[Edit: 08/10/2014:- Tidied up the story a bit, beginning of re-edit. Several major changes made to the story line this time around. Changed the base avatar after catching up on Naruto manga and decided to make a new character to choose from. Began working to a chapter guide and will begin detailing a bit more about her progress in training and the events that revolve around her. Additionally, I have changed the kekkei I had created but the Uzumakiton will still have involvements in the story as we go along. Props to any author who have used the same idea before me!]
So how're we doing? I'm back with a new story! This new story is based on an fanfic from Majin Hentai X, called 'Naruto: Game of the Year Edition'. If you haven't read it, do! I'm using something like that format but making things a bit more interesting and chaotic! Mwahahahahaha! (Also, due to the base story hasn't been updated since May, and I'm impatient.)
All copyrights go to the people who own all this stuff and to Majin for the storyline. (hope you're not too peeved)!
Without further ado, let the game begin!
(Notes: I've decided to remove all the chapters uploaded except for these two as I'll have to work to the new small changes. Also, leaving them up would confuse a lot of you people on where the story currently lies. Apologies about that but these two chapters should be enough to sate your tastes for now! And yeah, the chapter titles will probably change...
Also, we smashed the 100k view barrier with the nine chapters and now dwindled back down to nineteen. However, I'm so incredibly happy and We'll see if we can hit it once again!) :)
"Normal Speech"
'Inner Thoughts/Flashback'
"Inward Speaking/Whispering"
"Entities/Biju Speaking"
"Entities Inward Speaking/Loud and Multiple Voices"
'Entities/Biju Thoughts'
"Jutsu!"
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Chapter One: Rebirthing
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Chapter Soundtrack: Rebirthing - Skillet
(Unknown Location)
He tried. By Kami, he tried everything he could physically do to save his precious people but no-one would've believed how things had turned out, leading to his downfall. At the root of the problem was the very same person who accepted to help him out, only to find it was a ruse as he sabotaged their plans by leaking information to the enemy. No matter how hard the group fought against the enemy, they all knew there was no hope of leaving alive. They sacrificed themselves for the sake of the only person they believed who would fight in their stead and enact their revenge.
That would've been the plan if not for Sasuke's betrayal.
The plan was perfect. With the power of all nine biju dwelling inside of him, he honestly thought he had a slither of chance to stand up against the formidable duo: Madara Uchiha, the pinnacle of the power of the Sharingan and Rinnegan, and Kaguya Otsutsuki... the mother of the Rikudo Sennin. With the power of Shukaku, the Ichibi no Tanuki, integrated into his Rasengan, he would have finally been able to seal Madara's chakra flow and cancel the effects of the Edo Tensei that had initially revived him. Kaguya would be much more difficult but he was betting on a gamble with the Gedo Statue reclaiming its power from her and restoring it to the Shinju Tree.
He never got the chance as the two of them appeared to ambush him from both sides, who took their time to explain how Sasuke had been the internal spy for the two of them. He didn't act on that information as the biju that was once inside of him decided that there was no other choice but to use one last, desperate, maneuver to end the conflict.
Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze: Son of the Yondaime Hokage, Minato Namikaze, and Kushina Uzumaki, the previous container of the Kyuubi no Yoko... turned into a willing chakra bomb. With tears flowing down his face as he bore the guilt of condemning this world to its oblivion he merely whispered a word, yet it was loud enough for everyone to hear...
"Kai."
There was unimaginable pain coursing through his body as his chakra coils were physically burst open from the excess chakra flooding his body but the pain didn't stay for long as a white flash engulfed everything into nothingness. All that remained was darkness.
It was in the never-ending darkness that graced the void-like realm that a young figure continued to slowly float through the void as a small light appeared around his form; the only source of light in this place. After what seemed like an eternity, the white glow pulsed into action as the unidentifiable body was slowly healed to perfection: broken bones, punctured lungs, major organ damage, exploded chakra coils, everything restored to what it was before.
It was a few minutes before the eyes moved underneath his eyelids, motioning that he was waking up. Fluttering his eyes open, he immediately attuned himself to the darkness.
"... huh?"
"..."
"Where am I?"
"..."
"Hello? Is anyone there?" the figure shouted, a hint of fear and anxiety laced his voice as his body gradually appeared to him. Having checked his limbs his mind kicked itself into action, hoping he'd wake up from this... emptiness. "Anyone? Please!" he shouted again, pleading with all the deities that he would escape this cursed place as the cold pangs of fear crawled up and down his spine; a feeling he knew too well. It was his worst enemy but, at the same time, his consistent companion...
