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Disclaimer:
I do not own Harvest Moon, or any of it's characters, their respective owners do.. etc, blah,blah,blah. Same routine for everyone.
Stuff About Me:
This is my first FanFic. And I hope that all of you will enjoy it. C'Ya!
Rating: PG (May Contain Dialogues,Etc. That May Offend Certain Audiences)
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Harvest Moon BTN: [Gray's Revenge]
PROLOGUE
It's already been 3 years since Jack moved in and took care of his grandfather's farm. It was time for his wedding, his bride-to-be was Karen and everyone was happy during the ceremony except for one person... Gray.
He began to feel anger since his first day in Mineral Town at the blacksmith shop. And his anger grew more when Jack moved in, because Jack was able to get used to life in Mineral Town and the townspeople like him.
Not wanting to feel like a total loser, he does the unthinkable... He called those dudes who collect debts and stuff like that, and he tells them that Mineral Town owes them $1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000.67 (or something like that)
Chapter 1 : Spring : [Wedding Day]
As the wedding of Karen and Jack approached, everyone was tingling with excitement. Even more excited were the couple themselves.
"I can't wait for the wedding day Karen." Jack said.
"Yeah, I can't wait either. It's gonna be the happiest day of our lives." Karen replied with a hug.
"Oh ho ho, It seems the couple is getting impatient before the wedding!" Mayor Thomas said as he entered Jack's house.
Jack & Karen blush, Mayor Thomas hands Jack a small jewelry box.
"What's this?" Jack asked when he received the box.
"Well, just open it. It's my token for your wedding, I hope you two live a happy life together."
Jack opened the box to find a pair of beautiful rings.
"They're so beautiful!" Karen shouted with glee.
"They look expensive, Mayor. Where did you get such a beautiful pair?" Jack questioned.
Mayor Thomas puts his hand on Jack's shoulder and said, "Those rings were given to me by your grandfather before he died and told me to keep it until the day you were to be married."
"Really?"
"Yes, And he said to me that you should live a happy life on the farm as he did."
"Thank you Mayor." Jack said.
"You shouldn't thank me Jack. Thank your grandfather."
Jack looked into the sky through the window and thought, "Thank You."
And soon enough, the day of the wedding had come. And everyone was filled with joy for the couple.
*Bells ring*
"Is there anyone who think that these two shoudn't be married?"
At that moment, Then 8 men in suits marched into the chapel carrying large suitcases.
As the men marched in, Jack yelled,
"What the hell?! What're you people doing here?"
"We're here to let you all know that Mineral Town is now the property of 'Industry Industries Inc.' I would like to know who among you would be the mayor?"
The mayor raised his hand, "That would be me, sir."
"Well Mayor, I would like to inform you that Mineral Town is now under the direct control of Industry Industries Inc. as well as the denizens herein." The man said with stern face.
"But How could this be? Would you please explain this to me?!,"
The man in the suit and the mayor discuss the debts of Mineral Town. The townspeople watch in disdain as the mayor ends the discussion with a sorrowful frown.
The mayor turned to the people and said, "It seems that Mineral Town and it's people now belong to Industry Industries Inc."
Angrily, Jack shouted, "What?! I can't allow this!" Then Jack hurled himself at the man and tackled him.
But the other dudes grabbed him and tossed him onto the pedestal then Karen rushed to his aid.
Stu ran out of the chapel to tell the doctor. And when he got to the clinic...
"Doctor, doctor, Jack hit his head on the thingy at the chapel." Stu told the doctor.
"What?! Jack's hurt?" Elli said as she came from the upper floor.
"Uh huh, some mean men came into the chapel and threw him onto the thingy..."
"Elli, let's hurry." said the doctor as he fixed his bag and equipment.
The doctor, Elli and Stu rush to the chapel.
But while Stu ran to the Clinic...
Jack laid on the pedestal base, Karen rushed to him and asked, "Honey, Are you alright?!"
But Jack had hit his head and fell unconscious, Karen was worried and so were the townspeople.
"He had better not get in our way Mayor, or else the whole town pays." said the stern dude.
Then the dude and and his posse stormed off through the door.
The mayor walked towards Karen and asked, "Is Jack alright?"
Karen fell into tears seeing her fiance unconscious and the fact that she wasn't able to do anything for him.
"I'm not sure, he's unconscious, but they might have injured his head." Karen answered the mayor.
"Don't worry Karen, Jack will be alright... I'm sure he will, after all he was able to restore his grandfathers' farm. He can handle this..." Rick said trying to reassure Karen.
Everyone was just stunned at what happened, then Barley asked,
"Don't just stand there! Someone call the doctor!"
Just then, the doctor & Elli burst into the chapel after hearing what had happened from Stu.
"Well, that was quick..." Barley remarked.
"I heard that Jack was thrown and fell unconscious, Can I see him?" asked the doctor.
"Please! Make sure he's alright!" pleaded Karen to the doctor.
Karen just kept on crying, everyone saw how Karen loved Jack because no one ever saw Karen cry that much.
"Don't worry, I'll do everything I can." ths doctor answered as he checked Jack.
"The doctor will do everything he can, and I'll do all I can too, so I can help the doctor."
All everyone could do was watch as the doctor diagnosed Jack.
The air was tense in the chapel and no voice could be heard. No one had noticed that it had begun to rain.
A soft, sorrowful rain showered over Mineral Town that day... a day that the denizens of Mineral Town will never forget...
Here ends 'Chapter 1: Wedding Day'
The story continues in 'Chapter 2 : Soft Rain'
[How's the remake of the Chapter?]
[Please R&R!]
