YES!! The rewritten first chapter is finally here!! I had trouble with it......damn I wonder if this will happen in future chapters.wince well anyways!! Thank you for waiting this long and I just want to say I'll probably have a difficult time updating every single week or something because I'm not a punctual person. Hehe....I'll probably be doing random updates. Truth be told when I first started writing this I had no idea what I was getting myself into. I just started this fic because I "felt like it". (Yes, I know that's a very bad reason.) And now...I still don't know how this storyline will go. Hopefully when I start writing better-rewritten chapters I'll finally know what was the whole point of the story.

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Important Note!! Imperative!!!

Since I'm still in progress of rewriting this story the rewritten chapters are the ones that are indicated "Rewritten Chapter" or somewhere along the lines of that, but I'll do my best in making this as clear as possible. And now on with the story!!! Oh Yeah I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING OF SM!!!

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Chapter One: Ghost Ship? (Rewritten--something like this will be your indicator)

Midnight

The moon shown clear and bright, high in the dark velvet sky, filled with vast numbers of bright stars. Although the sky above seemed tranquil enough, an ominous fog covered the dark murky seawater below. Drifting in the middle of the sea was a lone ship and the mere sight of her crimson red flag was like an omen to all to be wary. However, to the eyes of thieves it was like a treasure chest waiting to be stolen and taken for themselves.

With the cover of the dense fog, a small boat boarded by five shadowed figures crept up next to the ship.

East Corridor

A lone female made her way through the dark corridors, quietly and cautiously searching through the dark cabins for anything that had a great value to it. Her raven hair, which was tied in a tight bun, and black attire allowed her to camouflage in the shadows. But her bright and keen amethyst eyes seemed to gleam and glow in the darkness. She had a bad feeling about tonight, an uneasy feeling nagging at the back of her mind, warning her that something was, without a doubt, very wrong with the ship. But since it wasn't her place to question where she was assigned to search she quickly dismissed it and continued onward.

The corner of her eye caught sight of a dim light on her left. She knew consciously in her mind not to approach the light, but curiosity got the best of her. The stealthy female pressed her back against the wall and took a deep breath before looking around the corner. Her eyes widened when she spotted where the single corridor led.

A lone door. It seemed to drift into the dark abyss, but it lured the female to it like a moth to flame. The door was made of strong red oak, the knob was pure gold, the doorknocker was also gold but in the designed of a winged griffin with bright molten ruby eyes that radiated with malice. Without thinking about the dire consequences, as if caught by some hypnotic spell, she turned the doorknob and ever so silently sneaked into the room.

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END!!! Yes end of the first chapter so what did you think of it?? If this doesn't work then I don't know what will and I'll probably give up this story. Well I desperately need your opinions so please review!!!! And I'll have a reward!!!