Hi Guys this is My first fan ficiton. It is going to be based purely on your reviews and suggestions. Leave suggestions in the reviews. I am new here so go easy one me.

Occurs after the Spix Macaws lose to the Scarlet macaws.

THIRD PERSON:

"BLU! GET OVER HERE YOU MORON. WHY DID YOU HAVE TO COME HERE IN THE FIRST PLACE? WHY DIDN'T YOU JUST STAY IN YOUR OWN TRIBE OF HUMAN?! JEWEL SHOULD HAVE CAME WITHOUT YOU! AS FOR BIA, CARLA AND TIAGO , THEY DESERVE SOMEONE BETTER! YOUR JUST A SORE LOSER. YOU JUST LOST OUR WHOLE BRAZIL NUT GROVE!DID YOU NOT HEAR WHAT I SAID DURING TRAINING, BRAZIL NUTS ARE OUR LIVES AND YOU PRACTICALLY JUST KILLED US. I'M GOING TO KILL YOU NOW YOU F%$#ING FANNY PACK!" Just as Eduardo was about to choke Blu with his huge talons, Roberto held him back. Jewel approached the now shocked Blu. " Blu... are you alright". Suddenly Blu just lost it. " AM I ALRIGHT? AM I ALRIGHT? I HAVE BEEN NOTHING BUT ALRIGHT. MY LIFE HERE HAS BEEN MISERABLE. MY OWN SPECIES HATES ME AND I AM TREATED AS THE OUTCAST. YOUR STUPID DAD KEEPS ON INSULTING ME AND I AM SEEN AS A PET. FOR THE RECORD IM NOT A PET I AM A COMPANION! EVERYTHING WAS GREAT UNTIL YOU WANTED TO GO TO THE AMAZON!. I HATE IT HERE. I WANT TO GO BACK!" The two tribes gasped. Did Blu really mean that? Then it was Jewels turn to yell. I JUST WANTED TO BE WITH OUR OWN SPECIES. YOU WERE TRAINING THE KIDS TO BE HUMANS. YOU WHERE TEACHING THEM TO BE HUMANS. WE ARE NOT HUMANS BLU WE ARE BIRD. I AM WRONG YOU ARE JUST A WEAK PET. I WISH I NEVER MET YOU!" After Jewel said that she covered her mouth with her primary feather. She always loved Blu and never wished to be apart from him. She is now worried that Blu might leave. " Im sorry Blu I did not mean to say ..." Suddenly she was interrupted by Blu" FINE THEN I WILL LEAVE. YOU ARE THE WORST BIRD SOMEONE COULD EVER HAVE! I WISH I NEVER MET YOU. MY LIFE WAS PERFECT IN MINNESOTA. I NEVER WANTED TO LEAVE THERE. EVER SINCE I HAVE BEEN PUSHED AROUND FROM THE SECOND I ARRIVED AT THE AVIARY. YOU KNOW WHAT! I'LL JUST GO LIVE WITH LINDA AND WRITE A NOT TO HER THAT YOU GOT KILLED SO SHE WONT LOOK FOR YOU ANYMORE! IM LEAVING MISERY ISLAND NOW. Just as blu was about to take off Jewel stopped him and begged him not to go. In response she got a shove from Blu. She watched as Blu flew away. She was weeping.

A little while after Blu left, both tribes were still at the Pit of Doom. The whole Spix tribe was trying to calm Jewel down as the Scarlet tribe was having a little meeting. All of a sudden, smoke appeared everywhere. Trees were falling down and there where horrible metal sounds coming from the trees. The loggers were here. The smoke made most of the birds from both sides pass out. The rest trying to escape where caught and put in cages. The loggers had agreed to work with the smugglers to make extra cash. Jewel was the only one still awake and not free. A few seconds later she saw nothing but black.

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