This is a rewhrite of the first chapter and this time its going to be better. Hopefully.

Chapter 1 What happened?

It was a normal day for two young hero's, but that would come to an end soon...

" Hey Dash! " Sonic had said as he was eating some chilly dogs and sounded a bit muffed from him chewing. He was running up to the cyan color hedgehog with rainbow colored hair knowed as Rainbow Dash.

Rainbow dash, on the other hand was sitting up against a big and tall Willo Tree, Reading the final session / Book of Daring Do, She was a bit upset that it was coming to an end but she wanted to make it last.

" Oh hey Sonic..." Rainbow dash said, not looking away from her book.

" What are you doing here? Aren't you suppose to be working in equestria?" He asked and sat down with his last two chilly dogs.

" Day off. " She said gaining more attention to the blue hedgehog.

" Okay, but question. Why are you on my planet? "

" Oh, Yeah. It was super noise and even in my house, I could hear filles screaming and egging pony's homes sooooooooo I came here to read the last Daring Do book. In peace. "

"Am I bothering you? " Sonic asked

" Nah, we can hang out in a minute, tho. If you want."

" Sounds cool. " Sonic scooted closer to Rainbow Dash and looked over to see what page she was on. 121. It had about 2 or 3 more pages left before the book ended. On a page was written,

Daring do made her last step to the golden fountain. She was in arms reach, so close but far then. Something was wrong. Daring Do wasn't moving. At all. And then she thought.

There is no point in this. Why do I do the things I do if I'm just taking people's pries positions? * She removed her hat.* I'm going home... No more people to stop, No more people to save.

And so this is the end of Daring Do's Adventures...

...The end... For now...

" Wow, What an ending hu Rainbow Dash? " Sonic looked a bit confused that she wouldn't break the golden fountain.

" Yep, I did not see that ending coming. I thought that she was going to destroy it from the bad guys. Man..."

" Got that right dashie. "

" I've told you not to call me that Sonic..." She looked a way with a pout face on and an embarrassed blush.

" Well no need to have a fit over it, let's do something fun."

" I'm not having a fit about it Sonic. " She standed up and brushed the left over grass off of her.

" Sure, sure... " He made his way up as well. " That's what they all say... "

" What the hay Sonic!? " her voice got a bit louder.

" Sorry sorry..." He said as he was about to eat one of the two chili dogs. The wind blew, faster and faster. Almost like a tornado was about to happen. It also blew the daring do book away as well.

" Oh! Twilight is going to kill me! S-sonic? What is going on?! " Rainbow dash began to get nervous.

" I don't know. Hey! Come back! " His two chili dogs got caught up in the wind. Soon the floor became transparent and was about to fall through.

" Rainbow Dash! " Sonic jumped to Rainbow Dash who was falling through the ground while screaming. Sonic came close enough to chach her and healed onto her to protect her from the impact.

"Sonic! " Rainbow dash yelled.

" Its okay! I got you! "

" Get ready for impact! It might hurt! " sonic yelled as he turned his back towards the ground and saved most of the fall from Rainbow Dash. He then closed his eyes and a big thud could be heard from around them.

" Ohhh... That's going to hurt in the morning. " Sonic said as he felt pain in his back.

" Rainbow Dash, are you okay? " Sonic asked as he opened his eyes to see that she had her arms around him. She sat up rubbing her head.

" Oww... That hurts... " Rainbow looked at Sonic. And then up to see his chili dogs falling.

Sonic gasps and shoves Rainbow Dash off of him aggressively and snatched the first Chilly dog and slid on the ground to get the other one.

'' OW! SONIC! THAT HURTS! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! '' Rainbow Dash yelled. Sonic SweetDroped.

" Sorry... hehe? '' Sonic got up and through his chill dogs in the air and helped Rainbow Dash up and quickly cached them.

And so the began to look around to be supirsed to see dark shadowy fingers around them.

''Please help me young hero's! '' A girl sounding voice said and Sonic and Rainbow Dash turned around to see who said that.

'' Oh i get it! Im used to this type of stuff! '' Sonic said and tossed one chill dog in the air and ate it, he then tossed the last one super high in the air and speed off and began to destroy the monsters whit Rainbow Dash joing.

'' Save some for me! '' Rainbow Dash yelled

" come on then! " he yelled over his shoulder. As he finished defeating the monsters. He quickly went back to the spot that he tossed his chill dog and aced the timing and chaught the chill dog. And there was one big man in black knight armor riding a horse that had body armor around it. Like a knight. ( ;_; ) Sonic was about to attack until that girl grabbed him and the wind began to pick up the speed. She then grabbed Rainbow Dash and pulled her over to her and sonic. And Sonic reached out to the chill dog that got chaugh up in the wind.

" NO! " and then they disappeared in the dust cloud.

{ To who knows where } The big man ridding his horse flew up to three other figures and began to speak in a accent.

" I do not want to see them again, get rid of them at once! " he said as he fleed off.

" Yes sir! "