Resigned to his fate, memories blurred into view in a bright light which blinded the figure for a short while. He couldn't run, he couldn't hide; he couldn't deny the stupid mistakes he made as they rolled past his weary eyes, one by one. The mistake as he lost those important to him, forced events before its time and the mistake of being so wrapped up in his naïvety. He knew he had messed up. These memories burned themselves into his mind, acting as a constant reminder of his mistakes. That was all before the last moments of his life, not knowing that it had only been a total of half hour since these events had passed, that drove the nails home. Each death of his friends, the betrayal of Sasuke, the look of regret and acceptance as he resigned to deliver the final blow... the destroyer of the Elemental Nations and the world. As tears fell from his clenched eyes, he yelled out to any and all the deities watching over him in a loud cry...
"If there's any way to change my mistakes and prevent this from happening again, I promise on whoever hears me that I will do everything to redeem myself!"
Naruto's breath hitched in his throat as he, out of the corner of his eye, catches a glimpse of light rushing towards him, hoping that this 'light' could offer a way out of this nightmare. The light soon split into a cluster of spheres and glows as they began to rearrange themselves, where he finally notices that the 'lights' shifted into letters and numbers. Glancing upwards, Naruto begins to read the words that appeared before him:
GAME OVER!
Age: Sixteen; 160 points
Skills Acquired:
Henge: 10 points (triple score for Oroike Variant)
Kawarimi: 10 points
Chakra Control: Levels I, II: 20 points
Kage Bunshin: 50 points
Rasengan: 75 points (triple score for basic variants)
Rasenshuriken: 300 points
Summoning: Toads: 100 points
Sage Mode: Toad: 500 points
Kurama: 2000 points
Sage Mode: Fox/Toad: 2000 points
Shukaku: 2000 points
Matatabi: 2000 points
Isobu: 2000 points
Son Goku: 2000 points
Kokuo: 2000 points
Saiken: 2000 points
Chomei: 2000 points
Gyuki: 2000 points
Second Sage of Six Paths: 15000 points
Opponents Defeated:
Haku: 25 points
Kiba: 25 points
Neji: 25 points
Gaara: 75 points
Shukaku: 1000 points
Kabuto: 100 points
Deidara: 250 points
Kakuzu: 250 points
Pain: 500 points
Raikage: 500 points
White Zetsu (2749): 27490 points
Obito: 5000 points
Subtotal: 61385 points
Deductions
Kyuubi's Chakra (Youki) (17): -850 points
Lost Precious People
Haku: -50 points
Kin: -50 points
Sasuke: -250 points
Hiruzen: -500 points
Neji: -250 points
Gaara: -1000 points
Fu: -1000 points
Yugito: -1000 points
Nagato: -1000 points
Konan: -1000 points
Jiraiya: -2000 points
Events
Failed Academy (3): -600 points
Orochimaru's Curse Seal: -500 points
Sasuke's Defection: -500 points
Gaara's Capture - 1500 points
Fourth Great Shinobi War: -5000 points
Obito summons Juubi: -5000 points
Madara Resurrected: -5000 points
Tsukyomi: -10000 points
Destroying the World: -50000 points
Misc
Broke Nindo (4): -4000 points
Died in Battle (2): -1000 points
Died a Virgin: -1000 points
Subtotal: -101200 points
Total Score: -31665 points
Rating: Teme!
Karma: Positive: Martyr
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Bonuses Unlocked!
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Negative Score: Unlocked 'Dobe' Naruto!
Gaara/Shukaku Defeated: Unlocked 'Evil' Naruto/Menma!
Raikage Defeated: Unlocked Item: "Lightning Gauntlets"!
Obito Defeated: Unlocked Item: "Juubi no Kamiryu" (Summon); Naruto Uchiha!
Oroike Jutsu Created: Unlocked Naruko!
Martyr: Unlocked Item: "Fusion Sword" (Weapon)!
Kurama: Unlocked 'Hanyou' Naruto!
Kurama/Oroike: Unlocked 'Hanyou' Naruko!
'FFanboy': Unlocked 'Cloud' Naruto!
Second Sage of Six Paths: Unlocked 'Biju-Tamer' Naruko; All Biju Summons!
"Biju-Gauntlet Mode!"
(In-Game Mini-game; accessible via hidden portals. Complete to earn prizes!)
"Kyuubi Storyline!"
