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A silent figure standing a little far from crowd continued staring at the burning pyre...he does still not believe it...
He was so happy...he promised to return...then is really what he told is true?
mujhe to adat hey akele jeene ki..bas kuch saal adat bigar gaya..yaar mein aj taq na kisi ki duniya mey fit hua na apni duniya bana paya..akele to rehna hoga na..
he looks at the group, everyone has tears..some are harshly crying..but still he was always alone..
pehle ma papa mujhe leke duniya nahi basaya..to mere liye bhaiya they..per jab bhabi aur unke bete ko leke unki duniya basi kab na jane mey uspey unfit ho gaya to tab Abhi mil gaya..uski duniya tha maaji ko leke per maaji ki na rehne per hum dono ki duniya basi..aab use apni duniya wapas mila
He again turned to the pyre..
Strange na, we come to earth alone..goes away alone..but each day trying to be with someone..even when we know we are alone we pretend to be with someone..we smile but with someone cry..that too with someone.
But at the end we are alone..in stacks of wood..
sab ke liye ager uparwala apne apne duniya basade to begana koi nahi rehega na..
He knows senses don't remain after your heartbeat stops but still if thers any pain left everyone has to face alone
and this person..he was forever alone..alone to struggle alone to live alone to learn how to smile alone to make others live life..and again alone to cope with loss alone to get the fact that he has no right on any happiness and now alone to go..far..far away..
He was no way related to HIM, first time he saw that lad he thought to himself "yea aur cid?"
but with passing years seeing HIS every sensitive side, his tears..witnessing his fear, tension everything now today staring at HIS pyre he is bound to think "iske bina cid?"
a sigh came up..
Everyone thought HE was vulnerable sensitive in mind, emotionally weak..THE SENTIMENTAL FOOL
but no HE is not, a person who never had a true smiling life brought smile to other faces..it's a job of tough person
a person who himself don't have a single memory which brings happiness made so many memories fr someone else
a person who was himself all alone in dark of loneliness pushed someone to light, walked along..but today he again went far in the darkness..and there's still a light fr the other one
but if this is to be his fate it can happen before why now, when he started dreaming?
yaar jab Abhi bahar hota tha dil hi nahi krta tha gher jane ki..aab to wajah hogi..Abhi daantega to koi bachane wala hoga..kisise sikayet kr paunga..kabhie kisi case ki chlte Abhi senr inspector Abhijeet ban jaye to koi hoga na
when he was smiling from the core?
bhai to saalo pehle miil hi gaya tha..aab ma bhi..
when he was seeing a new hope?
pata hey maaji ne baat ki mujhse..kaha wo intejar krega
when a new morning was waiting fr him to see he closed his eyes?
per ek bar wo ajaye..dekhna wo khud kahegi..mein bahut acha beta banunga..maaji Abhi se bhi jyada pyar kregi mujhse
was everything that late? that everything finished?
The thoughts broke as he felt someone calling him
He looked around hearing "Aditya.."
He came back to proportion found ACP sir calling him..he looked at this person..today he cried..his eye still have remains of tears…
His mind whispered "Daya tum ne kaha tha tum akele ho..nahi dekho..nahi ho.."
But a distant voice buzzed in his mind
waise mera bhi ek bara sa duniya hey..yea cid duty..and mumbaiwale..jab taq dimaag aur baju mey taqat hogi yea duniya mey na to mein unfit hounga na isse nikalna hoga..smjhe..
"yea bhi sahi..sab snr inspector Daya k liye roye…uss Daya ke liye thori hi.."
His thought broke as he heard "Abhijeet kaha hey?"
He cleared his throat "jee wo paani ki taraf gaya hey…bulata hu.."
He started moving to that direction, suddenly realizing he still hadn't shed single tears….being a doctor seeing death is nothing new..maybe that's why..or only a brother of his friend was nothing to him that's why?..brother? then why the choice came up..he also encouraged to make a choice…
Taking a deep breath he reached the big lake like area…
Abhijeet was sitting on the steps, with his legs dipping in water resting his chin on the knees staring at the calm green water body
Adi didn't called him but sat silently
Abhijeet feeling someone looked up..his eyes puffy red..face very swollen and a small drop of blood on lips..
