Authors Notes

"This is my first ever fan-fiction and reviews on how I'm doing in the story are appreciated. I have roughly the first ten chapters typed out on my Ipod but i will probably try to stick to a weekly update if I'm able to. On a side note the list for who is talking is used in the first and part of the second chapter but the third and fourth don't use it, while the chapters after do use it.

(T)=Twilight
(C)=Celestia
(Ca)=Cadence
(L)=Luna
(S)=Shadow
(R)=Rarity
(Ra)=Rainbow Dash
(F)=Fluttershy
(A)=Applejack
(P)=Pinky Pie
(Sh)= Shining Armor
(Sc)=Scootaloo
(Sw)=sweetiebell
(Ap)=Applebloom
(Sp)=Spike
(G)=Guard
(D) =Discord
(Dh)=Derpy Hooves
""-""=thought

Chapter 1.

As I get home from a boring day at high school I find myself alone at home. I head over to my laptop and decide instead of playing games like I normally do I start messing around with codes to see if I could make a code that can be used to create a new kind of gaming platform. The one thing I failed to notice in the code I was typing was that there was a stray letter that had been entered into the code changing it. When I hit enter to run the code I noticed that my screen started to fade out and at the bottom of the screen there was a small loading bar that was half red half blue and as it got closer to the end the red on the bar started to slope up and take over the blue. Then I noticed small cracks started to form on the edge of my screen and they started to creep across the screen in a spiral shape then the strangest thing happened, the screen started to cave in on itself. When the loading bar reached the end it was completely red and the screen looked like a 3D spiral that was caving in. I then noticed that I was being pulled towards my laptop. The next thing I know I am falling through a spiral void. When I was falling I closed my eyes in fright and then my head started to hurt like crazy and my back and shoulders felt like they were on fire.