NARUTO UZUNAMI THE FIRST SHINOBI
Chapter 5 : Uzushio Rebuild and Search for Uzumakis
Author Notes :
For those who don't like this fanfiction, please don't read it. Because this fanfiction will be much different from the original storyline, because that is what we called fanfiction, must have differences from the original manga and anime.
Thanks to all the reviewers for their encouraging and suggestions. Also thanks to all readers who put me or this story to their fovorites, and all of the followers
Hope all of Senpais or seniors author understand with the poor of story plot. English is not my native language so there will be many grammer mistakes.
In this fanfiction, there will be overpower Naruto or godlike Naruto with multi kekei genkais. The pairing will be Naruto/MassHarem with M rate just for safety.
This story is inspired by many of my favourites stories, so there may a few similarities there.
Naruto's girls currently : Kaguya O, Mito U, Toka S, Temari, Sakura H and Hinata H.
Disclaimer : Naruto is the property of Masashi Kishimoto-san, I only borrowing the characters for fun sake.
"Uzu Nami" : Human speaking
'Uzu Nami' : Human thinking
"Uzu Nami" : Deity or Summon speaking
'Uzu Nami' : Deity or Summon thinking
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xxx Uzushiogakure no Sato xxx
Several weeks have passed since Naruto and his family arrived at Uzushiogakure. Uzushio now have a much different condition than the first time they set foot here, a lot of new buildings have been built from the housings, shopping centers to a hospital and the village government buildings to form a complete village.
A high wall has been built around the village with the four major gates as a pathway, the north gate named Lightning gate Suzaku, south gate named Wind gate Byakko, east gate named water gate Seiryu and west gate named Earth gate Genbu. Outside the protective walls of this village has been overgrown with green trees and the most amazing thing is the whirpools as the main protector of the island has been active once again.
Naruto himself along with Sakura and Temari had left the village to seek the Uzumaki who possibly escaped the destruction of Uzushio. After their mating ritual, a little debate occurred when Naruto decided to start searching his clan members with only accompanied by Sakura and Temari.
- Flashback Start -
In that room full of love scent, Naruto looked at the six women who looked exhausted in front of him that has now completely tied to him. The prove is the existence of a binding mark in the form of a spiral seal with the kanji for 'Uzunami' on the woman's right neck. Naruto then said "Tomorrow we will begin the construction of this village and begin the searching for the remnants of Uzumaki clan who survive out there"
"And what about Nagisa, Yukiko and Konan. Are they going to come with us, Naruto-kun?" Mito asked after seeing the other was in silent.
Hear that question, Naruto then said "That's why I will just go with Sakura-chan and Temari-chan, Himes"
Silent immediately occur after the shinobi said about his plan. The six woman in front of him could only look at each other till they feel high murderous aura followed by Kaguya's words "You want to leave us here purposefully, Naruto-kun?"
Naruto has not answering yet, he has been embraced by Hinata who start to cry while saying "Di.. did you leave me here because I was too weak, Naruto-kun?"
"Right, Naruto-kun. We have to go together" said Toka who also feel sad if they have to stay on this island without Naruto.
Seeing the four woman was so sad and angry, by withholding her frustration against her husband plan, Mito then said "Maybe Naruto-kun has his own reasons and purposes. Should we listen to his explanation first, Kaguya-chan, Toka-chan, Hinata-chan"
Hearing the words from his red haired wife made Naruto smile, then the shinobi said "Do you noticed that wall with fuinjutsu inscription in the main room?". Seeing his six wives nod their head, Naruto went on said "If I made the same fuinjutsu on another wall, then that place will be connected directly to that room, Himes"
"Does that mean we could always meet, Naruto-kun?" Sakura asked which immediately greeted by the five others women with excited smile.
"You're right, Sakura-chan. I could not leave my loved ones, Kaguya-hime. And you have to remember this none of you are weak in my eyes, so don't ever doubt your own strength, Hinata-chan" Naruto said while stroking Hinata's hair who is still hugged him tightly.
When all of his wives could calm down, Naruto said again "While we gone you're going to lead this place, Kaguya-hime. Moreover, we have to start training Nagisa, Yukiko and Konan and for that I need your help, Mito-chan, Toka-chan"
After hearing Naruto, Kaguya, Mito and Toka nodded understand their husband words. Quiet for a moment then Hinata asked "And what about me, Naruto-kun? Why could not I go with you?"
