I am sorry to say that after much internal debate and examination of this story, that I just cannot find a direction to go with this story, so I am declaring it abandoned. I am completely redoing my entire writing method and style, and instead of just trying to run with the wild plot bunnies that bite me, I am going to try to plan out general plot points in advance so that I can have a somewhat larger piece of where the story is going before the actual writing is started. I am not going to delete this story, as it marks a major point in my development as an author and I want it there to be critiqued by others so that I can learn from my past. Thank you all who follow me, I am working on a new story already, but I plan to have at least outlines for the first twenty or so chapters before i ever start writing it. Feel free to send me any comments or suggestions on refining my writing methods and styles, I love the input.

RevCorby