AN: I do not own Naruto, nor will I ever.

Welcome one and all to the revised version of The Second's Son. This has been a long time in the making and I'm really proud of this. For those of you who have read the original version, I hope you notice the changes I have made. Enjoy.

"The mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation, what is called resignation"-Henry David Thoreau

Chapter 1

It has been several years since Hashirama Senju, the Shodai Hokage, was forced to step down as Hokage thanks to the wounds he sustained in his final battle with his childhood friend turned enemy, Madara Uchiha. And it came as little surprise when he nominated his younger brother Tobirama for the position. There was little debate on the matter and Tobrirama became the Nidaime Hokage. Despite his brothers wishes for him to help promote peace, Tobirama was never that idealistic and took a slight military approach on how he governed the village. He made quite a few decisions that were controversial to most, even the Daimyo, but everything he did, he did for the betterment of his village and its prosperity.

This, of course led to repeat arguments with his brother, whose health had begun to fail in recent months and has left Tobirama angry and just a little bitter. Especially when Hashirama, in a fit of frustration, would proclaim that Tobirama could never understand how to lead the village to peace without first understanding what it is to love.

Now Tobirama is no virgin, heck, he's known as a bit of a player thanks to the various one night stands he has had over the years, but love had nothing to do with it. And his brothers words caused him to feel just a little resentment towards him. However, he will not deny he was somewhat jealous, though he would never admit to it, over the love and the bonding and the sheer happiness that seemed to just radiate off of Hashirama and his family.

That's why, at this very moment, he was absolutely stumped. "Would you repeat that?" he asked.

Before him stood his only female Anbu guard, Ocelot. Like her code name, she is a bit on the short side at around 5'3, but she more than made up for it with her bosom and hips that caused many a man (and some women) to turn their heads, and her skills with a tanto were nothing to scoff at, and her Kekkai Genkai (Bloodline Limit) froze everyone in their tracks, sometimes literally. You didn't get to become the guard of a Kage for having a pretty face, no one survived if they did. Her mask was removed so he can see the stern expression on her face, allowing him to grasp how serious she was being. "I'm pregnant," she said once more.

Tobirmama slumped back in his seat. He always knew there was a large possibility of one of his late night flings turning out like this, but never would he have thought it would be his own guard. He could remember, in almost excruciating, embarrassing, and somewhat pleasant detail how this happened.

It was just after one of his fights with his brother over how he was running the village. He had stormed away from the Senju compound back to the Hokage mansion (created by his brother with his Mokuton [Wood Release] to be the home of the Hokage) where he had proceeded to raid his liquor cabinet. When his Anbu had tried to get him to stop, he drunkenly (and very stupidly) told them to drink with him or face him in a spar. Most of his retinue quickly grabbed a glass as they knew being inebriated as he was, he was less likely to pull his punches.

So it was Ocelot who practically dragged him outside so that they could spar. He didn't pull back and neither did she. Their 'spar' tore up the grounds and slightly damaged the back of the mansion, until Tobirama managed to use his body to pin her to the ground. Her mask had fallen off by that point so he could see as the moon was reflected in her eyes. He leaned down and kissed her. And well…one thing led to another, and here we are.

Seeing how the news was affecting him, Ocelot, otherwise known outside of Anbu as Yukifuri Yuki (Yuki-Yuki to her friends), a rogue member of the Yuki clan from Kirigakure, turned to leave. "If it troubles you that much then I will leave. You will have my resignation tomorrow."

Seeing her reach for the door snapped him out of his thoughts. "Wait!" he exclaimed. He jumped over his desk and grabbed hold of her arm. "Listen to me. You are not leaving." He turned her around so that she was facing him. He swallowed, not knowing the far reaching impact of his decision. "Maybe Hashirama is right, this time. I don't know what it's like to love someone like he does Mito, or how he could feel such pride and warmth for his children. But…I'm willing to give it a chance." Now Tobirama is not a man who would beg or plead, but there was something telling him to not let her go. "Just please stay," he said in almost a whisper.

Relief flooded Yukifuri as tears started to come to her eyes. "Okay," she said before leaning up and kissing him.

Near 8 Months Later

"I"LL CASTRATE YOU! I SWEAR TO WHATEVER GODS THERE ARE I WILL!" Yukifuri screamed at Tobirama, who was right by her side, rendering him slightly deaf. He was holding her hand, trying to comfort her. Well, that's not entirely accurate. She was crushing his hand with her grip of iron and he was trying to get out of it without sawing off his hand. Another contraction and her hand squeezed harder, bringing him to his knees for a moment.

