New story, hope it's liked. Hinata may be OOC. So it's NaruHinaFemKyuubiNaruko and FEW other, might take suggestion, large might tho guys.
If you read that, read this, harem fic, gonna be smut in this... please leave if you are not into that.
Naruto in this is an type of succubus as title says. I say type because in this fic, there will be types of succubus! You'll find out as you read! xD Oh and of course Naruto will be an rare succubus! He always has to be different.
Age? I say 18.. For them both in this fic.
Gonna be a fun ride I swear!
Oh and I threw alot of RtN Hinata personality in Canon Hinata's character... I think I just like Rtn Hinata a little too much? :/ Lol Idk why, I mean of course I like canon Hinata but... eh Idk.
And to Naruko fans, I think she'll debut in chapters 6 or 7 or 8. One of them lol.
LolaTheSa does not own Naruto!
Let's get to it!
"The sooner you guys stop dragging, the sooner we can be done with this mission!" Kurenai chirped to her team over her shoulder, 'they may not be young anymore..' Kurenai stopped and thought about that... thought. 'The hell am I thinking, THEIR NOT THE ONES THAT JUST HEAT 30 DAMMIT!' She thought as a dark aura started forming around her.
"Um sensei" One of her students, Kiba, said worriedly as he sensed the dark aura. Said sensei shook her head and stomped on with a renewed energy, She still young and beautiful!
All three of her students had a bead of sweat running down their heads as they watched her weird behavior. To them, ever since she hit the age of thirty, she's been weird. Kiba holds it Kakashi.
"She is right" The bug user, Shino, informed. "The sooner we get there, the sooner we would be done and heading back.." He said in his mechanical voice as he picked up his pace leaving his teammates behind. He was indeed in a rush to return to Konoha, his clan would soon announce his suitor. He really wanted to experience the act his clan described as... 'Joining hives together'.
"Shino is right" Kiba agreed as he started jogging to catch up with Shino, he wanted to get this done as soon as possible, there wasn't anything in particular he waiting for but this mission was A rank and there was a lot of money involved.
The third member of their team, Hyuuga Hinata, payed them little mind. She liked it when they left her alone. It gave her time to think, to plan, to... relax.. She knew her teammates and her sensei were friends and had the best intent toward her but she knew they were also her watchers, to make sure she didn't run. Kiba and his dog like tracker abilities, plus a hybrid dog companion that was a natural tracker. Shino and his bugs made for the ultimate tracker... she was sure he had one of those creepy things on her right now. Kurenai was a bit of a wild mystery to her, but she mashed it down to the lady was to make her easier to restrain.
Now don't get the wrong idea, Hinata was not some kind of head case or something. And everything was ok back at home! She just voiced her affection for travel one to many times, and her father being the ever protective type wanted her to stay in Konoha... forever. THAT made an argument thus making trouble in the Hyuuga paradise. That was the reason she was still teamed as a Jonin when sent on any missions outside of Konoha, she wasn't gonna go rogue or anything, it's a nice thought but not an appealing life choice.
Her father is an nice guy, average father though. He was sort of an dickhead to her when she was like 8 and all way up to 14, he is slowly earning the right for her to call him father, openly, again instead of 'Hiashi san'.
She grinned at that. The guy loathed being called that by her, she didn't know why but he just did, she figured it was because of Hanabi being the family lover that she is, so he probably expects the same from her. Hinata loves her sister, sure the girl wasn't that much of one when she was younger but she turned out great... at least once Hinata started to get a backbone, Hanabi turned into the perfect little sister.
She frowned as a beetle ran across her face, she paused. Then frowned as it started to just circle her face, it stopped in front of her as if it was looking at her. She quickly jukened the ugly thing. 'Big damn bugs' She thought with a disgusted look as she was about to stomp on it, she froze, she eyed the bug she just killed.. it was one of Shino's... But she couldn't place it, it wasn't one of his watchers, they were REAL small, she calls those his spy bugs. This is one of his biggest, she can't remember what the big bugs were a signal of..
