...FLASHBACK...
Percys POV
"Life was good the Titan war was over and I had all my friends (Thalia, Nico, Jason) and my wise girl, Anabeth. But that all changed when my new half brother Jack came, at first I was excited because I had a new sibling but soon after I wish he never came to camp halfblood because piece by piece he was destroying my life"
"I remember the day like yesterday I had just come back from completing 3 tasks set by Athena so I could mary Annabeth when I saw a bunch of campers cheering at the pavillion, but as soon as I approached they turned and made faces and sniggered at me, but I was used to this everyone had been freezing me out because of Jack at first he started spreading rummors, the he framed me for stealing peoples stuff even Thalia, Nico and Jason believed him and soon my dad disowned me and claimed him his favourite son but I still pushed on because I had to protect the camp and the mortals like my mum and paul and my newborn baby sister Annie, but soon after that they died although no-one came and saw if I was ok I managed because I knew that's what mum would have wanted me to do, so here I was trying to see what all the fuss was about when I saw this,
"Jack I love you so much-kiss-kiss" said Annabeth
"I love -kiss-kiss- you to -kiss-" said Jack
"You were right -kiss- when you -kiss-kiss- said you -kiss- were a better -kiss- kisser than Percy -kiss-"
"Of course I was that wimp -kiss-kiss- wouldn't be a -kiss- better kisser than -kiss- me"
"Yeah and he doesn't even realise you set his cowerdly familys house on fire" said Annabeth
"I was shocked she knew he killed my family, I shook my head I had, had enough I pushed through the crowd and said
HOW COULD YOU", in a calm yet frightening voice
"Percy I didn't think you would be back for another couple of days"
"what so you decided to cheat on me"
"Percy you were gone for 2 weeks what was I suppossed to do, you were doing all these horrible things"
"no I wasn't you just believed Jacks lies"
"Percy we all saw him beat the Minotour, 2 Hell Hounds and a Hydra before he had even trained and you just stood there"
"no I killed them, after he grabbed my sword and pushed me over so when you came and looked it looked like he killed them"
"Percy even if what you say is true which I doubt he went on a quest and wounded Medusa"
"So I Killed Medusa with no training, I killed Kronos, I slayed Gaea, I got the golden fleece, I got the lightning bolt and I held the sky and saved Artemis I killed many giants and I was involved in 2 great prophecys" I said
"Percy stop tricking yourself, youre just not as good as Jack"
"what so that means he can murder my family"
"they were worthless"
"how dare you, I thought you were a kind caring person not a murderer"
"lay of Percy"
"What" I said
"I said lay of"
I turned around to see it was Thalia
"Lay of, lay of they murdered my family"
"Don't forget tortured to" said Jack
"Stop being such a wimp" she said
"Percy forget about it they were mortals" said Nico
"I hate you all"
Everyone started laughing like this was funny,
"Annabeth I was going to prupose to you"
With that I threw the ring at her feet, suddenly her faced changed to sadness.
"Percy don't leave we need you" Annabeth said as she looked at me pleading in her eyes,
"no I'm done with you Annabeth"
"Percy"
"just stop ok I'll never be with you, your a heartless, horrible, self-centered person"
"Percy, they were mortals they were going to die anyway"
"how could you say that, what if I killed your dad what would you say"
"you can't kill my dad he's important"
"what so your dad's important, but my family's a waste of space"
"exactly" said Thalia
"shut up, Thalia I did so much for you, but you go and kill my family, mark my words Thalia we won't ever be friends and when I get my chance you will burn in Tartarus"
Thalia looked taken back, her face was blank as she blinked back tears"
I was done with camp half-blood, I turned to leave but then was zapped to Olympus".
First fanfiction please positive reviews and advice hope the spelling wasn't to bad.