"Come on," he said as gently as he could. "You've survived worse than this, you can do it no problem."

"SHUT IT! YOU HAVEN'T THE FOGGIEST!"

"I can see the crown!" exclaimed the doctor.

"You hear that?" Tobirama said. "You're almost done."

A few minutes later and a newborn was brought fully into the world. The doctor expertly cut the umbilical cord, cleaned the newborn, wrapped him in a small blanket, and handed him to his parents. Tobirama looked on as his lover held their child. His child. He never thought he would say those words. "What should we name him?" he murmured softly as to not wake their boy.

Yukifuri held her son close to her, taking in all his details. The child was a combination of the both of them. He had Tobirama's nose, but her cheek bones. The tips of his hair was white, but the base was blue like her own. Only time would tell if his hair would stick up like his fathers or stay down like hers. He had two red triangles on each cheek similar to what his father has. Funny, considering she always thought those were tattoos. Her son opened his eyes when she shifted slightly, before closing them soon after, but she saw a near mirror image to her own eyes. She knew he would be a heartbreaker when he was older. "Naruto," she said at last. "Naruto Senju. My dear maelstrom."

"A good name," Tobirama said. He finally had a family he could call his own. But, it was not meant to be. A loud noise filled the room, almost like a scream. He peered over at what was making the racket only to see it was the heart monitor. It had gone flat. He snapped his head back to Yukifuri only to see she had gone completely still. Naruto, sensing something wrong with his mother, started wailing. Before Tobirama could shout for help, the doctor and several nurses rushed in, having dealt with similar situations before.

A nurse handed Tobirama his son saying, "I'm sorry Lord Hokage, but you need to leave." He was quickly ushered out. Ten minutes passed by in the blink of an eye and at the same time, agonizingly slow, before the doctor exited the room. "How is she?" he asked, his voice stern, yet strained.

The doctor shook his head. "I'm sorry, but we couldn't save her."

"Couldn't save her? COULDN'T SAVE HER?! THAT'S YOUR JOB!"

"There was a complication and her artery tore, most likely due to a past injury that never properly healed. Since the bleeding was internal we didn't notice at the time. I'm truly sorry. I'll let you say goodbye." The doctor walked past and down the hall, the nurses followed soon after.

Tobirama reentered the room. He looked at Yukifuri and noticed she was smiling. He averted his gaze not being able to look at her. Then he heard a whimper. He looked down at his son who whined when his father had increased the pressure in his arms, making him uncomfortable. Tobirama raised his arms and lowered his head till his forehead touched his sons. He didn't say any words. None needed to be said.

14 Years Later

Naruto had grown into what many would call a handsome young man. And, as one would expect, thanks to his looks, power, and lineage, he had a mass of fan girls. The bane of his existence. Now, Naruto could not always be with his father as the duties of the Hokage are many and limited the time they spent together. So, he was raised mainly by his Aunt Mito, who his father feared would have a bad influence on him. He was right to fear as Naruto took after Mito in several areas. Such as: preference of entrances (flashy or regal), how they tended to deal with those that insult the ones they care about, and making his life as Hokage more of a headache.

Tobirama had also wanted to not tell his son about Yukifuri till he felt he was confident enough to handle that his mother didn't come from Konoha. Unfortunately, Mito threw in a monkey wrench (herself) and told Naruto all about his mother. Thankfully, his paranoid worst case scenario (Naruto leaving Konoha to join Kiri so he can learn about his mothers homeland) did not come to pass, as Mito said.

When it came to his skills, he was a prodigy in ne'er every sense of the word. What he couldn't do was cast a genjutsu higher than a D-rank. No one could figure out why, and it pissed him off. Another thing he wasn't a 'prodigy' in was fuinjutsu. It was a cause of many headaches, both for himself and Mito, as he was liable to cause the seal to explode a third of the time or do nothing another third. Though as it turns out, it's only basic seals that he manages to screw up (another thing that caused him to twitch). He has a firm grasp on the intermediate stuff, and a few of the higher level seals, but the basics seem to be forever beyond his reach.

