This is my fist story. I have a good idea for a pertemis but I want to know how you think I should start it.
Guardian of the hunt
Becomes god and trains under her
(I've never read one of these but I've heard of them) Hermes and/or Apollo prank them where they can read each other's thoughts
New ideas
Well that's' enough of the A/N let's get the story started
Chapter 1
Percy POV
Wise girl
That's all I could think about as I was finishing my last test to prove my worth to Athena. It was some of the easiest and hardest things I've done in my life, but it will all be worth it to see Annabeth's face when I propose. It's been three years since the giant war and I trained my hardest for the first year and then I did test for Annabeth's hand in marriage for the last two. Right now I just got an apple from a garden. I know most of you are wondering what's so special about apples. Well… These happen to be immortality apples.
Yes, the ones guarded by Laden. Now I'm going back to camp to propose to Annabeth. I just crossed camp boarders when I saw that the hunters of Artemis were here. Hopefully I didn't miss Capture the Flag. I decide to propose at the campfire tonight. When I was walking I noticed that everyone was giving me fearful glances. Wonder what that's about. "PERCY", I heard someone yell. As soon as I turned around I got tackled by a mess of black hair and electric blue eyes." Hey Thals, how's the hunt been?" As soon as I looked into her eyes I knew something was wrong. They were filled with sadness, it was then I got a sinking feeling in my gut. "Thals, what's wrong?" I asked. "Percy there's something I need to tell…" it was then that the horn sounded for dinner." Never mind I'll tell you after dinner." As soon as we sat down this new kid from the Hermes cabin got up and proposed to MY Annabeth. At first I thought he would just get rejected. Boy was I wrong.
"YES OH YES YESYESYESYES I LOVE YOU JACK" those words broke my heart and saddened me to no end. Then all that sadness turned to anger. "WHY, I WAS GONE FOR TWO YEARS GOING ON STUPID GUESTS TO PROPOSE TO YOU AND YOU. BETRAYED. ME!" It was then that I noticed that I had torn everything down and the wind was only getting stronger. Then there was 14 flashes and the Olympians stood there. Well, they stood there for about a second until I blew them back with my wind. Then I noticed Artemis wasn't affected. I tried to blow her back but I couldn't bring myself to do it. Truth is I've always had a crush on her it's just my love for Annabeth WAS way bigger. Now looking at her sparkling silver eyes I broke down sobbing, all my anger now gone. Then we flashed into the throne room and all of the gods were staring at me. Some with awe and some with fear.
"HE MUST DIE" yelled Zeus and without waiting for a vote he shot a lightning bolt at me. I stood there not trying to dodge it. I had nothing left to live for my parents even died a year ago by a hellhound. Then I opened my eyes and they widened at the sight in front of me…
Sorry to end it there couldn't really continue till I heard how you wanted to go with the story. It will get longer in later chapters, but for now. Peace out.