What if Harry Potter acted like a normal person would when figuring out he was forced to stay with his abusive relatives? What if Harry was darker then he should be? This story Harry is a ball of anger and misery.

Harry was in his cabnit holding his eye. A large gash was over it ozzing purplish blood. This was one of the injurys he's suffered at the hands of his 'family'.

The tip of his tongue was cut for lying it looked like a snakes.

His ear was partly bit off by vermin's fat sister's dog.

One of his eyes were missing from getting hit so hard it popped out then they cut it with sizzors.

He had replaced it with the eye of a snake he killed in the back yard.

He had been repeatedly burned and hit.

Starved and forced to sleep out side.

All before he turned 8 years old.

Harry Potter had been put threw hell and it showed. He just couldn't feel anything. If he went numb then the beatings wouldn't hurt. His blood fell for what seemed like the millionth time in his life. When the blood hit the floor it started to fizzle. The red mist turned black and formed into a woman.

She was all black with red eyes About 6 foot appeared to have her hair in a ponytail and the only article of clothing she had on was a collar with a blank tag in. (Yes shes naked but there's no details in her form just the shape...perverts.)

"what is thi bidding my master?" "what? Who are you?" Harry said confused. She blinked and said "I am a shade. You have suffered greatly Harry, I wish to serve you." her voice was calming and Harry felt something well up in his chest. Harry looked at her and said "serve me? Like a maid or something?"

She giggled and said "that and more. Shades can do anything in terms of serving their masters." "can you heal my face?" she reached out and touched his face. The once open wound was now a nasty looking scar. It looked horrible but didn't hurt anymore. "why me?" "you are a strong wizard master. Your energy is filled with hate and shades sap the misery out of a wizard for sustenance. I am surprised I am the first shade to meet you." "ok I accept your services. Uh what's your name?" "shades are children who die at birth. We are too young to have a name as free shades. A master chooses their name." "how about wisp?" "thank you master." the tag engraved 'wisp' on her and the collar grew spikes. "sleep well master."

Harry woke up to Dudley jumping on stairs. "freak get up and make breakfast!" Vernon said banging on the door. Harry growled and got up. He wore Dudleys hand me downs and slept on the splintery floor. The only thing that kept him off the floor was using wisp as a pillow. He got out of whips warm chest and opened the door. The light forced him to adjust his eyes.

He cooked breakfast and half way through he was told to get the mail. Harry picked up the pile of envelopes by the door. 'bill bill bill bill hay this is addressed to me.' 'master hide it your uncle with destroy it.' Harry dropped it into his shadow where wisp hid during the day. She caught it and hid it.

They went to the zoo and Dudley was fascinated by the lions. Harry preferred the cold blooded creatures.

"come one! Move! Make it move!" "she's tired jackass." Harry said glaring at Dudley. Vernon tapped the glass "do something! It's probably just lazy." "she's nocturnal." Harry said. They left to look at the chameleons and Harry had a conversation with the snake and Dudley ran over.

"its not my fault the glass disappeared." "stay in there freak."

Harry read the letter and said "wisp do you know anything about this?" Harry said holding up the letter. "my older sister's master went to that school. It sounds nice. Much better then here master." (Her sister belongs to someone known in the wizarding world) wisp said rubbing his shoulders. She didn't like that her master had to sleep in a cabnit while those pigs get beds. She wanted master safe and that wasn't here. Harry though for a couple minutes and said "wisp we're goin to hogwarts. How am I gonna get to dragon ally?" "that I know master."

That night Harry ran away to anywhere but there.

Ok I know it's not that good but I'm trying here. Review and guess who owns wisp's big sis. any one who gets it right gets some of the ruff Draft for next chapter. answer in reviews.