(I don't own the cast of Bleach or Kuroinu. Only the OC that I own)
Hey everyone, Happy Halloween from yours truly. I had finally finished remaking the first chapter of The Shinigami of Eostia. Took me some thought on how to make it good, but hopefully you may like it. I added a new character in replacement of my previous one. My new character is an apprentice to the very High Elf that was taken by Volt. Hopefully she will be to your liking. As for The Nova Slaying Shinigami, it's nearing it's end with the 15th Chapter. Just need more time to finish. Also, in this story, Seishin has a new uniform that will be added into The Nova Slaying Shinigami as well as having a new hollow ability; compliments from Nico from Percy Jackson and The Olympians. As for this story, I had taken some bits from my previous attempt and added into this one. Anyway, I know it seems like a rough start for this chapter but hopefully with some of your suggestions, I can help make this story better. Please no bad comments. Thank you...
Anyway without further ado, here's chapter 1's remake of The Shinigami of Eostia. Hope you like it and have a pleasant and Happy Halloween. Stay Gold, everyone.
The Shinigami of Selenus
Chapter 1: Summoned From Another World
It's been over a month since Volt, leader of the Mercenary squad, Kuroinu had taken over all of Eostia. One by one, they took over each part of the land; from the Dark Elves castle to each of the districts. ...and both the Queen of the Dark Elves and the Princess Knights of Chivalry led by Celestine was fallen to the very group, and broke them in; both mind and body. During the month, Volt met with a mysterious wizard and joined in the group. In exchange for the women pleasuring the wizard, he cast a spell on each of them so their libido and urges are ten times as stronger than a regular human and made sure they won't ever get pregnant; making them the perfect sex slaves.
During the month of endless pleasure, a female wearing a black hooded cloak was spying on what Volt in his new castle watching all of the girls pleasing every man outside the castle walls. She looked down at them in disgust, every lust-filled man pounding their man meats inside them like dogs in heat, with the women moaning with their eyes half-closed, their pupils blank with lust, and their tongues hanging out lewdly.
"Olga, Chloe, Maia, Prim, Claudia, Alicia, Kaguya, Ruu Ruu...and even you, Teacher." The woman said. "One by one, you all were seized by that man's grasp. That bastard is going to pay for this. ...for all that he and those Mercenaries had done to corrupt this land!"
While she gazed down at the town villagers, two men from Kuroinu appeared on the same roof spotted the cloaked woman. She felt something tingling in the back of her neck and turned to see the men from Kuroinu. She drew her sword out and glared at them.
"We've been looking all over for you." One man said.
"Captain Volt wants to see you personally." The other man said as the two drew their weapons out.
"You can tell Volt to kiss my ass if he wishes to see me himself." The cloaked woman said. Little did he she know was that the leader overheard it all as he appeared behind the two commanders from the stairway. He chuckled and smirked as he took her insult to account.
"I am here now." The leader said as he stood over the cloaked woman with his arms crossed. "You wanted me to kiss your ass, well I'll be happy to do so once I break you in. Then again, it wouldn't be a first to break an elf. ...especially if it's the High Elf's apprentice."
The girl growled as she removed her cloak and revealed herself: A young girl with light brown hair and hazel eyes glaring at the new ruler of Eostia. She wore a two-piece silk garment; the top covered her 86 centimeter bust while she wore a frilly skirt that stretched down to her upper knees. She held out a dagger to defend herself "Tell me why trash like you are defiling the women and corrupting everyone in this land?"
"Corrupting?" Volt laughed at the very word as he stared down at the girl in front of him. "I have simply turned this land into paradise. A place that every man would love to experience their lustful wishes coming true."
The elf felt disgusted at Volt's dream; so disgusted that it made her feel like vomiting in front of Volt as a sign of disrespect. She immediately noticed that Volt summoned two orcs in an attempt to capture her. She tightened her grip on her weapon as she prepared herself.
"...and this is simply the beginning." Volt continued his monologue. "First Eostia succumbed to our rule, soon the lands near this place and soon the entire world will soon fall to us. Every woman on this ball of dirt and water will fall to every man's wishes and make their perverted dreams come true. You will be our stepping stone to a whole new world beyond Eostia. Surrender and be part of my lifelong dream, girl."
"Not a chance in Hell!" She spat back.