"You are quite the expert in the field of medic ninja, Hinata-chan. I want you to preparing the hospital system for this village. Anyway I'm not asking you because if we meet with Konoha's ninja especially the Hyuga clan, they certainly don't want their kekei genkai outside Konoha or in other village. It mean we have to fight them, and you definitely don't want to hurt the Hyuga clan members, Hinata-hime?" replied Naruto make the former Hyuga understand.
"So when we go start that searching, Naruto-kun?" Temari Uzunami had been just silent voicing her question.
"We still have quite a long time, Temari-hime. We will complete the construction of the village and the island while started training the children". After pausing a moment and see the six beautiful woman tired face in front of him, the shinobi smiled and said: "Get some rest, Himes. We'll start working tomorrow"
- Flashback End -
That while rebuilding Uzushiogakure, Naruto also started Nagisa, Yukiko and Konan training to be kunoichi. After Naruto, Sakura and Temari leave the village, Mito and Toka continue the training. Kaguya as temporary leader of Uzushio has start preparing the village required document helped by Hinata who prepare the village health system.
xxx Nami no Kuni xxx
Now Naruto, Sakura and Temari have arrived at Nami no Kuni, the place where he carried out his first mission outside Konoha village. Actually, the three of them don't know for sure if there are members of the Uzumaki clan who fled to this country or not, but the possibility is there because this country is the nearest place from Uzushiogakure.
"We should look for information at the town center, Naruto-kun" said Temari who walking on Naruto's left side.
"You're right, Temari-chan. At the town center we could get information more easy" Naruto said without turning his head while get his hoodie on. "Let's go, Himes" and they walked toward the town center.
Arriving at the town center, the situation is very different from when Naruto and team 7 first visited this country, although the state of the country is still modest, but the economy of this country's people is quite prosperous. "Coming to this place make us remember the past, right Naruto-kun?" Sakura said who walking on Naruto's right.
"Indeed make us remember our first mission, Sakura-chan. But I don't know that is past or future now?" replied the shinobi not sure himself.
Passing in front of a tavern Naruto suddenly stopped, "Ramen.. Let's have lunch first, Himes" Naruto spoke to his two women, and without waiting for Sakura and Temari approval he immediately entered the ramen stand. With a deep breath Sakura said "Come on, Temari-chan. Naruto-kun is always eager if it come to eating ramen" then both soon followed their husband.
xxx Toshiro Ramen Stand xxx
When Naruto entered the ramen stand, the owner/waitress said "Welcome to Toshiro Ramen Stand". Once Naruto was sitting on the stand stool and both his wives have joined, the waiter approached the counter and asked "What type of ramen do you want, Mister and Madams"
Naruto who already greatly missed his favorite food immediately ordered "Make me five bowl of miso ramen please" make the waitress shocked. When she heard Sakura and Temari ordered shrimp ramen and vegetables ramen the waitress realized and immediately said, "Right, please wait for a moment". Then she went to prepare their orders.
While waiting for their order, Naruto and both his wives looking around then noticed the ramen stand customers quite crowded, even when there were finished and left the stand then shortly afterward the new visitor immediately entered.
While waiting for Naruto to finish his fifth bowls of miso ramen, Temari asked the ramen stand waitress who was surprised to see how Naruto eating "You know about Uzushiogakure right, Miss..?"
Hear the women question the waitress said "Iku, my name Iku Toshiro. I know a little, Uzushio is the island at northeast side of Nami no Kuni, but the island has been destroyed"
"Is there any of its people who managed to escape to this island, Iku-san?" she asked. But before the waitress replied, two girls who had just come in and have not had sit yet or order anything hastily left the ramen stand. With a glance Naruto and both his wives still noticed those two women redhead.
Without thinking again Temari leave the stand after them, but soon she was back again with annoyed face and said, "They are gone so fast, Naruto-kun"
"Relax, Temari-chan. Naruto-kun already know which way they go" said Sakura motioned that Naruto has used his doujutsu. Once finished paying for their meals the three of them leave the stand and disappeared to the west.
xxx West Forest of Nami no Kuni xxx
Easy enough for the three Uzunamis to track where the two girls was going with Naruto's doujutsu. Currently they arrive in the west woods of Nami no Kuni when they heard the sound of a battle.
