I personally despise it when authors do this sort of thing, regardless it is necessary at this point and time. I'm going chapter by chapter re-editing this bloody mess to bring it up to my current standards, which are far higher then they were three years ago. First chapter is already re-edited, and I'm working on the second right now, and yes it is a bitch to pull off.
Seriously Nemesis from a couple years ago didn't know how to edit at freaking all.
Anyway, you don't need to review this "Chapter" since I'll be deleting it once I update the story, I just wanted you all to know that this isn't dead but it will be altered, so keep an eye out. Ok, that's it for now, peace out!