Now, that didn't mean Tobirama was completely excluded from training his son. He took great pride in teaching Naruto taijutsu, kenjutsu, and ninjutsu. He taught Naruto the Goken, or Strong Fist, his brothers fighting style. In this area, Naruto took to it like a fish to water and often wasn't willing to stop till he had trouble standing. He also had his son study other forms so he can learn how to best counteract them. Specifically the Uchiha's Interceptor Fist and the Hyuuga's Jyuuken, or Light Fist (He could never stand those two clans).

They had some trouble with kenjutsu as Tobirama wasn't much for using swords, so a teacher was required. But Tobirama was worried about Naruto learning a swords style that contradicted his taijutsu. So he hired a young ronin from Iron Country by the name of Mifune. Mifune proceeded to instruct Naruto in the ways of the sword and some of the beliefs from his homeland. One of them was his belief in Harmony. He also taught Naruto games such as Shogi as a recreational means to help improve memory and tactical thinking. As his instructor, he taught Naruto the beginning of Iai, a style of swordsmanship which involves rapidly unsheathing his blade to slash his enemy, then re-sheathing it. When Naruto questioned the usefulness of the technique, Mifune demonstrated by having Naruto use a jutsu on him. When Naruto made the first hand seal, Mifune was already before him with his blade at the boys throat. When he left, he told Naruto to practice till he can cut off a lit candles wick and keep it lit.

Then came the more advanced stages of ninjutsu. Trouble came in the fact Naruto inherited the Yuki bloodline Hyoton (Ice Release). Unfortunately, it came so naturally to him that he had difficulty using Suiton (Water Release) and Fuuton (Wind Release) without it trying to turn into ice halfway through. It took almost a year for him to be able to so. Another unfortunate thing, was since his mother was a rogue, she didn't have any techniques from the clan and since her death wasn't considered, she didn't write down any of hers. Tobirama could only show Naruto the hand seals to the jutsu he remembered Yukifuri used and explained what it did. He could only recall a handful, so Naruto was basically on his own when using his bloodline.

On the upside, Tobirama was able to personally oversee Naruto's training in Suiton. While still far from being near an adequate level (to him), he was proud to say Naruto is better than most Kiri chunin. Only practice and experience can allow Naruto to further himself. But Tobirama knew that if his sons Suiton became more powerful than his Fuuton, then Hyoton would become difficult thanks to the uneven balance. It's one of the difficulties of having an elemental bloodline. So, he made sure to teach Naruto what he knew about wind and (in his opinion) how best to utilize it. Unfortunately, this balance meant that his son will most likely never achieve his level and mastery of Suiton.

Though, his life wasn't always so happy. Recently, Hashirama had finally died from disease. And not long after that, Tobirama went north to Kumo to strike an alliance, but Ginkaku and Kinkaku, the Gold and Silver brothers, attacked him, nearly succeeding in killing him. Needless to say, an alliance with Kumo was no longer possible. Naruto would have went with his father, but Tobirama forbade him.

Now we come to Naruto in the Senju training grounds. He had come here to visit his Aunt Mito and to get her advice and/or help with a project he's had in mind. It had come to him during a war council that his father brought him to so he can see what he will one day be a part of. When the Nara head, Shinji he believed, was telling the loss of spies and moles in various enemy towns, the Yamanaka head, he forgets the mans name, jokingly said, 'It's to bad we just can't seal our agents in scrolls and have them listen in on their meetings.'

So Naruto figured, why not? The answer became painfully obvious when he studied the seals on sealing scrolls. They're design made it so that only inanimate objects, or things that were technically 'dead', could be sealed. As it turns out, the seals lack several things needed for a living beings survival, such as: food, water, and most importantly, air. It was through some experimentation on some animals, and a serial killer one time, that he guessed that the 'pocket' that the item is put in, is a vacuum. So, following that logic, anything sealed using the standard method could not survive unless it can live without breathing. The only thing he could think of would be the bijuu, seeing as they're just a mass of corrosive chakra with a mind and will.

So, he couldn't use the standard method. And if he couldn't do it the normal way, he'll make his own. He spent months studying various seals, scrolls on fuinjutsu, and more experimentation to get to where he is now. He believed he finally cracked it. He had used it yesterday on a songbird. And when he released it, it was still alive. He would swear though, that the bird cussed at him before flying away.