"I had hoped you'd say that. That's why I won't let you escape." Volt snapped his fingers and made the orcs and the men to capture her. The elf fought back by swiftly decapitating the orcs' heads then she left a deep gash on both of the men's chests. The moment they were all down, she fled as fast as she can. Volt smirked as he saw his new prey fled in a flash.
"She won't be far… I can still count on that." Volt said with a smirk as he walked ahead with more of his minions following him.
Elsewhere, the elfling arrived to an empty spot in the alleys. She panted hard from exhaustion despite it all, relieved that she's away from Volt and his minions. She took a deep breath and opened a portal in front of her. Just as she was about to go in it, she was zapped from behind by the male wizard. He was a young man with short brown hair. His green eyes gazed down at her through the gleam of his glasses
"My name is Kin and I am Volt's most powerful sorcerer. No escapes from his watch while I am here." The wizard said; his smug smile worn as he watched the young elf struggle to get back up. "When he encounters a new woman to add to his collection, he intends to catch her. So give up now and make this easy on yourself."
"Well, then… Volt's gonna have to wait, because I am not his type!" The elfling uses all of her strength and fired a blast of blue flames at the wizard, damaging him a little. While his guard was down, she used what's left of her strength in her legs and ran for the into the portal before it closes.
Moments later, she arrived to her domain; it was a large chapel-like building with the inside painted completely white with multiple paintings, plants and furniture. When she arrived, she was completely out of breath and low on strength."Even with my strength, I can't manage to save the girls or my senpai; especially if either Volt or that bastard wizard was in my way. I do need someone to do it for me, but who?"
The woman walked over to her fountain and projected a visual scene in real-time from the water. She saw projections of a powerful young warrior. She saw how courageous and generous the young man is in his battles and during his rescue missions. An idea came to her mind as she finally made her decision.
"With his power, he can lead Eostia to a land of peace once more!" The young elf nodded before taking a deep breath as her body began glowing in a sky blue aura. "Bui i rod plural rodyn -o i coe a aiwenor, tul- nin hi rochon -o caun!"
(Shibuya, Tokyo, Japan; Seishin's house)
It was a quiet Saturday night at the beginning of Summer and Seishin was at his home as usual, after taking some time off from his job as a Soul Reaper. He had on a sleeveless undershirt and a pair of sweatpants. His hair was also tied back until it was only a long ponytail. Though he doesn't really need it, despite the large decrease in Hollow activity falling all around Shibuya and Karakura Town, he kept his combat pass in his right pocket.
"Nothing says 'relaxation' than watching Toonami on a Saturday night and eating Popcorn," Seishin said as he turned on the 80-inch plasma widescreen. He checked the time and saw that it was 11:57. Seishin went back to the kitchen and took out the popcorn from the microwave.
"Finally a few days with no Hollow activity going on." Seishin walked past the time as it says 11:59 while holding a large bowl of popcorn. "Just me, some popcorn and a good seven hours of epic anime awesomeness. At least Yoruichi, Rangiku or either of the Treseras won't be around to tease me with their hot bodies…" A thought of those girls came to his head; each of the girls teasing him with their harem clothes, their voluptuous bodies and some of them with their kissy-face lustful looks on their faces. Seishin immediately snapped out of his temporary imaginary zone and gasped a little as he dropped his bowl of popcorn until a set of hands caught his bowl mid-fall.
"Those girls are still haunting your mind?" Seishin's hollow appeared beside him in his astral form. He chuckled at Seishin's out of breath state as he put the bowl down and helped him back up on his feet.
"It's like they are everywhere!" Seishin exclaimed as he finished catching his breath. "Those girls kept on teasing me with their looks, their endowed chests, and their choice of clothing."
"Can't really blame them, you've always been a sucker for big boobs, kid." His hollow smirked as he crossed his arms until Seishin gripped his hollow counterpart by the collar and started shaking him like a rag doll.
"I CAN'T HELP IT! I LOVE THEM!" Seishin cried until he and his hollow half sensed a disturbance. The clock struck 12:00 midnight; the television and everything else were suddenly turned off. The two looked around for a second until they felt a gravitational disturbance; the two started floating while all the electrical appliances started flickering on and off repeatedly.
"Seishin! What's going on?" His hollow called out as the electricity began to howl in a high pitch and an oval pillar of light surrounded the two.
