Ghost zone trouble

Chapter One

It was a normal day as in 17 year old Danny Phantom was fighting a ghost what none got was the ghost girl fighting with him. It was usually him fighting of all ghosts. Paulina was screaming at the ghost girl to get away from her soul mate. Jazz, and Sam were trying to throw off his parents aim. Dash, Star, Kwan and Mr. Lancer were hiding whether from the ghosts or the Fentons none had any idea. Tucker was distracting Valerie in order to keep her from going after Danny. Lance Thunder was doing the news of the ghost fight. The ghost was stranger to Amity Park he wore a long Black covered clock that had a dagger rip in it chains floated out of the bottom of the clock dripping ectoplasm. "Why are you attacking Amity Park" Danny asked dodging an attack. "I'm not attacking it you all just feel into my trap." The ghost said taking out a watching and pressing a button on it. Swoosh. The people witnessing the fight felt a breath of cold air rush through them before they hit the hard ground. "See you around." The ghost voice floated over them. When the people looked around only four people recognized the place. "We are in the Ghost Zone. Frootloops." Danny said.

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