Okay I know I got lots of hate for the original version...
But I guess I know why...I wasn't really writing it properly...
I was rushing it all and that wasn't good!
But if you guys would just give me a chance, I'll try again.
I'll start from the very beginning from birth, to growing up, to ayakashi high school and meeting our favorite 6 guys, to entering the human world and meeting the MC!
Please give me a chance at this! I know I've screwed up!
Also, if your going to critique someone's story, please don't curse them out as words can really hurt other people and that also counts as cyberbullying which is terrible in our society.
Please choose your words carefully when 'flaming' someones story and be mature about it.
Thank you!
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Normal POV:
In the Okami Village, a young and excited Kyoga runs into the castle where his father, the current clan head lives.
Inside the bedroom was Kyoga's beautiful mother laying in bed with Kyoga's father by his side.
In his mothers hand was a small baby in a blanket letting out soft coos.
Noticing Kyoga, she smiles at him.
"Kyoga! Come meet your little brother!"
"A brother?!" Kyoga asks excitedly.
"Oh boy! Oh boy!"
He runs up to his mother's side and sees his little baby brother. He had short light brown hair and small wolf ears along with a small wolf tail that stuck out of the blanket.
"Isn't he precious?" Mother asked.
"What are you going to name him?" Kyoga asked.
"Junya!" Father said.
Kyoga turned to him.
"Junya?"
Mother nodded.
"Yes, I think it's a perfect name!"
Kyoga smiled at Junya.
"I really have a little brother..."
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ELSEWHERE:
At the same time in the Tora Village, another baby had been born in the castle.
A Tora woman by the name of Kawa layed in bed.
She was beautiful with her silky long pink hair and big tiger ears and pink tail that had black tiger stripes.
She had chocolate skin and amber eyes.
Despite just giving birth, she still had a perfect figure.
She smiled down at her child who also had pink hair and her milk chocolate skin.
"I like Tsunami! What do you think?" Kawa asked.
She turned to her husband who was the current Clan Head.
He was pale skinned with white hair and tiger ears along with a white tail with white tiger stripes wearing a green kimono along with a blank expression on his face.
"I'd like it you were to bear a boy..." he said coldly.
Kawa looked up at her lover.
"...What?"
"You need to bear a boy so that he can become the future Clan Head in my place!" The Clan Head said.
Kawa smiled.
"I think it would be a nice change for a female to run our clan!"
The Clan Head frowned at his wife.
"No! Women are to not be clan heads! It's against the rules! A Clan Head must be a male so that they can one day mate with the human with the special blood."
Kawa sighed knowing that he was right.
'I still believe that my new daughter can become Clan Head one day...' Kawa thought.
"Bear me another child!" The Clan Head said.
Kawa widened her eyes.
"What?! But I just gave birth! My body is still weak!"
"No exceptions! I want a boy!" The Clan Head said as he made his way over to his wife.
Tsunami then let out soft cries.
"Stop that! I just had a baby!" Kawa cried.
ROAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
The Clan Head had widened his eyes.
"No..."
BOOM!
BOOM!
BOOM!
These noises were followed by screams of villagers from outside of the castle.
"Oh no! What's going on?!"
The Clan Head looked out the window and widen his eyes at what he had saw.
Two Coulro Ayakashi, or clown spirits from hell!
They were in forms of large beasts who had a reputation for massacring people or possess them as their own as a means of a practical joke using gags to kill others.
The Clan Head watched as the Coulro shot out acid from flowers which caused a mother and her child to die and diminish into bone.
Elsewhere a pie had exploded in the Okami Village which had been under attacked by the other Coulro.
Another attack involved a balloon bomb that was filled with laughing gas that was released onto hundreds of Tora.
As a result they would laugh to their death.
The Clan Head growled.
"Coulro's!"
"Oh no! They're attacking our people?!" Kawa asked.
"Don't worry! I've been waiting for this very day!" The Clan Head said.
"I know how to defeat them!"
"You do?" Kawa asked.
"I told all the other Clan Head's of this plan ahead of time!" The Clan Head said.
He turned to Kawa.
"We need a vessel to seal the spirit inside!"
"But that would mean sacrificing an Ayakashi's natural born power and sanity!"
"Exactly!" The Clan Head said.
He eyed Tsunami and snatched her instantly.
"GIVE ME BACK MY BABY!" Kawa cried.
"SHE'S USELESS TO OUR CLAN! WE NEED TO BEAR A BOY! NOT A GIRL!" The Clan Head said.
He ran out the castle.
"TOWA! NO!" Kawa shouted.
It had already been too late...
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IN THE OKAMI VILLAGE:
Kyoga and his mother hid in the castle and looked out the window seeing the father facing off against a Coulro beast.
In his hands was the newborn Junya.
Kyoga's father raised up Junya in his arms as the beast roared at them.
Kyoga's father closed his eyes.
"Musho lafi duko mu nadi zho ku! Ika ruko da fla mi!"
The Coulro beast laughed crazily as it slowly formed into into mist which had been inserted into Junya's naval.
Slowly a purple 'J' tattoo with three golden spades on it formed on the left side of Junya's naval.
A crazed smile had formed on Junya's face.
Kyoga's father frowned sadly at his Junya as he held him close to him.
"I'm sorry my son...it had to be done..."
Kyoga's eyes had watered.
"...Um...brother?"
Kyoga's mother pulled him close to her.
"It's okay..."
Junya's body had jittered.
He was laughing as possession had slowly taken over his body.
Heeheeheheheheeeeeheeeeheeeeeeheeeeeheheeheee...
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BACK TO THE TORA CLAN:
The same fate had been brought upon to the newborn Tsunami who Clan Head, Towa had forced a Coulro beast to seal within her body as a 'J' tattoo had formed on her right abdomen.
Not only that but the village was damaged as many buildings had caught on fire.
Also, many lives had been lost.
Not too much of this had happened in the Okami Village as most of the damage took place in their forest.
Towa sighed.
"It had to be done...if only you were a male...I wouldn't have done this..."
Tsunami on the other hand had smiled crazily as the spirit had taken over her system.
Her body jittered as she laughed.
Towa sighed as he stared back at the castle.
"Kawa...I'm sorry...if only you were to bear me a male...none of this would happen..."
Tsunami laughed at her father.
Heeheeheeheeeheeeheeheeheeheeheeheeeheeheheeeheeeeheeeeeheeehee...
R&R! In case if your wondering, this is mostly centered on Tsunami and the rest of our 6 guys! Anyways that's all for now! I promise it will get better!