"I don't know, but one thing's for sure… we're going for a ride!" Seishin replied as the two vanished in a bright light. The two flew through a long blue and black void in lightspeed.
"There has to be a reason that we're being transported." Hollow continued. "Someone has to be the one transporting us, but who?"
"Well, we're about to find out." Seishin replied as the two saw a light at the end of the tunnel; it grew brighter and brighter as they got closer. His inner hollow quickly returned to his Inner World while Seishin came out the portal and landed face-first on the hard marble floor. As he got back up; groaning from the hard impact, he gazed at the building he's in.
"Where am I?" Seishin wondered.
"You're in the Chapel. I transported you here." He looked up only to see the very elf-ling as she stared down at him. When Seishin eyed her chest and uniform, she simply smiled and helped him up.
"I've been waiting for you… Glad you dropped in, Seishin Samayou." The girl greeted.
"Who are you and how do you know my name?" He asked her, looking at her with a stunned look of confusion.
"Well. let's start things off with that question." She began to explain. "I was looking for a warrior to help with this situation and when I saw you and your past-actions, I am rather impressed."
Seishin was shocked that she was there at every moment he had done. It was like she has eyes in every exact spot he's at, at every exact moment it happened. A simple thought came to his mind and with it, Seishin asks… "Who are you?"
"My name is Aaliyah; I'm an elf and an ascending apprentice of High Elf Celestine Lucullus." She introduced herself and kindly bowed before the young man.
"Celestine?" Seishin was puzzled as he was new to these people and the place he's in. He then ceased his confusion and resumed with his question in mind. "Where am I exactly? ...and what's going on?"
"Well, before I can tell you what's going on now, I'll tell you what happened a very long time ago. Aaliyah placed her hand on his shoulder and closed her eyes as everything around her went black. The next thing that happened, the two were floating in the air. Seishin turned to the her as she began to explain.
"It all happened several hundred years ago in the Western Border; the land of Eostia, when a war had occurred. Humans fought against the Dark Elves for control of the lands. Just recently, a small special task force named Kuroinu were assigned to help with the war. Apparently they grew cold hearted and joined forces with the Orcs for a coup et tat. They charged into Human Territory and took over their areas; not to mention the Dark Elves' domain. Before long, they claimed Independence over the lands and everything in the Newfound areas, as for the females… they made them their personal slaves for service…"
"Who are the females in each of the areas?" Seishin wondered. "Those women you're talking about must be of that much importance for you and the people here."
"They are called the Knights of Chivary," Aaliyah answered as she brought up the projections of each of the women; nine in total.. "Alica Arcturus, Prim Fiori, Ruu Ruu, Kaguya, Claudia le Van Tyne and my teacher Celestine."
"I see… and what about those last two there?" He asked about those two dark elves despite the blush on his face. The black haired one wore a crop top that exposes her cleavage, her visible nipples and her stomach, a black g-string thong, long purple thigh high leggings and black high heels. The blonde red eye dark elf who has her long hair tied in a ponytail in the back wore a crop top; like her queen, but connected to her knee high garterbelt stockings. She also wore a black g-string bikini around her waist and brown finger gloves on her hands.
"The black haired one is Olga Discordia, she's the leader and queen of the Dark Elves," She continued. "The other one next to her is her right hand assistant, Chloe. Those two were the first to succumb to Kuroinu's coup et tat."
Seishin's glare hardened and his fists tightened as he saw every event that the young elf had explained. "...and who is the person responsible for all of this?"
"His name… is Volt." She replied as she brought up a projection of the man. He is a mid-age muscular man with scruffy hair, bushy eyebrows with a scar on the end of the left eyebrow and stubbles on his chin. He wore armor on his legs and left forearm. Along with the spaulder on his left shoulder with the Kuroinu insignia on it and carried a large broadsword on his back, he wore a dark crimson cape over his clothes "He's the egocentric leader of Kuroinu I mentioned, he's the one who sided with the Orcs, corrupted their nation, as well as the males defiling the women. That damned beast..."
Seishin saw the saddened look on Aaliyahi's face; seeing her like this made him feel mad. As he looked at Volt, his glare hardened as his fists tightened up with his fingertips attempting to penetrate his skin.
