Hi everyone! I know this may be a surprise, but this isn't a chapter update or anything—SORRY! I'm actually here to update you on my editing. YEP, I'm actually editing for once in my life, haha.
I've only posted two chapters of the updated "AWOL" on Wattpad. I'm pretty sure it's a lot better than this version. So, if you want to read it, feel free to hop over to Wattpad to read it. (Wattpad is a little lonely without you guys, and the AR community over there is smaller than my pinkie toe *tears*)
I'm there as dalekchung as well. I like Wattpad a little better just because there's an inline comment feature, which is awesome to see which particular paragraphs or scenes you guys like the best. I also find it's easier to talk to you guys because I can comment instead of PM-ing you. I do really want to hear what you think about the edited version in comparison with the first draft!
BUT, I was wondering what you guys thought. Do you want me to post it here as well? I would prefer not to, but... yeah...
Here's the synopsis that I have posted on Wattpad:
Strange things have been happening in the espionage world. Top spy Agent Alex Rider has gone AWOL, and a new SAS soldier has caught the attention of MI6. How long is Trevor Lee going to deny the truth? (Soldiers and spies and unidentified antagonists, oh my!)
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"His options were limited. Run or die. There was no in between. If he stayed, he would surely be considered a traitor of the country, and MI6 would put him to death... It was a very good thing that Alex Rider specialized at running."
Yep, the first part is the same (I couldn't think of anything, lol), and the last part is a direct quote from the edited version. OKAY, tell me what you think!
LOVE YOU
-Alice xx