Suddenly, she heard the sound of metal clinging together. She stopped. "Byakugan!" She roared as her bloodline activated, using her enhanced vision, she stared a head. She narrowed her eyes, "Why is it so misty" She asked her self as she scanned the area around the mist as saw that it only circulated around a single area. "Weird" She whispered as more clinging was heard, there was definitely fighting going on in it.
"Large enough for a small quick attack..." She said slowly as she took out an kunai ready to charge and fight whatever... whoever is attacking her team, if anyone or thing was gonna ever kill her team, it would be her if she ever decided to.
SNAP
Her reflexes helped her whip around fast enough to deflect an thrown kunai then jump out of the way as an unknown assaulter tried to stab her, he had stepped on a fallen branch giving himself away. Hinata blew a breathe as she retreated from the unknown nin. 'My life could have ended just like that' was her frantic thought.
The man quickly charged to strike again, Hinata seeing this recovered from her state of mind.
Without hesitation, she threw an decoy kunai at his feet causing the man to jump and look down to make sure it wasn't a tagged one, as soon as he looked up, three kunai stabbed into his chest one by one. Hinata smirked as he dropped, his blood soaking the ground, she backed up a bit. "Wasn't tough at all" She boasted as she went to retrieve her kunai.
But fate would have non of it as more of the unknown ninja came out of the forest surrounding her..
"SHIT!" She squeaked as she was thrown on the defensive quick. She jumped back out of the ninja's range and land on an tree branch, one charged straight at her, she instantly dodged his kunai punch, she grabbed his arm then snapped it before kicking him back to his allies. 'No worries Hinata, you got this, you got this!' Was what she said over and over in her head.
"Hyuuga scum" One of the ninja spat, they all were hesitant, however, They knew of the Hyuuga abilities and didn't want to be killed. "Screw this, all of you, charge, she can't kill us all!" One of them screamed as he charged followed by his comrades.
Hinata threw her last kunai getting one of them before running away. She was good but she was no one women army! That much was certain.
Just then, a few clicks off the road where Hinata was now retreating from to this very place. A strange purple-ish gold worm hole opened. The air around it distorted as it fully opened.
It started to make a very strange hum. The sound gradually grew louder as whatever was in it came to the opening.
A body fell from the hole, it hit the ground hard. The strange hole behind where the body fell from swiftly closed behind with a screech leaving a remnants of a distortion behind showing that it was there.
"Ow" The man who fell moaned. He slowly raised, he blinked twice trying to access his surroundings. "Where the fuck did they send me!" He yelled seeing nothing but trees around him.
A small red fox that fell under him, it was almost crushed. Looked at him. "It's your fault" It said, its voice identifying it as female. She stretched her back out like a cat would before moving from under him to look at their surroundings.
"My fault? That bitch...-
"Naruto" The fox interrupted with a growl. "If you had obeyed and went along with it, they would have gave us clothes from wherever we now are and maybe sent us to a more... public place.." It said still looking around. "And maybe they would have been so forceful with you if you had co-operated." She finished.
"I DIDN'T WANT TO COME!" He screamed hoping up pointing at the little fox accusingly.
The small fox would have rolled her eyes if she were in physical form. "Ergh and if we hadn't, you would have eventually died." She said, now looking at him. "You are naked by the way." She informed him, not looking away, her eyes actually zeroed in on his man piece. She knew once he started being difficult, they'd make him go without help or clothing, she herself shifted into this form to hide her nakedness from others view.
"Oh... right..." He said looking down, then shrugged. Seriously being nude wasn't a problem right now. "Anyway, I wanted to enjoy myself a little more, I mean I am only like 18, a mate is like an life long commitment or something!" He said completely bemused by the very idea.
"It is... but it's worth it!" The fox lady said, she got a glare in return, she relented on her stance. "I hate not being able to deny my soul partner" She grumbled, Naruto smiled. "We... don't.. have to find your mate, we could just wait a month then go back... but we'll have to try again the following year." She informed., almost as if it was against her will.
"Interesting" Was the naked mans only reply.