Following the battle sound, they found an area of a clearing in the middle of the woods and there was a battle. There are two group of ninjas fighting, the first group is six kunoichis wearing white vest uniform with Kumogakure hitai-ate, the next group were three kunoichi with same redhead.
When noticed those three red haired kunoichis, it turn out the two of them are both kunoichis which they were following. First a pretty girl with long waist length unraveled hair and black eyes, she wore red kimono with white sash. The next kunoichi also with long red hair styled into a ponytail and brown eyes, she dressed in white shirt under her blue vest fitted with black pant. Their friend who seem recently joined was very similar to the kunoichi with red hair and black eyes earlier. Maybe the two kunoichi was attacked by the Kumo ninja and assisted by their other friend or vice versa, they were helping one of their friend who was attacked by those cloud village ninja.
After attacking each other for a while the three red haired kunoichis began to look desperate and jumped back away from their opponents, so that the battle was halted for a moment. When the fight stoped, there was one of those opponent with white hair said "You better just give up and come with us to Kumogakure, Uzumakis"
"Come with you and be an experiment object or to become a kunoichis factory?" response the kunoichi with red kimono standing next to her twin who also wore a red kimono and white sash as well but she has short red hair.
Hearing the answer, the leader of Kumo kunoichi said "It seem you are only chunin level ninja and will not win against us jonin. After all, you were outnumbered two against one"
"Actually. Its one on one, Kunoichi-san" the male voice said answering the Kumo kunoichi's leader words and when that voice just disappeared, the three Uzunamis has appeared next to the three red haired kunoichis.
"Who are you? Don't interfering with Kumogakure's business!" the white haired kunoichi asked and reminded at once.
"You don't need to know who we are, what matter is you have to leave this place" Temari said already unseal her giant battle fan.
"We don't have much time. If you hinder us, we will eliminate you!" the Kumo kunoichis leader said, and without waiting any longer she do quick hand seals and said "Suiton : Kirigakure no Jutsu (Water Release : Hidden Mist Technique)", and the area immediately covered by tick mist blocking their view.
The mist has just appeared when Naruto and the others heard the chirping sound of raiton jutsu attack. "Fuuton : Kamaitachi no Jutsu (Wind Release : Sickle Wessle Technique)" Temari shouted as she swung the fan in her hand that make the mist disappeared. When the lightning technique from the Kumo kunoichis will hit them. Naruto reached out as if caught it and the technique disappear in his hand, this make all kunoichis who saw it get shocked except Sakura and Temari ofcourse.
Their shocked state not over yet, Sakura had jumped and slammed her super fist to make ground split and tumbled toward the cloud village ninjas. Had those Kumo kunoichis was not dissappeared with shunshin no jutsu or kawarimi no jutsu, sure they would get hurt.
"Please leave her, Kunoichi-san" Naruto said and immediately looking toward his left. When all other kunoichis look there, it turn out there the white haired Kumo kunoichi had been pointing her sword at the short red haired kunoichi neck.
"Are you that shinobi guy? Surrender or this girl will die!" said the Kumo jonin, apparently she start to realize who their opponent is.
"We will never surrender" Naruto said then immediately disappeared, "Moreover, to let this girl die, Kunoichi-san" continued the shinobi when appeared behind the white haired kunoichi. This kunoichi have not react yet, her body had sailing toward her subordinates after receiving a kick from the shinobi.
"Futon : Daikamaitachi no Jutsu (Wind Release : Great Sickle Wessle Technique)". Temari shouted while swung her fan so that strong wind roaring toward the white haired kunoichi who still in the air and her subordinates who were still in their shocked state.
When Temari's jutsu stopped, the six Kumo kunoichis had fallen and looked suffered severe injuries. Seeing the six woman tried to rise with difficulty, Naruto said "We would be very grateful if you leave now, Kunoichi-san"
Looked at her subordinates who were severely injured and could not afford fighting anymore, the Kumo team leader looked at Naruto and the others then said, "It seem that news about the shinobi was true. Another time we met, we will catch you!". After that she and her subordinates who had managed to stand up, leave that clearing.
