Okay, I've been away for a while, and I can explain. Two words: manufacturer defect. I originally thought it was a virus, but was out of town for a bit, so I had to wait until I could have it sent into the shop, where it was for a bit until it was sent back, saying that it was indeed a defect. I sent it to HP, taking a week, they had it for two, sent it back, which took a week, and here we are.

I've gotten a few reviews saying that this story isn't the most original, and I agree more and more as time goes on. So, I've come to a decision: I will be redoing this series from the beginning, pretty much a more original take on things rather than just giving Tsukune the Puzzle.

With that being said, I have a question: do you want Yugi to remain as the protagonist? I'd personally want to go with someone like Anubis or Paradox, both of whom would have better arcs than the more fleshed-out Yugi and Yami.

I'll keep this up for a while – probably a couple of weeks – so give me some feedback, if you please. If not, I'll flip a coin on most of the stuff.