Well, I have enjoyed my time writing this story and I hope that you have enjoyed reading it. This story has been coming out chapter by chapter as I finish them, so as you can imagine there are bits that I feel need to be changed, either because it was absolutely useless bits of waffle or to enhance the story. I'm going over this with a fine-tooth comb to correct grammar, spelling and punctuation, however I would like to know if there are bits in the story you feel should be cut, expanded on or, even bits I should leave as is.
There are two major changes that I will be doing:
1) Removing the parts that are not from Severus' POV, e.g. the part where Sirius is talking to Dumbledore after Severus has left the office.
2) The confrontation with Severus and Harry, I think it will be more in character if Severus didn't comfort Harry.
And there is a bit of the story that I'm not sure if I should drop or not, the scenes with the first year Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw in Potions. It's cute but it isn't that important to the story, I'm divided about it.
Once I have finished editing it, I'll post the final edition as a separate entry, it'll probably be in four to six weeks time.
All that is left for me to do is to thank my beta-reader who has helped and encouraged me – Deborah, many thanks, and also to my readers who have stuck it out with me – thank you and I hope you enjoyed this version.