"That asshole's gonna pay for what he did." Seishin growled as he glared at Volt. His right hand enveloped in crimson sparks of electricity. Aaliyah saw his anger rising as his hand was forming a Cero. She took his hand in hers and calmed him down. "Where are the girls right now?"
"They are all currently in Volt's Castle." She answered. "I think it's better to rescue each of them at night. That's when the castle is at its weakest, most of the guards have left for the night."
"You must have been there multiple times to see that happen; or to see your teacher again, huh?" Seishin was right about what he said; he then turned to see Aaliyah looking depressed as she saw her teacher the last time she was there. She had been turned from wise high elf to high libido sex slave by Volt, his men, and his followers. Tears were streaming down her face as she remembered seeing that unfortunate event. Seishin hugged the young elf to cheer her up.
"I'll get your master and everyone else out. I promise…" He said which made Aaliyah look up at him. A warm smile was worn on his face as he looked down at her.
"Thank you…" Aaliyah replied as she wiped her tears away. She then handed him a few scrolls; each of them with a picture and description of each of the girls; including Olga and Chloe. Seishin nodded as he took his combat pass out. "What you need that for?"
"You said that you needed a knight. Well, I am not just any swordsman… I am a Shinigami and I needed my combat pass to do this. Observe…" Seishin held his combat pass tightly and a light blue glow was shown, stretching out to every part of his body below the neck in a second he appeared wearing his new shinigami uniform; thin dragon skin armor gauntlets on his forearms and forelegs. He also got black leather defender fingerless gloves with red scales for studs on each of his knuckles, thick white lines in the shape of a Y ran down from the shoulders down to his waist with the mark of his combat pass in the center of the Y-shaped line, and a sleek white spaulder appeared on his right shoulder with the Soul Society's deeply insignia etched on it. He also wore a dragon skinned cloak tied around his waist and ran down to an inch below the knees. His zanpaktou; shown worn around his waist, is in a black sheath with gold mosaic markings like vines wrapped around it. Aaliyah gazed at Seishin's new appearance with stars sparkling in her eyes
"W-Wow… I am glad I picked you of all fighters!" Aaliyah blushed a dark red after she looked at his new appearance. Seishin chuckled, sporting an embarrassed blush.
"T-Thanks…" He replied, just then, a question came to mind. "Once I rescue one of the girls, where should we take them?"
Aaliyah smiled as she grabbed Seishin and teleported the two to a secret base. Seishin looked around and saw how spacious the place is. He was about to ask her where they are at, but the young elf quickly answered.
"Maia and some of her past teammates built a secret cabin in the far side of the woods; originally as a base for the others in case if the Chapel has invaded. We'll use that to keep the girls there, safely."
"Okay then." Seishin nodded as he took a look out the nearest window. He tightened his fists as he saw the sun setting over the horizon. He then went to the door before turning to Aaliyah once more.
"I have faith that you can bring peace to Eostia, Seishin. Please bring my teacher and my friends back." The young elf pleaded.
"Don't worry, Aaliyah, I won't let you down. You summoned me here after all." Seishin winked at the young elf before he left the cabin. He noticed that nighttime is fast approaching so he used his Flashstep and leap through until he arrived to the borderlines of Eostia. As he looked down at the corrupted land, his inner hollow appeared in astral form.
"You seemed confident about this." His hollow said while crossing his arms. "Are you sure we'll see this through?"
"Aaliyah summoned us because she needed our help, hollow." Seishin replied. "We can't let her down. We will save them and this land, and bring an end to Kuroinu. Are you with me?"
The hollow smirked as he heard what he wanted Seishin to say. He chuckled calmly as he placed his hand on Seishin's shoulder.
"That's what I want to hear from you." Seishin's hollow replied with eagerness. "Time to make this fairy tale become a reality! Ready to use our new ability to get there faster?"
"Shadow Traveling? Well, we haven't fully mastered it… but what the hey, we'll test it out along the way. Let's go."
Seishin took a deep breath and connected with his inner hollow. When he opened his eyes, his eyes were replaced with the same eyes when he hollowfied. Seishin took a leap of faith and jumped off the tree, diving head down towards the now-already darkened ground. As the sun slowly sets over the horizon and nighttime was approaching, Seishin dove into the tree's shadow; en route for Volt's Castle.