The idea was to put the living being into a stasis of sorts. It would be the equivalent of freezing time on the individual. That way they would remain in the same condition as they were when they were sealed. This would invaluable in taking care of the injured as 'Time Freeze' effect would prevent them from bleeding out while sealed. This would allow them to be safely carried back to a safe area where they could be healed.

Not what he originally intended, but he'll take what he could get.

He shook his head. He needed to focus. He needed to start off large using the seal so he can make sure he didn't mess up, which is easier than on a smaller scale. It follows the principle of the Evil Sealing Method, but instead of a person at the center, it's a scroll. Once he activates his chakra, the seal will shrink down to fit the scroll, and it will be reading for use on demand.

He had just finished and activated his chakra to activate the seal when a familiar chirping reached him. He looked up to see the bird from yesterday with a twig in its talons. He was confused, but then realization came to him when the bird dropped the twig. It landed on an 'arm' of the seal, smudging a line.

'Clever girl,' he thought, before everything went white.

With Tobirama

Tobirama was enjoying the quiet that his office usually afforded him. The First Shinobi War has been going on for over a year, and Konoha has been backed into a bit of a corner. He didn't like it, he absolutely loathed it, but he might need to start using genin on the field. That also included his son. He didn't want to for several reasons. One, being that he helped build Konoha so that children wouldn't be on the frontlines anymore. Another, well, his sons life would be in constant danger. Not only because of his prowess, but because he was his son, and the next candidate for clan heir should anything happen to Hashirama's children, Kami forbid.

His train of thought was interrupted when a large explosion shook the village. Leaping to his feet he called for his Anbu, something he was proud to have made, and leapt out the window. He made his way over the rooftops towards where he could see the smoke from the explosion emanate from. He sped up when he realized it came from the Senju compound.

He and his entourage arrived in the training area weapons ready. But what they saw confused them. Mito was on her knees clutching something to her chest as tears fell down her face. "Mito," Tobirama said, "what's wrong? What happened?"

She sniffed and brought a hand up to wipe away her tears. It was then Tobirama could see she was clutching a headband. His sons headband. "No," he whispered. In the blink of an eye, he was right in front of her with his hands on her shoulders. "Mito," he almost yelled. "Where is he? Where is Naruto?" She took a few deep breaths to calm herself before telling what she knew. The news wasn't good. Naruto was just finishing up on his experimental seal when she left to get some snacks knowing how hungry he can be. She was just coming back when the explosion happened. She dropped what she was holding and rushed outside. But there was no trace of Naruto. She used a minor wind jutsu to clear the area a bit, but all she found was the scroll and Naruto's headband.

"I'm sorry," she whispered. Tobirama was no longer listening. His son was gone. He knew about seals and he knew the consequences of one messing up. He just never imagined…no. Now is not the time. He'll grieve later. He had a village to calm down first. Then, he could grieve. But, he still had a war to win.

60 Years Later

An orange blur dashed through the forest on this moonlit night. It jumped from tree to tree before landing in a clearing located a good enough distance away from the nearest civilization. The orange blur turned out to be a young girl, no older than thirteen with a giant scroll in her hands. The young girl had bright blonde hair in twin pigtails and was wearing what many considered a monstrosity. A bright, neon orange jumpsuit with blue outlines and a white neckline. Her name is Natsumi Uzumaki, the village pariah.

She was out late at night for one purpose. To pass the make-up exam and become a genin. To do this, all she needed was to steal the Forbidden Scroll, learn a jutsu, show it to one of her teachers, and she passes. She knew people were looking for her, as per the tests rules, and she only had so much time before someone found her. So she plopped down and opened the scroll. 'Let's see,' she thought. 'Kage Bunshin (Shadow Clones)? Dammit all! Why does it have to be my worst subject? What else do they have?'

After seeing that the next ten things were more complex or dealt with 'affinities' she just went with the first thing and hoped for the best.

A Few Hours Later

Natsumi had done it! She had finally succeeded in learning a jutsu. She smiled to herself at the accomplishment, especially since it was a clone technique. Now all she needed to do was wait for someone to find her. But this is Natsumi Uzumaki, so she was bored within thirty seconds. With nothing better to do, and lacking proper judgment, she went back to looking through the Forbidden Scroll. She skimmed through most of it till she neared the bottom. "There's gotta be something," she said to herself. That is when she found a seal, one of many had she bothered to continue.

"What was this thing called again? A seal?" she wondered. "What do seals do again?" She was thinking hard on this, harder than when deciding what type of ramen she wanted first for dinner. That's when she remembered her sensei, Iruka, had mentioned seals in class at least one time. "Now, what did he say?"