(What happens when YOU become the Kyuubi?)
Cheat Menu Option
Soundtrack Option
Avatar Selection Option (accessible twice between save points, not-accessible during quests)
UNLOCKED: ? ? ? ?
(In-Game. Bonus Character...)
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CONTINUE? YES/NO
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"What the hell?" he yelled, a little perplexed by these turn of events. He glanced down at the two flashing options, noticing the choice he has. "So... if this thing is right, then I'm dead. Wait, if I'm dead, then how the hell am I here?" Naruto growled, grabbing fists full of his hair, attempting to rip it out. Realizing that pulling his hair will result in more harm than help, Naruto floats over to the options and touches the YES option. The writing that appeared before him grew in light before enveloping the blonde in white light.
-N:LR-
(Unknown Location)
The light soon faded from obscuring Naruto's view, only to see himself standing in a void of pure white. Glancing around at his surroundings, the blonde began walking in an unknown direction; shortly obstructed by more letters appearing out of nowhere, revealing more words. Unlike last time, the letters were glowing a navy blue with options, it seemed:
NEW GAME
LOAD GAME
EXTRAS
OPTIONS
HELP
CHEATS
"Okay, I've lost it!" Naruto grumbled, proverbial rain-cloud overhead. He took another glance at the selections, deciding what would be the best plan of attack from here. After a few moments of deciding, he hits the HELP selection. In which case, the words began to transform as a new set of options appeared before him.
NEW GAME:
This option allows you to start a new game of 'Naruto: Legend Reborn'.
LOAD GAME:
This option allows to load a previously saved game of 'Naruto: Legend Reborn'.
EXTRAS:
This option allows you to examine all the Avatars you've unlocked, and check their stats and requirements to unlock additional avatars. You can also check out your Items and your bonuses you've unlocked during the main story.
OPTIONS:
This option allows you to configure FX Volume and Audio Volume of gameplay.
HELP:
This option allows you to access the HELP menu.
*CHEATS:*
Once unlocked, this allows you to enter passwords to unlock additional items, bonuses and other various unlockables.
"Naruto: Legend Reborn?" he quipped. "You mean to tell me that I'm stuck in a damn video game?" he yelled, getting silence in response.
"... I'm in hell." Naruto finally concluded. "From the way this looks, I'm guessing I'm stuck in a video game! What did I do to deserve this... " he trailed off, as a thought came to the front of his mind. "But this means... I've got a second chance." he whispered as tears fell down his face again. "I-I have another chance. S-Someone heard me..." he smiled as the tears continued to burst forth. With trembling hands he pressed the back button to return to the main screen. He took a few moments to compose himself before he turned his attention back to the oddity before him.
"Okay, let's see what we've got..." Naruto trailed off, selecting the LOAD option. Out of nowhere, a large buzz sounded as the words, 'NO SAVED DATA!' flashed before his eyes for a second before disappearing back to the main menu. "I didn't think that would do anything. Huh? What's this?" Naruto pondered, clicking the CHEATS option.
*Poof!*
"... passwords? Okay, ummmm, let's try these..." Naruto trailed off. Being none the wiser, he took the opportunity to rattle his brain for possible passwords, hoping that something would work.
PASSWORD ACCEPTED: RAMEN
Unlocked Item: 'Ichiraku Ramen: VIP Card'
PASSWORD ACCEPTED: MINATO
Unlocked Feature: 'Kekkei Kreator'
PASSWORD ACCEPTED: KUSHINA
Unlocked Item: 'Crimson Death' (Weapon)
"I honestly didn't think that would work." he blinked a few times. "Now as much as I want to stay and spam cheat codes off the top of my head, I think it's time we get down to business..." the blond sighed as he returned back to the main menu screen, floating in front of him like it was natural. Taking a quick check of his mental state, he finally pushed the NEW GAME selection. Once the main menu faded from view, another two options appeared in place:
Normal Mode: Naruto's Story
Kyuubi Mode: Kurama's Story
Naruto paused for a moment as he took the options into consideration. "Y'know, I've always wondered what it'd be like to live in Kurama's shoes but I'm sticking to being me." He quickly chose the top option, letting the words fade away once more before the entire space grew into a blinding white light, enveloping the blond.
-N:LR-
(Naruto's Apartment: Bedroom)
Once the light finally died down, Naruto took a moment to take in his surroundings, feeling the nostalgia hit him once he realized he was in his bedroom once again. The room was simple in design: single bed, drawers, wardrobe and a mirror. On the far wall was a poster of a video-game he once played back in his previous lifetime about a group of people fighting to save the planet from an ultimate attack called 'Meteor'. He snorted as he realized how close he was to having the same happened when Madara called down two of them.
