Unforgivable

A/N: ok so this is my first story in a couple years and I want feed back. Just please no flames I wont complain about it next chapter if I decide to continue I would just like to see feedback.

Percy is a son of kronus and he knows all about the gods and he supports them because kronus raped his mother. There is only going to be mentions of this no flashback of it because thats gross and messed up. He is 12 and im going to try and stick with the story Rick wrote but I may skip parts because I think it would fit the story. Also for those who are reading this thank you and you will know that the great prophecy was changed to 'the half-blood of the titan king' because im not going to have some other character take on kronus.

NOW ON TO THE STORY.

Hi my names Percy (Perseus) Jackson. Im a half-blood of a unfortunate event that I will kill my father for. My mom (Sally) is the nicest lady in the world and she could do anything she wanted but she chose to stay and work with a very fat tuskless walrus. And not the cute kind. Gabe is my step father he drinks every day and used to beat my mom. I say used to because I saw it one day and summoned a creature (which I learned later was a hellhound) to help her. Gabe was in the hospital for 5 days and mom explained why she was with him and what I was. I am a half-blood or demi-titan. As demi-titans we have various control over our parents domain just like children of the gods. My mother can see through the mist which is a mystical force that blocks nose mortals. The only difference is that demi-titans turn immortal when they reach the age of 20, but that doesn't happen often because of Zeus's paranoia.

"..cy, Percy" someone nudged me. I must have dozed off I looked around and I was on a bus. Ohh yeah, thats right I was on my way to a museum to learn about greek history and stuff. I looked at the person next to me and saw Grover. Grover is a satyr that was sent to look after me... he wont ever leave me alone. See I know Grover messed up on his first assignment and got a girl killed but him trying to be buddy buddy isnt working. I like him but he can be annoying.

"Percy Gods you scared me you wouldn't wake up and..." see.

"Grover relax im fine I didn't sleep at all last night so im tired." I know hes annoying but he's still my friend. Unlike children of Zeus I don't have a hunger for power or anything like that. My fatal flaw is loyalty I don't know why but it is so I would do anything in my power to protect a friend. So when a pencil flew by my head and was about to hit Grover in the eye I did the natural thing. I stopped time, my father is kronus so I can do that just, not for hours at a time just like a minute or two. I turned to see Nancy grinning. I turned back to Grover and saw his wide eyes staring at the pencil I moved the pencil about and inch to the left and played time. The pencil continued its set course and threw the bus window.

"All right everybody off the bus we are at our destination." A cackling type voice said. the most annoying monster ever. Through out the tour we answered various question until.

"Mr. Jackson will you mind telling us what this painting is off" Mr. Brunner said. Thankfully I knew the answer.

"That Mr. Brunner is the titan lord kronus eating his children. He did this because he feared to be over thrown and so he ate them. This in turn caused just that to happen because of his fear of losing power."

"That was excellent Mr. Jackson seems your going to do just fine on the big test coming up."

"Why do we even care this was like 13 billion years ago." Nancy mutters.

"To rephrase Ms. Nancy's question why would we need to know this Percy." I grinned and told him.

"Incase you were a demi-god" Mr. Brunner froze "if they existed or it just helps to be smarter that some." Mr. Brunner relaxed and said.

"Very good Percy now I remember why you're my top student. Alright everybody out for lunch". I left and was talking with Grover when I saw a group of girls out of the corner of my eye. I turned slightly and saw beautiful silver eyes staring at me through a bush. I was going to say something when a sandwich hit me in the back of the head. I froze then relaxed as another one came bye and I ducked. The sandwich flew by and landed on the pavement. I turned to see Nancy laughing with her friends and gave her the bird. I turned to see Grover muffle a laugh until a rock barely missed me and nailed Grover in the head. The rock cut open Grover's forehead and started to bleed. Grover passed out and started moaning what sounded like food. I didn't know, I was to far gone seeing my friends blood. Pure energy and power rushed through me and I saw black as my darker side came out to play. This was unforgivable.

Really hope you guys like it. Like I said first story in about 2 years so review though you don't have to. I recommend you guys read anaklusmos14's stories because there amazing along with Theseuslives and Plutos daughter 11