Alexei - I WASN'T PLANNING ON WRITING A PART TWO, BUT THEN THIS HAPPENED! This little extra bit has a much different feel from the first part. I was originally going to post it as a separate fic, but like the first one this relies heavily on dialogue, and of course I ended up making reference to the first one anyway, so... I hope by the end that you're blushing with the uber gooey sweetness of it too :)
This one is MUCH shorter than the already short first part1 xD
Warning: Possible OOC, I tried to keep the characterness of the characters, but it's hard :(
/
"You know what I don't get?" Hinata turned onto her side, staring at the man she had just made love to. She rested her cheek her hands pressed flat into one of the surviving pillows.
Sasuke looked back at her, turning to mimic her position with a smirk. "You're not getting out of bed anytime soon, that's for sure."
Hinata blushed, averting her eyes with an embarrassed smile. "I'm trying to be serious, and you're making it very difficult."
"I hope you aren't expecting me to apologize for that." Even though they weren't touching, Hinata felt the same warmth as if she were being fully embraced: subtle glow of happiness surrounded her, caressing her skin. "What don't you get?"
She pulled one of her hands from under her head and touched his cheek. "I don't get how people describe you."
"What in the world are you talking about?" He used one of his own hands to grasp hers and guided it to his mouth, where he took the opportunity to kiss each finger. Hinata further flushed and buried her face in her pillow, mumbling about how she couldn't be expected to get any explanations out if he kept distracting her like that.
Sasuke chuckled, finishing his ministrations before relinquishing her hand to the space between them where he rested his own over it. Hinata peeked out, still a bright pink.
"Do you care to explain to me what you meant?" he inquired.
She bit her bottom lip. "I always hear other people say you have onyx eyes, but that just doesn't seem right to me." Sasuke raised an eyebrow. "I mean, onyx is such a… a d-dark way of describing your eyes, b-but they're not dark at all. They shine so much. They're so bright to me."
Hinata pursed her lips together, concentrating as she studied his features.
"And your hair…"
"What about my hair?" An unusual splash of pink dusted the male's cheeks. He wasn't expecting this to be what she wanted to say at all.
"Well…" She reached out again, running her fingers through the dark locks. "I've only heard others describe you as 'raven-haired' but that can't be right either." She closed some of the distance between them. "Raven's can't be this soft."
"Are you saying that I'm pretty, like a girl?" He asked, jokingly referring to their earlier conversation
Hinata ducked her head into his shoulder, as pink as humanly possible, and Sasuke could feel the heat that radiated off of her cheeks.
"You know," he wrapped his arms around her. "You have the most seemingly random thoughts I have ever heard of."
"I know," he heard from against his skin, and he chuckled at how breathy she sounded.
"There's something I don't get either, though." Hinata remained silent and he continued. "How can you lay there completely naked, discussing something that you're so obviously embarrassed about and not faint?"
There was no answer.
"Hinata?"
Sasuke pulled back to check on her then chuckled at what he saw.
She passed out against his shoulder.
/
Alexei: I'M SORRY! I'M NOT VERY GOOD AT LOVEY DOVEY WRITING! Frankly, being the uncomfortable-with-everything person that I am, I don't have much experience with these types of things.
I imagined their initial position like the one from Sookie's first dream of Eric in True Blood (cause I've been watching a lot of that lately).
Anywho, hope you liked :) I love feedback, it gives me incentive to write more.