Adi had seen him biting his lips hard while lightning the pyre..
Abhijeet looked at Adi..
Adi is seeming too much silent..but he hadn't cried a bit..but was thinking something from the time Daya..no Daya's body..yea yea body..was carried to the house
Abhijeet sighed years ago he had gone through same emotions but god showed some mercy on him that time but this time
He sighed
He didn't demand something much...yes he asked Fr miracle...about his mother but not at this cost
Abhijeet looked down at his hands
a person was lying lifeless on the floor of the deck with patches of blood around
Abhijeet can easily recognize the person even from far...he rushed to the person and knelt beside him...turned him...the HQ agent and ACP sir was standing silent
yes Abhijeet's guess was correct..it's his life..lying lifeless
Abhijeet with trembling hands touched Daya's face..he didn't cry didn't shout
just softly touched all the wounds and closed his eyes tightly
he didn't understand what ACP sir told him..when the hearse arrived..
The only thing he remembered is he said "sir..Daya ko gher le jana hey..wo gher..intejar kr raha hey"
his mind didn't register any other thing
Adi looked at Abhijeet, and then again at the water
seeing the hearse Adi loosened his grip from Abhijeet who falls down on the ground feeling numb..
Adi didn't looked at Abhijeet but continued looking at the hearse from where a body is brought out.
Abhijeet's mother came out hearing the doorbell and found her son sitting on floor with his back attached with door
Adi moved forward to ACP sir "sir..yea.." his eyes caught the glimpse of the face and a shocking voice came up "Dayaaaah"
Abhijeet's mother came forward "Abhijeet kya hua tum aise kiu baithe ho kya hua..tujhe chot lagi..haan dikha na.."
he stared at his mother and cried out loud.."maaah..mera bhai.."
Abhijeet looked up tiredly said "sb ho gaya?"
Adi just nod
Abhijeet sighed
Adi still looking at the water said "ACP sir bula rahe hey"
Abhijeet didn't buzzed
both were silently sitting when Abhijeet said "akhir kasur kya tha mere bhai ka?"
"sayed uske chote chote sapne"
"kaise sapne Adi..jisse usne kisiko jindegi di thi..ek awara ko gher diya tha..wo sapne gunah tha?"
Adi didn't answer
Abhijeet continued in tired soggy and frustrated tone "pata hey wo kitne chote chote baato pey khush ho jata tha..jis din pehli bar meine use shopping pey le gaya itna khush hua na ki..pata hey bacho ki tarah chote chote cheez chote chote celebration mey khush hota tha..aj to itna bara khushi milne wala tha..use thora khush to hone ki mauka de deta uperwala..(he suddenly get excited) uss pagal ko ek family ki bahut cah thi..film mey bhi ma bete ka pyar dekh k udas ho jata tha..jab jab mein ma ko yaad krta tha wo mujhse bhi jyada chup ho jata tha..aur mere hi goud mey ake ro deta tha"
he stopped took some deep breaths "Adi bhagwan ko mujhe adha khushi dena tha to ma ko lautane ki miracle hi na krta..adat dal chuka tha na mein?"
Adi looked at Abhijeet not with shock but with strange look
Abhijeet hide his face in palms and started crying hard
Adi didn't console him, even didn't touched him
Adi felt his eyes getting moist
He let the tears fall
"pata nahi Abhijeet kiu kisi kisi ki naseeb mey khusiya likhna vul jata hey uperwale"
he stopped feeling someone behind
ACP sir and Salunkhe sir was standing there with rest of team bit far
ACP sir touched Abhijeet's shoulder lightly "beta aab gher chalo"
Abhijeet control his voice "jee sir mein.."
"beta aab tum akele nahi ho..tumhari ma intejr kr rahi hogi na?"
Abhijeet sighed
"tu kaha ja raha hey..tab se ro kiu raha hey?"
