Chapter 1: A Deadly Promise and Meeting Someone
Hey guys okay as I said, this is the first chapter of my first story; hope you like it. And if there is some mistake don't hesitate to tell me either by reviewing or by PM. And sorry for the delay.
Okay so enough with the explanation, let's get to the story.
10 Years Ago:
Pain, a lot of pain. That's what he's feeling right now. Both physical and emotional. Just as he was soaring through the night sky, he remembers it. Every bit of it…His Tribe…His Parents…And Her. Jennifer. That is a name he'll never forget ever, not in this life. All this happened because of that one bird. That bird destroyed his life and stole everything from him. EVERYTHING. Love, care, friendship; you name it! 'Someday I'll find you and I'll have my revenge. I swear to the one who created Me.'- is the last thought before he went inside his hollow for a night's sleep.
Current Time:
The rays of the sun shined down at his face and he seemed to get annoyed of it. 'Ugh, stupid sun! Can't rise up a little late?!' Thinking so, he draped his wing over his head and tried to go back to sleep and he was successful…well somewhat. "Help me!"- A girl's scream was heard and that's all to wake him up. Fast as lightning he got out of his nest and looked around to see what's going on. He saw a female macaw more specifically a female Spix macaw, being tied to a tree and was being tortured by three more birds. Hyacinth macaws, he noticed them.
He swopped down quickly and landed behind them silently. The other macaws didn't sense his presence and was continuing their 'work'. So, he decided to take action and he said in a harsh voice, "Don't you think it's a bit unnecessary to wake someone up like that?" Hearing his voice the three birds turned around and backfired, "What a little pipsqueak like you talking about? Want to go to sleep, go back to your mama and sleep peacefully. Mama's boy!" they mocked him and began to laugh. The girl that was tied to the tree screamed, "Help me, please stranger!" "Shut up bitch!" said one of the three Hyacinth macaws. When he heard that he felt his anger rising and said to them, "Don't you know that it's really bad to torture a girl like that?" "Huh? Who are you to teach us?! Now get loss before we – "HELP ME PLEASE!" The girl screamed again. "AAHH! Shut up you whore! You are hurting my ears!" said one of the Hyacinth macaws and kicked her in the belly. And a painful groan came out of the girl's beak. THAT was the last straw, he rushed forward and quickly grabbed the one's foot who kicked the female macaw and said in a cold voice, "Don't ever touch a girl like that ever again!"And he slammed him to the ground and threw him to the nearby bush. A low thud was heard. The other two were shocked. But then "GET HIM" Shouted one of the remaining two Hyacinth. And they rushed forward and*BAM* a punch came to one of them in the face knocking him out instantly and the other still trying to hurt the stranger with no luck. "AAAHH, I'm going to kill you stupid macaw!"- was all he said before a kick came to contact with his face. "UGH"- a grunt came out of him and the next thing he knew *BAM*, he was sent flying to a tree by the spin kick he got from the stranger knocking him out instantly. Now all this was over, the stranger calm down and his tensed body relaxed visibly. He turned around to the girl who was watching the entire thing happening in front of her with awe. "You okay?" he asked with a small smile in his face and freed her from the ropes. "Yes and thank you", said the female macaw facing him. "No problem."-he said. "So what's your name? And you're quite a fighter I can see that clearly. Oh by the way my name is Jewel."-said the female noticing that for a bird of his age, he was quite muscle. "Thanks for the complement and my name is Blu"-came his reply.
There it is guys. First chapter is done. How did I do? Good? Bad? Awesome? Waste of time? You tell me. And if there are some words missing don't be angry with me since I don't know why this happens every time I try to type something. Maybe laptop is damaged or something I DON'T KNOW! ANYONE have any explanation? Well Anyway, and sorry for the short chapter guys. It's because I am new to this kind of thing so yeah that you understand.
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