Disclaimer:
I do not own Harvest Moon, or any of it's characters, their respective owners do.. etc, blah,blah,blah. Same routine for everyone.
Stuff About Me:
This is my first FanFic. And I hope that all of you will enjoy it. C'Ya!
Rating: PG (May Contain Dialogues,Etc. That May Offend Certain Audiences)
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Harvest Moon BTN: [Gray's Revenge]
PROLOGUE
It's already been 3 years since Jack moved in and took care of his grandfather's farm. It was time for his wedding, his bride-to-be was Karen and everyone was happy during the ceremony except for one person... Gray.
He began to feel anger since his first day in Mineral Town at the blacksmith shop. And his anger grew more when Jack moved in, because Jack was able to get used to life in Mineral Town and the townspeople like him.
Not wanting to feel like a total loser, he does the unthinkable... He called those dudes who collect debts and stuff like that, and he tells them that Mineral Town owes them $1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000.67 (or something like that)
Chapter 1 : Spring : [Wedding Day]
As the wedding of Karen and Jack approached, everyone was tingling with excitement. Even more excited were the couple themselves.
"I can't wait for the wedding day Karen." Jack said.
"Yeah, I can't wait either. It's gonna be the happiest day of our lives." Karen replied with a hug.
"Oh ho ho, It seems the couple is getting impatient before the wedding!" Mayor Thomas said as he entered Jack's house.
Jack & Karen blush, Mayor Thomas hands Jack a small jewelry box.
"What's this?" Jack asked when he received the box.
"Well, just open it. It's my token for your wedding, I hope you two live a happy life together."
Jack opened the box to find a pair of beautiful rings.
"They're so beautiful!" Karen shouted with glee.
"They look expensive, Mayor. Where did you get such a beautiful pair?" Jack questioned.
Mayor Thomas puts his hand on Jack's shoulder and said, "Those rings were given to me by your grandfather before he died and told me to keep it until the day you were to be married."
"Really?"
"Yes, And he said to me that you should live a happy life on the farm as he did."
"Thank you Mayor." Jack said.
"You shouldn't thank me Jack. Thank your grandfather."
Jack looked into the sky through the window and thought, "Thank You."
And soon enough, the day of the wedding had come. And everyone was filled with joy for the couple.
*Bells ring*
"Is there anyone who think that these two shoudn't be married?"
At that moment, Then 8 men in suits marched into the chapel carrying large suitcases.
As the men marched in, Jack yelled,
"What the hell?! What're you people doing here?"
"We're here to let you all know that Mineral Town is now the property of 'Industry Industries Inc.' I would like to know who among you would be the mayor?"
The mayor raised his hand, "That would be me, sir."
"Well Mayor, I would like to inform you that Mineral Town is now under the direct control of Industry Industries Inc. as well as the denizens herein." The man said with stern face.
"But How could this be? Would you please explain this to me?!,"
The man in the suit and the mayor discuss the debts of Mineral Town. The townspeople watch in disdain as the mayor ends the discussion with a sorrowful frown.
The mayor turned to the people and said, "It seems that Mineral Town and it's people now belong to Industry Industries Inc."
Angrily, Jack shouted, "What?! I can't allow this!" Then Jack hurled himself at the man and tackled him.
But the other dudes grabbed him and tossed him onto the pedestal then Karen rushed to his aid.
Stu ran out of the chapel to tell the doctor. And when he got to the clinic...
"Doctor, doctor, Jack hit his head on the thingy at the chapel." Stu told the doctor.
"What?! Jack's hurt?" Elli said as she came from the upper floor.
"Uh huh, some mean men came into the chapel and threw him onto the thingy..."
"Elli, let's hurry." said the doctor as he fixed his bag and equipment.
The doctor, Elli and Stu rush to the chapel.
But while Stu ran to the Clinic...
Jack laid on the pedestal base, Karen rushed to him and asked, "Honey, Are you alright?!"
But Jack had hit his head and fell unconscious, Karen was worried and so were the townspeople.
"He had better not get in our way Mayor, or else the whole town pays." said the stern dude.
Then the dude and and his posse stormed off through the door.
The mayor walked towards Karen and asked, "Is Jack alright?"
Karen fell into tears seeing her fiance unconscious and the fact that she wasn't able to do anything for him.
"I'm not sure, he's unconscious, but they might have injured his head." Karen answered the mayor.
"Don't worry Karen, Jack will be alright... I'm sure he will, after all he was able to restore his grandfathers' farm. He can handle this..." Rick said trying to reassure Karen.
Everyone was just stunned at what happened, then Barley asked,
"Don't just stand there! Someone call the doctor!"
Just then, the doctor & Elli burst into the chapel after hearing what had happened from Stu.
"Well, that was quick..." Barley remarked.
"I heard that Jack was thrown and fell unconscious, Can I see him?" asked the doctor.
"Please! Make sure he's alright!" pleaded Karen to the doctor.
Karen just kept on crying, everyone saw how Karen loved Jack because no one ever saw Karen cry that much.
"Don't worry, I'll do everything I can." ths doctor answered as he checked Jack.
"The doctor will do everything he can, and I'll do all I can too, so I can help the doctor."
All everyone could do was watch as the doctor diagnosed Jack.
The air was tense in the chapel and no voice could be heard. No one had noticed that it had begun to rain.
A soft, sorrowful rain showered over Mineral Town that day... a day that the denizens of Mineral Town will never forget...
Here ends 'Chapter 1: Wedding Day'
The story continues in 'Chapter 2 : Soft Rain'
[How's the remake of the Chapter?]
[Please R&R!]