"Ma mera sab sab kuch khtm.."
he broke in cry once again..resting his head on Daya's chest..he didn't get the soothing call boss kya bacho ki tarah bha bha..
But a harsh voice "tujhe isne rulaya na?haan..mein keh rahi thi mat aya yeaha..yeahapey sb bahut.."
"ma pls..chup chup kijiye aap..." his voice was too rude and harsh for her to handle
Pallabi came forward "sir aap.."
but one look of Abhijeet was enough to make shut, she looked down and slowly helped his mother to get up who is looking at her son in shock..
She led her in unable to meet Abhijeet's fiery glaze
dr Salunkhe who was holding his head sitting in a corner said in tired voice "Abhijeet tumhari ma hey wo.."
Abhijeet's eyes were showering tears but voice strong "hogi..per yea haq unhe hey nahi.."
he just turned back to his brother and softly kissed his forehead..
Till they came out of house he didn't meet her
but when they were about to move out she called "Abhijeet..tu ajayega na?tu uss din bhi gussa hoke gaya tha"
he doesn't know what she was referring but nodded with "haan ma mein ajaunga" in a really exhausted tone…
Abhijeet sighed "sir mein apne jimmedari se piche nahi hatunga aap chinta mat kijiye..aap gher jaiye mein.."
"per beta.."
"sir pls..mujhe mere bhai ki saath kuch der akela.." his voice chocked
ACP silently moved back..
Dr Salunkhe pressed Abhijeet's shoulder then turned to Aditya with "Aditya..tum.."
"hmm..jee doctor saab.."
dr Salunkhe didn't say more but moved
Abhijeet turned back.. Freddy still crying..Rajat extra silent..Sachin with teary eyes..Pankaj looking hurt..Nikhil was not in vicinity..they all are looking very sad..may be sadder than him, they didn't leave their sir
ACP sir, the stone hearted man stopping, looking exhausted..dr Salunkhe looking so helpless tired and stooping
they didn't left their deary junior..their son..
But he left his brother..he used to say he was his life but he left him..
He had promised to himself he will return his childhood..he promised he will never let him feel that loneliness again
but he is a failure
Abhijeet's mind buzzed with the happy tone that satisfied his soul so much
haa boss mein apne salo ki sari kasar puri kr lunga dekhna tum
haan Abhi promise mein ayunga, apne Abhi ki pass ma ke pass..
Abhijeet just wanted to rush, wants to feel all the loneliness he had given his brother
but he can't, now he has a liability..a responsibility
Strangely he is feeling only a sense of responsibly not love..only respect not any bond to his mother
mother..what that mean Daya only thought him, responsibility loves everything he now feels he learnt from him..he may have lost himself totally but only Daya..but now he is lost forever
he turned to Adi may be to say something
Adi was looking at the water with fixed gaze, felt Abhijeet's stare but didn't turned instead murmured "aab sayed koi duniya basa paye..yea agle janam mey..sach mey kismat ne kya kisi duniya ki layek nahi smjha per kyun?"
Abhijeet heard but didn't react
He closed his eyes saw a face with boyish grin looking at him
His mind communicated "tu mere duniya ki hissa nahi tha tujhise to duniya thi..yea to farz tha..aj taq to yea duniya yaad nahi aya..aur apni haath se jo duniya banaya wo to tu le gaya aab kya karu serf intejar..kabhie khtm na hone wali..bhai milne ki khusi ma ki jane se adhura tha aj ma milne ki khushi jindegi biraan hone se.."
Sach mey…adhuri reh jati hey kuch khushiya..kuch spane..kuch khwaishey..kuch baatein…
Hai Dil Mein Reh Gayee Baat
Jaldi Se Chuda Kar Haath
Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
and
here the story finishes..anyone feeling it incomplete sorry
but for me this is end
I will not write another chappy
so now rest u can imagine as u like..something in between lines remaining unspoken is good na?
So bye-bye readers
will try to be back soon with the alternate ending
till then take care