This is a very important update surrounding the premise of my primary story, Sayo and Ieyasu: Killers of Fate.

Hey, fellow readers and fans whom I am very, very grateful for. This is a chapter that ultimately decides the fate of this story. (Pun intended.) I've really, really, felt that I've deviated from the original storyline a ton, making me want to change everything. But to do all of that, I'd have to cut out all of the Jaegers, Amsaljas, and other outside characters that are not in Night Raid. I may even have to cut Juu as well. I've grown attached to Alyssa since I wrote her a lot recently, making me want to keep her around. But ever since I introduced Juu, I think that I have lost control of this story immensely.

I still love this story and the concept that I made; I really do. I love writing Sayo; I love writing Ieyasu. But I just can't see myself writing this scattered, disorganized story any more. So I'm going to scrap everything after chapter 3 and start anew. However, some things will be the same, but many things will leave because they cluttered my story previously.

So I hope you think this is an okay decision, and I hope you join me in the revamping. Once I finish the revamped story, I'll post a separate link just in case you still want to read the part I have posted now.

Here's a list of what I'm keeping in the story and what I'm not keeping.

Here to stay

Ieyasu

Sayo

Alyssa
Excision of the Holy Ones (Sayo's teigu) Will reappear after revamping. (In other words she won't stumble upon it so easily.)

Sayo and Ieyasu's elemental powers

Game Over: Ammoderer (Alyssa's teigu)

All the Night Raiders

Jaegers (Will no longer be main characters.)

A character who can use magic. Maybe I'll change the character Juu was into a physically-weak, mentally-strong magic user who teaches Sayo tactics and crap.)

A MORE-THOROUGH EXPLANATION FOR LUBORA POWERS

(If I'm missing anything vital tell me.)

Gettin' cut:
Amsaljas (All of them)

Plot surrounding the Amsaljas

Everything after chapter 3 unless specified. (Yeah! Seryuu stays longer! No? Well, that's my decision. A unique character is a good one.)

Deidre

Kory

Basically, I'm gonna set this on loooong hiatus, plan out the chapters, and write them out. My goal, now that I know what I'm gonna do, is 100k words. I have a storyline planned out and I think you guys are gonna like it a lot. Well, that's all I have to say!

Thanks so much for staying with me so long. Again, I apologize for dropping this bomb on you so suddenly. I'll see you in the revamped chapter! Bye!

~The Slain Executioner