"Seals are one of the most versatile weapons a shinobi can have. At least, if they know how to use them. The more common type of seals we use are exploding tags and sealing scrolls. We use sealing scrolls to store extra equipment without the added weight, making it a very popular item."

"Well, that was no help!" she yelled to her memory. "How am I supposed to know the difference?"

"It is very rare to mistake an exploding tag for a sealing scroll as the tags are mostly located in a weapons pouch or in a sealing scroll."

"Huh," she said. "That's…convenient."

"Now class, to activate…class? Class? CLASS?! SHUT UP YOU BRATS! Ahem, where was I? Ah, yes. To activate either one you just need to push some chakra into it."

"Just push chakra into it? Okay, let's do it!" She channeled her chakra as when she was doing the Kage Bunshin and touched the seal. There was a poof of smoke and a thud on the ground. Natsumi coughed, having not expected the smoke. When it finally cleared up, she was surprised to see another scroll and a headband. "Another scroll?!"

She picked up both items in her hands and looked between them. Scroll or headband? On the one hand, the scroll might contain something amazing, like a super-awesome-mega-cool jutsu that is sure to make her classmates jealous. Or, the headband. She dropped the headband and opened the scroll with little thought. Instead of a jutsu like she hoped, she was met with another seal. She pouted for a second before channeling more chakra, refusing to walk away empty-handed.

Another poof of smoke, and another thud, this time a bit louder. But this time, she was prepared as she held her breath. The smoke quickly dissipated to reveal to her shock, a boy. He didn't look much older than her which meant…something. She didn't know or cared that much at this point. The boy was wearing armor of all things colored a light blue and he was wearing boots. What shinobi wore boots?

In Kumo

It was the strangest thing. All of a sudden most of the population of Kumo just started sneezing while feeling they have been insulted. "Mabui!" called the Raikage, A. "Find out what's causing this and B! For the love of everything good in this world Stop RAPPING!"

Back to Natsumi

Natsumi had checked if the boy was still alive and feared he was dead because of how cold he was. Only the rise of his chest gave it away. She was scratching her head, wondering what to do when her sensei arrived behind her. "Natsumi!" he shouted. "What on earth were you thinking?"

"Kya!" she yelled in response. She turned to see her teacher with his hands on his hips giving her a glare that she usually received when she skipped class. "Oh, it's just you Iruka-sensei. You scared me! Besides," here she smiled at him, "I'm here for the make-up exam."

"Make-up exam?" he asked beneath his breath. He took a closer look at his student to see she was a bit scuffed up. 'Well, she certainly looks like she's been training. But where did she come up with a make-up exam?'

"Natsumi, there's no make-up exam."

She just looked at him confused. "Of course there is. Mizuki-sensei told me earlier. Steal the scroll, avoid being caught, learn a jutsu, show him, and I pass. You want to see my new jutsu?" she asked putting her hands in the required seal.

"Mizuki?" Iruka asked. Suddenly, he heard the sound of something traveling at fast speeds. A sound all too familiar. With no hesitation he threw himself in front of Natsumi taking the attack himself. "Gah," he grunted as he could feel the weapons, shurikens, dig into his back. He turned around, unexpectedly giving Natsumi a look at his back, to see his best friend, Mizuki, standing on a branch with a fuma shuriken in hand.

"I didn't expect to see you here Iruka," Mizuki said almost casually. "It's to bad. If you had just minded your own business, you wouldn't have had to die." What no one noticed was the boy in the background had started to stir.

"Mizuki, why are you doing this?" Iruka asked, confused at his friends actions.

Mizuki just laughed at Iruka's question. "Isn't it obvious? For power!" Iruka couldn't believe his ears. His best friend would betray his home…for power? But, Mizuki continued unabated. "Do you know how long I have been stuck as a chunin teaching these snot-nosed brats? Do you even realize how long I've trained to become a jonin and how many times I've been denied? No longer! If I can't get what I want here, then I'll go to someone who would appreciate my talent."

"But why the Forbidden Scroll?" Iruka asked.

"Simple. My new employer wants it as a measure of good faith and loyalty on my part. And if I just so happen to learn a few tricks from it, no harm done."

"But why Natsumi?"