Back at hand, Naruto noticed that his drawers and mirror began glowing in a myriad of colours, attracting him to check out the anomaly. He quickly stood in front of the mirror to see a swirling, distorted reflection of himself. "Can anyone hear me?" he shouted. Out of nowhere, a pop-up box appeared in front of him as letters were quickly typed to interact.
YES?
"You can hear me?"
YES.
"Oh, thank Kami-sama that someone knows what's going on around here! Uh... what's going on?" he sheepishly asked. If he had known better, he could tell that the pop-up box just sweat-dropped.
FOR NOW, THAT IS NOT IMPORTANT. WHAT IS IMPORTANT IS THAT YOU PLAY. I TAKE IT THAT YOU DO NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT TO DO?
"No, sorry. This is the first I've seen anything like this before." he nodded. "Then again, it's not every day you find yourself living inside a video game after all." he huffed, giving the box an incredulous look.
THAT IS FINE. I WILL EXPLAIN THINGS TO YOU AS WE GO. FOR NOW, WALK UP TO THE MIRROR.
Deciding that this box... thing would be reasonable enough to help him, he took the few steps across his room until he was face to face with the mirror fixed to the wall. "Right..."
NOW TOUCH THE MIRROR AND CHOOSE YOUR AVATAR.
"M-My what now?" Naruto asked. "What the hell is an Avatar?"
AVATAR; YOUR CHARACTER YOU WANT TO LIVE AS. UNLIKE NORMAL, YOU CAN CHOOSE TO PLAY A CHARACTER THAT HAS DIFFERENT ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES TO PLAY WITH, MAKING THIS GAME A BIT MORE INTERESTING TO PLAY. YOU CAN ONLY CHOOSE THE AVATARS THAT ARE NOT BLACKED OUT. ONCE YOU DO THAT, I WILL RETURN TO GUIDE YOU TO THE NEXT STEP.
"O-Oh, okay, thanks!" Naruto smiled, turning his attention back to the warping mirror where he noticed another mirror forming out of the side of the original. Naruto inspects the mirror to find two arrow-like grooves on each side of the frame. Letting curiosity take lead, he pushed on the right arrow, finding that the reflection in the mirror had changed to a person that was not his own. "Huh? Who's this?" he asked, inspecting the figure in the mirror.
'Dobe' Naruto
STR: Low
INT: Low
CHA: Very High
CON: Minimal
Bonus: N/A
Description: Naruto Uzumaki; the child of Kushina Uzumaki and Minato Namizake, the Yondaime Hokage of Konohagakure. Having sacrificed his son, Minato sealed away the Kyuubi into the new-born child. However, the Kyuubi managed to damage some of Naruto's internal structure, leaving him fragile and mentally deficient. This avatar is, bluntly, the worst of them all. Don't choose this unless you want a challenge.
Choose this Avatar? YES/NO
"He looks... even more idiotic than I do." he sweat-dropped. The figure staring back at him had a far away look in his eyes as if he was seeing something in the distance or just not paying attention. "Next?"
'Evil' Naruto/Menma
STR: Very High
INT: Very High
CHA: Very High
CON: Very High
Bonus: 'Psychopath', 'Bloodlust', Negative Karma (Permanent), Demonic Items Eligable.
Description: Naruto Uzumaki; the child of Kushina Uzumaki and Minato Namizake, the Yondaime Hokage of Konohagakure. Having sacrificed his son, Minato sealed away the Kyuubi into the new-born child. After suffering a traumatic life experience, Naruto lost the will to hold back the demon, letting him take over his body. In turn, the blonde grew sadistic and bloodthirsty, leaving him lusting for power. This avatar has very good stats but will be difficult in completing the game, due to his demonic influence.
Choose this Avatar? YES/NO
"No way!" he defiantly yelled. "I didn't give in last time and I won't do it again!" he proclaimed, hitting the arrow button once more.
Naruto Uchiha-
"I'm not gonna even think about choosing that! I don't want to act like an egotistical ducktard! The only ones decent from the Uchiha would probably be Itachi and Mikoto-chan. Anyway, next?" Naruto spoke to himself, browsing through the choices. "Huh? W-Wait... Naruko!?"