After the six Kumogakure kunoichis was gone. Naruto, Sakura and Temari turned to the three red haired kunoichis, the three girls get tensed and stepped back as a precaution. Seeing the three frightened Sakura immediately said "Don't be afraid, Miss. We just want to ask"
Although the three girls still don't seem to believe but seemed a little more relaxed. After opening his hoodie the shinobi said "My name is Naruto, I'm an Uzumaki just like you three. This is Sakura-chan and Temari-chan", pointing toward Sakura and Temari.
The three girl was very surprised to see the handsome face and hear the shinobi is an Uzumaki. "As I know, all of our members clan has red hair!" said the red haired girl with the ponytail.
Understand with their distrust, Naruto then said "Only my mother from the Uzumaki clan, my father from the Namikaze clan. That why, I have blond hair"
"Then, is there anything you need with us, Naruto-san" asked the short haired twin snapped. This make Naruto and both his wives smiled, then the shinobi said "We come from Uzushiogakure". Then the Uzunami tell the three red head about Uzushio's rebuild and their objectives to seek the Uzumaki clan members who survived.
Once finished hearing Naruto and his two wives explanation, the waist lenght red haired kunoichi with red kimono seem calmed down, then she said introducing themselves "I'm Ayako Uzumaki, this is my twin sister Ayaka Uzumaki and our friend Retsu Uzumaki, Naruto-kun"
Seeing her sister started friendly, Ayaka said not happy "We should not just believe them, One-san". Seeing this, the fairly calm Retsu said "Ayaka's words is true, we could not just believe them. But if Uzushio had been rebuilt, I'm sure return home is the best, especially for the children"
Heard Retsu said about children make Naruto asked "Are there any children who survived with you?"
"I'll go to Uzushio first. You two and Maruko-chan must take care of the children while I'm gone" Ayako said to her sister and friend showed that she is their leader. Ayako then tell Naruto and his wives that three of them are chunin and teacher at Uzushiogakure ninja academy, and they are assigned to save their twenty students and some civilian children when the attack of Uzushio occured.
After Naruto promised to save their students, the three girls took the three Uzunamis to the south from that clearing. Not so far it turn out there is a simple house where another girl and about twenty six red haired young girls welcoming them. Ayako introduced the girl who seemed older than herself and her two friends named Maruko Uzumaki a civilian girl, she has a shoulder length dark red hair with blue eyes and wearing brown kimono.
Ayako was at first expected to go to the Uzu island by ship or boat. But when she asked Naruto when they left, Naruto instead make a small house with his wood release and then he took his wives and the three Uzumakis inside. Naruto then writing a fuinjutsu array on one of the building wall, after the seal emitting a white light, the shinobi then tell Sakura to take Ayako to Uzushio through that wall.
During the waiting for the return of her sister and their friend Ayaka and Retsu looked tense again then the short haired kunoichi said, "If something bad happen to my sister. You will regret it, Naruto-san"
They had waited long enough when Sakura and Ayako appeared again from that wall, this time with Kaguya and Mito. Having introduced themselves Ayako then said to her sister "Immediately notify Maruko-chan and the children to preparing, we will return to Uzushio, Ayaka-chan"
xxx Uzushiogakure no Sato xxx
Once they all arrive at Uzushiogakure including Naruto, Sakura and Temari. The Uzumakis was very amazed with Uzushiogakure condition, in the children opinion even if it much different from the original village, its truly extraordinary.
Through a long discussion between Naruto, his wives and the three kunoichis who recently joined, it has been decided that the children would be given shelter in the form of apartments and supervised by Maruko and Retsu.
Ayako, Ayaka and Retsu Uzumaki had agreed to teaching again at Uzushio new ninja academy, the three kunoichis has managed to bring quite a lot of scrolls and textbooks used in the first Uzushio ninja academy. All children including Nagisa, Yukiko and Konan will also start to learn at this ninja academy.
This is the beginning of Uzushiogakure rise, hidden village in the whirlpools. May be would not take long time, the Uzunami name to stir throughout the elemental nations.
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Naruto Uzunami The First Shinobi fifth chapter is done. Perhaps this chapter kind of less exciting but this is quite important before Naruto continue his adventures toward Hi no Kuni.
Critics and suggestions always welcome. It will make the next and future chapter better. So just give reviews as you please cause now this fanfiction has been installed with fire prooping.
The next thing is, I still need your suggestions for the names of gender bend characters.
By the way. Please read my second fanfiction story Naruto Sarutobi The Hokage's Son, may be you will get interested.
Sayonara...