"It could have been any of those kids. The Kyuubi bitch was just an added bonus. But enough of this. How about you do me one last favor and DIE!" He emphasized his last word by hurling the oversized bladed star at Iruka, who closed his eyes and braced for the impact. But nothing happened. He peeked out, only to open his eyes fully when he noticed a boy, who looked a little older than his students, standing in front of him with the fuma shuriken in hand.

"You know," the young man said, "I was enjoying my sleep, but apparently, no one knows when to keep their voices down." Everyone was stunned. Natsumi, because she knew he was asleep, and Iruka and Mizuki as they hadn't noticed him. "Now," he continued, cracking his neck, "would someone care to fill me in on what's happening or am I going to need to beat it out of you?"

Mizuki recovered from his surprise faster than Iruka. "Fine," he said with a smirk, "You want to know what's going on, I'll tell you. No, I'll teach you."

Seeing the look on Mizuki's face, Iruka shouted, "Don't Mizuki! You know it's forbidden."

Natsumi, who has been hiding behind Iruka this entire time, spoke up after having stepped from behind him. She didn't know what was going on anymore. "What's forbidden? Iruka-sensei, what's he talking about?"

"It was over thirteen years ago, on October 10th. That night the Kyuubi no Yoko attacked. We fought back, but no matter what we did, what weapons or what jutsu, it wasn't even scratched. That is, until the Yondaime arrived. He single handedly drove the Kyuubi out of the village and faced it by himself. And after what seemed like ages, he defeated the beast. But the Kyuubi can't be killed so he sealed away, into a new born baby girl. You," he shouted at Natsumi, "are the Kyuubi no Yoko. Given human form by the Fourth so that we may finish what he started. But you were smarter than we predicted. You used your guise to fool the Sandaime into believing you were a normal girl. But no more! Tonight, I will finish what the Fourth started and be hailed a hero! Now DIE!"

Mizuki, so crazed by his own ambition and deluded beliefs, took his last fuma shuriken and launched it at Natsumi. Iruka made to move in front of her, but a brief flash of pain from his wounded back prevented him. He could only look on helplessly as his favorite student, a girl he saw almost like family, was about to meet her end.

"Oh, enough of this," said the boy. He hefted the fuma shuriken he held and hurled it in the pathway of Mizuki's. The two clashed in the air and fell to the sides. Before Mizuki could register that his attacked failed, the boy appeared next to him at high-chunin speeds, grabbed a hold of his head, and slammed it into the tree he was standing on. He let go and allowed the man to fall to the ground before dropping down himself and planting his foot firmly in the traitors stomach, winding the man. The boy then gave a sharp punch to Mizuki's temple, knocking him out.

All this occurred within ten seconds from when the two shuriken clashed, clearly showing to Iruka how skilled this young man was. The young man, satisfied with what he did, turned to the two that had been sidelined throughout most of the ordeal. "Now, would someone care to explain just what's going on?"

Omake:

Naruto watched with wide eyes as the twig fell. 'That little shit!' he thought.

"CUT"

"What?" Naruto asked. From behind stage came the director.

"That line is not good enough," the man said.

"Not good enough?"

"Yes. Try something else."

"How about, You fucking bitch?"

"To vulgar."

"I will have my revenge."

"What are you, an Uchiha?"

As the two argued over his line, Mito was having a cup of tea with Tobirama. "I thought it was appropriate," she said.

Tobirama snorted. "Please, you thought dressing up your kids like animals was apprpriate."

"What was that?" Mito asked with a smile.

Tobirama started to sweat. He knew what she was like when she was in such a mood. "Nothing," he said.

"That's what I thought."

AN: And that is the end of the first chapter. As you can see, I made several changes. Such as how Naruto's seal works, Tobirama's attitude, and the meeting between Naruto and Natsumi. Also, Naruto no longer has weapons of the Sage of the Six Paths, he didn't get to train in the seal, and he isn't godlike. I think that's where I messed up the first time. He will be head and shoulders above the Rookies, and will be able to defeat all the Chunin, but he can no longer trounce over the opposition. There will be more changes, but that's in the future.

How'd you like it? What's your opinion on the updated version? And what did you like most about the chapter? Review your comments and thoughts.

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The story is BB gets kidnapped by aliens and forced to fight in an arena. Years later, the Titans finally track him down and go to rescue him. I remember it was rated T, but might have been shifted to M.
This is all I can remember of it, unfortunately so any info would be great.