Naruko Uzumaki
STR: Low
INT: Medium
CHA: Very High
CON: High
Bonus: +20 Charm (Permanent), +20 Luck (Permanent), 'Silver-Tongued', 'Flirt'.
Description: Naruko Uzumaki; the child of Kushina Uzumaki and Minato Namizake, the Yondaime Hokage of Konohagakure. Having sacrificed his daughter, Minato sealed away the Kyuubi into the new-born child. Despite the rough childhood she endured, she turns out a mentally stable and care-free girl with a 'happy go-lucky' attitude on life. This avatar is for those who prefer the use of jutsu more than hand-to-hand combat. Her abilities allow her to 'strut her stuff' for men to look at, only to get what she wants... of course.
Choose this Avatar? YES/NO
"Hmmmm... never thought about being a girl before. Not in a non-transformed state, anyway. I wonder... let's see what else we got!" he pondered, greatly intrigued by the choice.
Cloud Uzumaki
STR: Extremely High
INT: High
CHA: N/A
CON: N/A
Bonus: +20 Strength (Permanent), +20 Defence (Permanent), 'Fusion Sword' (Permanent), 'Materia Converter' (Permanent), 'Limit Break' (Permanent).
Description: Giving birth to a young child, Kushina Uzumaki and Minato Namikaze named the boy Cloud. Having the soul of a SOLDIER embedded within him, he gained the past memories of his former life. Now, given a new life and a new challenge, he sets to take the shinobi world by storm. Unable to mold chakra, Cloud created a device to convert chakra into orbs of energy known as 'Materia'. Using the materia, it allows Cloud to use techniques similar to the shinobi; not forgetting his Fusion Sword and the damage it can do. His 'Limit Break' ability allows you to slowly build your anger and unleash it in various ways.
Choose this Avatar? YES/NO
"Oh. My. Kami-sama. This... just... I... l-let's move on..." Naruto stammered. There are very few moments where Naruto would be caught speechless. The next choice was definitely one of them.
'Hanyou' Naruto Uzumaki
STR: Extremely High
INT: Low
CHA: Extremely High
CON: Very High
Bonus: +25 Base Stats (Permanent), 'Blood-lust', 'Heightened Fear', 'Adamantine', Demonic Items Eligable.
Description: Naruto Uzumaki; the child of Kushina Uzumaki and Minato Namizake, the Yondaime Hokage of Konohagakure. Having sacrificed his son, Minato sealed away the Kyuubi into the new-born child. Unlike popular belief, the Kyuubi wasn't as evil as everyone made out... especially when the Kyuubi was a 'she!' Training Naruto under her tutelage, she had to do a special seal which transformed Naruto into a hanyou (half-demon, half-human). His abilities places him in a sensitive place with the villagers. Having learnt of his transformation, they mercilessly shun the boy, leaving him on the edge of his sanity. The choice you make throughout the story will decide which way he tips: for good, or for bad.
Choose this Avatar? YES/NO
"Wow this looks appealing! Trained by the Kyuubi... that's awesome, dattebayo!" he fist pumped. However, it was safe to say that this next choice would be the deciding factor...
'Hanyou' Naruko Uzumaki
STR: High
INT: High
CHA: Extremely High
CON: Perfect
Bonus: +25 Base Stats (Permanent), +50 Charm (Permanent), +50 Luck (Permament), 'Silver-Tongued', 'Feral Beauty' 'Adamantine', Demonic Items Eligable.
Description: Naruko Uzumaki; the child of Kushina Uzumaki and Minato Namizake, the Yondaime Hokage of Konohagakure. Having sacrificed his daughter, Minato sealed away the Kyuubi into the new-born child. Unlike popular belief, the Kyuubi wasn't as evil as everyone made out... especially when the Kyuubi was a 'she!' Training Naruko under her tutelage, she had to do a special seal which transformed her into a hanyou (half-demon, half-human). Her natural charm and feminine beauty leaves many girls in ire, jealous of her development. Men are completely under her will and will follow her without hesitation. Her combat abilities are nothing to scoff at, leaving her as the fourth-best choice of avatars.
Choose this Avatar? YES/NO
"Arrrgggghhh! So many choices! Which one do I pick!? I think this is the end of all the ones I've unlocked, so let's see what else..." he mused. "Oh..." he promptly spoke up before he came face to face with another likely choice he could make.
