This is my remake chapters. I decide make Naruto strong and please enjoy it. Tell me what I did wrong.
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Naruto is in black place. He and his friend Kurama.
"Looks like this is my death. Right Kurama?"Said Naruto.
"Yea, no matter what you die I always got your back my friend." said Kurama the orange nine tail fox.
"Thanks Kurama you my first best friend you know that and I will adopt you my pet." Naruto said with smile.
"Hehehe. Shut up brat." Said Kurama with laugh
Naruto and Kurama about close their eye but Naruto saw beautiful light something grab him and take him to different dimension.
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Another World
On the beach at night, there are 3 people watching at sky.
"This sky is sure nice." Hisashi talk his friend Takashi.
"Yea, the sky sure is nice." Takashi Said
Takashi, Hisashi and Rei are watching the sky. They saw something shining that look like star.
"Hey guys. Look star." Rei point at the star.
Takashi and Hisashi are looking at star closely but it is not otar.
"Rei, I don't think that don't looks the star." Takashi Said
"Yeah, it coming to the beach." Hisashi Said
Takashi, Hisashi, and Rei continue to look at strange star. It crash to the beach and it explode like shining.
"What was that?" asked Hisashi.
"I don't know…" Takashi answered back
Rei saw young blond spike floating at beach
"My gosh. Is that the person? He needs help." Rei said
"Hisashi, come help me." Takashi talks to Hisashi and then he nodded.
Takashi and Hisashi took their jacket then swim to the beach. When they are there, they grab blond boy and then swim back to the sand. After they made back to sand, Takashi check blond boy body to make sure it was breath. The blond boy is breathing.
"Good, he's breathing. Hisashi help me carry him to my house." said Takashi
"Alright." said Hisashi
They carry blond boy to Takashi's house, Rei was going with them too.
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The next morning.
Naruto woke up and got up then look around in a Takashi's bedroom.
"Kurama, where am I? Is this the heaven?" Naruto thought.
"I have no idea, but this isn't heaven. How are we alive?" Kurama said.
"I remember that I saw light. What was that?" Naruto thought
"Interesting, but the light aren't just the light. It was something else." Kurama said.
"Yeah, your right Kurama." Naruto thought.
Naruto went out of Takashi's bedroom and he notice that he his clothes and his headband gone expect he still have shirt and boxer under-pant. When he at living room he see Takashi is watching TV .
"Oh good you awake." Takashi looks at Naruto.
"Where am I?" Naruto asked
"At my house and who are you?" Takashi Said
"My name is Naruto Uzumaki and What in the world am I?" Naruto asked
"In Japan, by the way my name is Takashi Komuro and I have question for you. Where did you come from, you don't like belong here? Me and my friend the one who save you at beach last night." Takashi asked.
"I don't know but thanks for saving me last night and I am shinobi. I'm from Hidden Leaf Village." Naruto said
"I know about shinobi but never heard of it place, but I can say that you come from different dimension." Takashi said
"Yeah maybe." Naruto said. Naruto remember that he saw the light. He notice that his clothes and headband are missing.
"Where did you put my clothes and my headband?" Naruto asked
"I clean your clothes last night, it should be done and I put your headband on my desk. Come on; let's go get your clothes and I have to meet my friends." Takashi said
"Alright."Naruto thought.
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While Naruto and Takashi walking at street, they saw Hisashi got hurt pretty hurt. Naruto and Takashi rush to Hisashi.
"Hisashi, are you okay?!" Takashi said.
"Yea, I'm ok, but the bullies have taken Rei away." Hisashi breathing.
"I'll go find Rei. Tatashi, you stay with Hisashi" Naruto said
"Hold up Naruto, I'm coming with you." Takashi said
"No, stay with your friend, he seen injury pretty bad. I promise I will save Rei." Naruto thumb up to Tatashi. Tatashi thumb up back, he believe Naruto will find Rei. Naruto smile at Tatashi so he disappears like a ninja. Takashi and Hisashi were shock that Naruto disappear very fast.
"Who is this guy? I mean I know him last night, but who is he?" Hisashi asked
"Naruto Uzumaki and he is shinobi." Tatashi answered.
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After Takashi help Hisashi take him to his house, Naruto was follow his sense to find Rei, his sense is getting closer.
"We getting close Naruto and I can sense those bullies chakra they are very weak." Kurama said with smile.
Naruto nodded to Kurama. When Naruto was there, he saw Rei being bully by 3 guys.
"Let me go, you guys are disgusting!" Rei shout.
"Come on cutie, don't be scared. We just touch your face just little bit mor…." Guy was about to touch Rei face but Naruto grab hishand and then punches his face. The guy got knock out.
"What the fuck?" second guy aid.
"Get him!" Third guy shouts.
All the guys charged at Naruto. Naruto dodged so many weak punch by guys. Naruto one punch to second guy stomach and then he one kick to another guy head. After He defeated the them, they ran away and never near him again. He turn around and walk to Rei.
"You must be Rei. Are you okay?" Naruto asked
"I'm okay thank you for saving me. I know you about last night, but who are you?" Rei said.
"Naruto Uzumaki, I made promise your friend that I will save you." Naruto said with smile.
"Tatashi." Rei said.
"Yep, let's get up. Your friends must be worry about you." Naruto said.
"Ok." Rei stand up.
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At night, Takashi and Hisashi at Takashi's house but they still waiting are for Naruto and Rei return. Hisashi was worry about Rei.
"Come on, where is she?" Hisashi said with worry.
"Don't worries, Naruto promise us that he will save Rei. You just have to calm down Hisashi." Takashi said.
"Your right Takashi." Hisashi talk back.
While they siting on sofa, someone knock the door.
"This has to be Rei." Hisashi rush to door and then open the door. When he opens, he saw Naruto and Rei are together.
"Rei, you alright!" Hisashi hug Rei.
Hisashi and Rei break up
"I'm fine, thanks to Naruto who save my life." Rei said.
"Thank you for saving our friend Naruto." Hisashi talk to Naruto.
"Thanks Naruto." Takashi said.
"No problem. That's what friend do." Naruto said with smile.
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End of chapter 1