The fox however grew abruptly mad. "YOU asshole! HOW dare you do that" She screamed at him. "Just because you happen to have been the initiator out of luck does not mean you can control me like that you ass!" She scolded while stomping her paws.
"You know..." He started while grinning. "While you're in that form, you are seriously less intimidating... maybe you should-
"Nope, not happening" She growled. "You pig, you're not touching me anytime soon, and that also means you're most definitely not gonna see me naked after what you just pulled you ass!" She yelled while swiping at him.
"WHAT! OH COM-
A crack alerted both of them, their heads snapped to the location of the sound. Then like a flash, Hinata leaped into the place the two were having their conversation.
Both Naruto and the fox eyes grew wide and when Hinata saw Naruto, her eyes grew wide for drastically different reasons.
"ALREADY" Naruto moaned sorrowfully as his body reacted to Hinata quickly.
"Hmph, serves you right." The fox laughed.
Hinata on her part didn't hear the talking fox, instead she was mesmerized, so much that she forgot she was just running for her life. By what you asked? Well, remember Naruto being naked? Hinata couldn't believe what she was seeing, the man in front of her was blond with deep strikingly blue eyes, long spiky hair, tanned. And best-worst of all... he was naked... completely! And he was ribbed, his eyes stopped on his abs, while she saw Kiba and shino shirtless before, she'd call them tone or whatever but the man in front of her. He. Had. Muscles!
He wasn't huge like those guys you'd find in those elemental tournaments but he definitely was one of kind here in Konoha if that made sense, basically what she's saying is, he'd look like a god among men in Konoha. Her eyes traveled further down, since she was already red as an tomato, she grew dizzy when she saw his man meat standing pound, this was her first time seeing one, a real. She was sure, so sure it wasn't suppose to look so monstrous in size.
Then there this feeling in her, as if she were being pulled to him, as if he were soothing her nerves, opening up her soul to stroke her very being. It felt... godly. Or was this a new form of arousal? She doubted it but wouldn't be against it.
Naruto's eyes glazed over. "Is this what finding your mate feels like?" He asked his little companion.
"This is the feeling described in the books if you ever paid attention so yea." She agreed. She looked up at him, she was somewhat happy their mate was a female, it would have been disastrous for him, her and their mate if he or she had been a ''he" Or an animal[thank kami it wasn't] or worse, a demon[male or female], even worse would have been a vampire[that could have caused a war!]. Her Soul partner voiced extreme displeasure in the possibilities long ago, not even she could soothe him in that department.
"Mmm" He moaned, he looked her over. 'Cute, and judging by that heavy jacket, she's hiding a lot of baggage!' He smirked, 'And that smell, seems I'm not the only one feeling the attraction.' His eyes snapped to the fox then Hinata. 'This girl is really my mate.' He licked his lips. "Let's test it".
"Hi, I'm Naruto" He started seductively, his eyes sparkling. "Wanna fuck?" He asked mischievously.
1... Question.
2... Question processed.
3... Question reacted too.
The small fox face planted. 'IDIOT!' was the mumbled sound.
Hinata grew red, 'did he just?' Her eyes traveled to his man hood, the very thought of that going in her? "O-oh" She whispered incoherently as she fainted hitting the ground with a flop.
The ninja that were chasing her finally caught up and landed behind her. They saw her on the ground, dead or not? They didn't know. Then they saw the naked man and his raging hard on. They all blinked stupidly trying to process the situation.
Naruto looked from his newly found soul mate then at his soul partner then at his the just arrived ninja. "Are you those your friends?" He asked the now unconscious Hinata.
"Sorry but I don't share" He said with a wicked smile. "Kyu-Chan, be a dear and kill them,"
So? How goes it.
I know I have not been active but... there's no excuse lol. I just haven't been doing anything. Sorry?
This is a fic I had written in September, just didn't add it... Yea I've been that lazy.
I'll definitely write chapter 2 sooner rather then later.
I don't want to name Naruko - 'Naruko'. So any one want to suggest some names? But don't worry, Naruko will be Naruko, just with different name.