A response to criticism
My previous chapter, not a fine piece of art was a monkey on my back I had to let go of before I could wrote anything else.
As for the Buffy lifting and the fact that I'm pathetic well, you see I didn't watch episodes of Buffy. That last season was a stain on an otherwise great series and that you can remember anything from it says more about you than it does me. (Like perhaps you might enjoy pursuing pleasures in life beyond watching old bad tv episodes and reading fanfic you hate).
Actually, if I wrote it without seeing it means I'm apparantly good enough to work for Whedon according to you so thanks :o
I truly have no idea why a Doccubus fanatic would read my stuff. I always imagined it was because it was an opportunity to cut at someone who enjoyed a ship that wasn't theirs. I do understand that in the end Bo chooses Lauren, it doesn't mean I have to like it then write mushy stuff about it. That's the job of a Doccubus shipper.
Actually, I guess i understand. It is Doccubus ish because in the (story Bo only loves Lauren, truly and madly. It's just that Lauren will lose her love for Bo. And the endgame was Valkubus.
I also let bad things happen to Lauren. I don't understand why she never needed a redemption arc on the show. She betrays and deceives people often (Bo for the Ash, Dyson for her boss, Evony who saved her life and career, dead ex regarding the Fae, everyone about her past), I don't get how easily she was forgiven.
I also know I'm not a great writer, but most of us on this site are not. It's just for fun.
I was ready to give up Lost Girl, but the push against me strikes my stubborn Capricorn soul.
I'm going to write some Valkubus smut.