking her with confusion... and all shockedddd...
purvi tightly kissed on sachin's lips... and then sachin also held her and they shared a passionate kiss
EVE entered and shocked. She knocked the door. Sachin and purvi was seprate with a jerk
EVE: mujhe laga navya akeli andar hogi to use nikal dugi yaha se... par yaha to puri team hi...
tarika: vo bus hum ja hi rahe the... beeech me kisi ne live movie on kar di to ruk gaye dekhne ke liye
Purvi: ho gaya na...ab koi dar nahi.. chahe jitna bol lo tum log...
Sachin: chalo ye sab mere liye to or accha hai and all laughed
Tarika: vese shreya... ab tujhe darne ki koi jarurat nahi tujhe to live demo bhi mil gaya ki kya karna hai... all the best
NAvya: abhi pura demo kaha mila...
EVE: bahut ho gaya besharmo... chalo bahar ab
All went toward outside
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Nivam: so madam... demo ko replay kare ab
Shreya (with wide eyes): kya...
Nivam: vahi demo jo sachin deke gaya abhi and he came close to shreya
Shreya (stopped him): ek minnn. Vo
Nivam: vo kya...
Shreya: tarika or purvi ne shayad yaha camras fit karwa rakhe hai
Nivam: to isse tumhe farak padta hai
Shreya: kese nahi padega... i think pahle hume pura room check kar lena chahiye
Nivam: or puri rat ke maze bigad dene chahiye
shreya look at one glace to everywhere..
Nivam: mere pas iska bhi solution hai
Shreya: kya Nivam turned off all lights..and shut down all curtains and windows .
Shreya: nivam...
Nivam: ab koi bahana nahi and he held her in arms... and laid down her on the bed... and it's happened... (what wait a min...)
purvi and navya's plan was successfully happends.. a alarm clock rang... nivam wake and stop that alarm... and he again move toward shreya... suddenly a second clock rang..
Shreya: aap kitni clock rakhte hai room me...
Nivam: 1 hi... ye kaha se baz gayi and he started finding that clock... after sometime he found that clock beneath the bed...
Nivam: now over... ye kisi ka mazak tha shayad... shreya was understood something... nivam again came close to her.. shreya was looking all side..
NIvam: jane do na.. ab nahi bazegi.. and he kissed on her lips... but they again disturbed by another alarm clock... now shreya's mood was more disturbed she think: purvi ki bacchi... tujhe me chodne wali nahi hu
And after midnight... they collected many clocks... nivam: jeena haram kar diya... vese ek idea or hai mere pas
SHreya: mujhe nahi sunna koi idea... neend bhi nahi lene de rahi ye alarm clock...
NIvam open the room's door, looking everywhere... and he held shreya in his arm and they went toward roof...
SHreya: yaha chat pe kyu leke aaye hai..
Nivam: isse jyada romantic place or kya ho sakti hai... koi alarm clock nahi hai yaha pe...
Shreya saw him...she want to say something... but nivam locked her lips and they shared a kiss and start their new life on the roof...
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AFTER 7 and half month
Purvi suffered with labour pain... sachin held her hand tightly... The team of doctor was undergoing his delivery...
Outside all team, purvi's and sachin's family waiting for good news... devki, sharda sat on the bench with nirvi and 12 day old baby...devki was also delivered a baby girl before 12 days...
After sometime all heared a crying voice,
Doctor came outside: congrats its baby boy... all cheered and hugged each other...
Daya: to ab sabka muh mitha karwa diya jaye...and he feeded everyone with sweets...
Inside wardroom..
Purvi saw her baby's face and started to cry..
Sachin: purvi ab nahi... ab bus khushiya hi khushiya hogi rona bilkul bhi mat
Purvi saw that little baby hold her finger...she hugged him tightly.. kissed him... and started to feeding her...
*Sachin: iske bad mera number...
Purvi (with wide eyes): shut up sachin... sochna bhi mat... is bare me...
SHARDA entered room with nirvi...
Nirvi ran toward purvi, and said: mumma, mela bhai hai
Sachin: yes sweet girl tumhara bhai hai... and ab tum ise bhi rakhi bandogi
Nirvi sat beside purvi with sachin help... and kissed her little brother... and sacvi hugged with both kids..
All entered room and wished them...
Tarika: vese purvi... ab shreya bhi isi line me aane wali hai
Purvi: sachhhh Shreya nodded with shy...
Purvi: wow ... chalo accha hai...ye khushiyo ka silila chalta rahega... ab And trio hugged each other. And all was discussed about their future,...
its a new starting for all...
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Want to know more about shreya-nivam romantic life after marriage... daya-devki's emotions and romance, sachvi's some more struggle scene (after marriage)... then read my all OS which one i update after 2-3 days... thanks friends
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Angel7811
Update soon
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Karishma
Awesome... What about water park romance...
I tried to update a OS on this theme... thanks to suggest... may be you can see abhirika romance also there..
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DivaNims
Hope ki purvi ki icha jaldi puri ho jaye :-D
Its happend ... thanks to review me for all chapters
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katiiy
Very nice
Thanks... i know you are dareya fan... but still you read my whole story... love you so much
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Luv duo ND purvi
Nice b waiting for devya os.
Yo can read this after 2-3 days... thanks to review me
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.REaD
again a sweet chapter...
shreya- nivam's fort scene ... muhh
LOL sachin.. sachin is over concern for her big sister...
ABHIJEET diolog: suraj ulti disha se nikla... just loved it...
really sachin's daring... OMG... (poor purvi)
devki is pregnant... i want more scene on devya...
Purvi pregnancy track in one chapter no way yar...
please expand your story
waiting for purvi's plan... and OS too...
shreya ko realize karavana plz... ese hi shadi mat karvana...
i want to say more and more.. but i can't describe my feelings...
plz will you start writing on season 2 of its life... LOL
What can i say to you... i also can't describe my feeling towards you... love you so much for brief review
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More chapters on nivam and shreya
You can read more about nivam and shreya in OS... which one i update some time later
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karan
It's nice...
Thanks to review me for each chapters..
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tina
Can you please write that shreya doesn't realize her feelings towards nivam
I tried some of their... but if you want i tried to write a OS on them..
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aash vin
nice chapter
aur waiting next chapter
thanks to dear to suggest me lot of things... love you so much.. thanks to review me..
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mansi
Soooo sorry for late review:) AWESOME chapters;)
Its ok dear... mere liye yahi bahut hai ki aapko story pasand aayi..
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Sree
Fantastic work dear. If possible please add some deviki and Daya love scenes. Thank you for such a beautiful story.
Thanks to review me... and thanks to like my story... i update some OS on daya devki after few days...
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Thanks all guest and silent readers user to read my story and thanks to review me ... and sorry if i FORGOT someone...
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AT last..
THAnks MY SIS Mona , BITTu,.. and manshree di... and pinki jiji to appriciate me... love you so muchhhhh