Alternate Ending for Allegiant

Tris

That's when I see her, my mother.

She kneels next to me and places her cool hand on my shoulder.

"Hello Beatrice." She says with a smile on her face.

"Am I done yet?" I ask, not knowing if I actually said it or I think it and she hears it.

"No, my dear child, your life is only beginning, but it will be tough at first and there will be many hard times. Remember this Beatrice, when bad things happen good things always come out of it, just be brave" she says as she strokes my hair with her hand. "Goodbye my dear child"

"Mum, don't leave me again" I scream.

"Be brave, Beatrice" she says as she slowly vanishes. Then everything went blank.

I have to be brave for her, for Tobias, Christina and Caleb.

Tobias

"Where is everyone?" Amar says as we walked through the security checkpoint without stopping, that's when I see Cara. Her face is badly bruised and there's also a bruise around her head, but that's not why I so worried. It's the look on her face that makes me concerned.

"What is it, where's Tris?" I ask.

"Tr Tris went to the weapons lab instead of Caleb, she had survived the death serum, but she was shot. And she is in hospital in a critical condition; she only got a 20 percent chance of survival. I'm sorry Tobias."

Usually I'm able to tell if someone is lying, and this must be a lie because I know Tris is a smart girl and wouldn't get herself shot.

"No" Christina says "this must be one big mistake."

Cara then broke out in tears.

That is when I realize; my selfless Tris would go into the weapons lab instead on Caleb.

Christian yelled something that I can't work out and everything becomes blurry as my eyes are full of tears.

Christina grabs my hand and takes me down the hall until we are in a hospital room, where I see the most beautiful person in the world.

Tris.

Tobias

When I first saw Tris, all I first saw was a grey blur. She was very small, very thin and plain as well, except she jumped first.

Even I didn't jump first, no transfer jumps first not even an Erudite.

But that wasn't the first time I saw her, I remember seeing her at my mother's false funeral and walked past her in the Abnegation sector.

I don't think anyone saw Tris for who she really was until she jumped.