Hello everyone! Finally I get my first story going. I am so excited to see how this goes so I really appreciate any feedback (advice) that I can use to help me improve. So I'm a huge fan of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles and I had this story with me for several years now, so that's why I am so pleased to be presenting this now. For the record, I do NOT own TMNT, only my OC's. With that said, let's get started:)!

Character Introduction

Name: Verena Ishtar

Age: 19

Race: Kennistarian

Physical Appearance: White fair skin, dark brown eyes(glow in the dark to white), black curly long hair, pink rosy lips, scars on her back, stomach, and chest area; her people are very close to being human

Personality: Kind, sweet, graceful, intelligent, honorable, strong, courageous, stubborn, and musical

Abilities: A highly skilled martial artist, can control all elements of her world what they call a Yin Warrior (water, earth, air, fire, lightning, metal, and light magic), gifted in psychic abilities

Weapon(s): Timaeus the Peacekeeper (a legendary sword that only Verena can carry; tall, white, shining blade with a sun and crescent moon-shaped guard

Loves: Singing, dancing, reading, meditating, flying in open spaces, training (both physical and magical), making others happy even when she isn't

Background: Verena is a princess from the peaceful planet of Kennistar. She is the young daughter of Alistair Ishtar (King), Aurora Ishtar (Queen), and little sister to Liza Ishtar (Princess and Queen in waiting). At the age of five she began learning from famous scholars and teachers throughout her planet and the galaxy, but when she turned seven, she began training in martial arts and her magical abilities. Even at a young age she had started training throughout the universe from well-known masters, however, most of her training came from her grandfather, Riordin Ishtar. Since then she has helped maintain peace being a Yin Warrior, who are said to be Warriors of the Gods, but still faces a great threat from the dark benders (who use pure Black Magic to defeat their foes) and their leaders: Nathias and Nanuke. Now Verena will soon face a threat so evil that will put all she has learned her whole life to the ultimate test and puts her destiny on the line.

I hope you all liked this introduction to my character, although to me it sounded better in my head. Well either way, I would really love some reviews on this so far and I'll have more chapters up soon, but with school going on right now we'll have to wait and see. Thanks everyone!