'Biju-Tamer' Naruko Uzumaki
STR: Extremely-High
INT: Medium-High
CHA: Infinite
CON: Medium-Low
Bonus: +100 Bonus Base Stats (Permanent), +50 Charm (Permanent), +50 Luck (Permament), 'Silver-Tongued', 'Feral Beauty', 'Adamantine', Demonic Items Eligable, Master Biju Summoner, 'Most Wanted'.
Description: During the 'Night of the Biju', the night in which all nine biju stood together to fend off attacks of capture and be sealed away once more, the five current Kages sacrificed their lives to enact the most intricate sealing method ever devised by human minds. Having recently becoming a father, Minato Namikaze offered his daughter, Naruko Uzumaki, as the jail for all nine biju. It should've been impossible to contain all that chakra but the seal had summoned Kami herself to seal them away inside the new-born. It would be later on where she would soon traverse past the boundaries of human nature as she learned to harness the powers of the biju inside her and become the New Rikudo Sennin.
Note: This is the most powerful yet difficult character story line as it will push your skills to the limit and deal with the different personalities of the biju themselves and prevent any of them taking control over your will. Also, the line between good and bad could not be any closer in this story line and can tip either way from the actions of others; good or bad. Being the cause of the death of the five Kages in the Elemental Nations, you will also need to learn how to survive when everyone is out for your head. Only those with strong will and a sharp mind for foresight should attempt this character.
Choose this Avatar? YES/NO
"If I choose this option, what would happen to the storyline? The Akatsuki were hellbent on obtaining the Biju..." he trailed off before coming to a thought that put him on edge. "Either they would all hound after me or Madara would use his Sharingan and his power to rip them free from my body." he concluded, settling in silence.
"Would I be able to live with the fact that I would be the most hated person in the Great Nations, yet the most coveted?" he asked himself. "A boy with the Rinnegan and the power of the nine biju behind me, training me to become the next Sage..." he closed his eyes. "For now," he sighed heavily, "Let's see what else I can unlock."
Naruto Uzumaki - Sensei
STR: High
INT: High
CHA: Very High
CON: Medium
Bonus: +10 Intelligence (Permanent), 'Bookworm', 'Fist Fury', 'Chakra Adept'.
Description: Unlike the normal Naruto, this alternative has higher intelligence from the original, leading him to become jonin and Academy teacher in Konohagakure. Always willing to learn, he naturally picks up studies faster than most people.
Requirements: Pass Academy on First Try, Positive Karma.
"Haha, Iruka-sensei would love to see that!" he chuckled to himself as he scanned through some of the other choices.
'Tenshi' Naruto Uzumaki
STR: Very High
INT: High
CHA: Very High
CON: Perfect
Bonus: +30 Base Stats (Permanent), 'Angelic-Rebirth' (One Use), 'Fight or Flight', 'Demon Slayer', 'Excalibur' (Permanent), Holy Items Eligable.
Description: After a traumatic, near-death experience, Naruto find favor in the eyes of Kami, who blesses him with her power, creating her champion. Entrusted with Excalibur, he swore to slay the demons which opposed him. Having the ability to fly, he is given the nickname of 'Tenshi', meaning Angel. Also, blessed with an ability to return to life once he died but can only be used once.
Requirements: Perfect Positive Karma, Defeat Konan, Defeat Pain, 20000 points at least.
"Wow, that's pretty awesome!" he thought before his mouth thinned out. "With how things happened last time, I'm really tempted to go for the Biju-Tamer avatar and learn how to fully harness the powers of the biju. Yet would I still remain strong like I did last time?" he sighed. After a few more moments, his eyes shone with determination as he chose that option. "Regardless of how hated I'll be, I will remain strong for my precious people and I will show them that I'm Naruto Uzumaki!" he grinned as a sphere of light enveloped him. The room shone from the anomaly in the room before the light began to die down.
"Well... Naruko Uzumaki now." she grinned as she took a look at herself and began to take in her new form. The pig-tailed, natural blonde hair, deep blue eyes and the whisker marks which makes her all the more attractive. She couldn't help herself as she ran her hands over her body and took in her figure with interest. Starting with running her hands through her silky hair, she traveled further down her body as her hands contorted to all her curves and bumps; resting for a little while on her impressive bust. Giving an experimental squeeze, she let out a small moan.
"Hmmmmm... I never really got the chance to take note of the female body, being as oblivious as I was. I wonder..." she thought. Deciding she has a bit of time, she decided to test out her new body. She began to take her top off, revealing her luscious mou-
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Panting heavily from her high, she began to collect herself; controlling her breathing before she asks what to do next. "W-Wow, that was incredible! Now I've experienced that, it's time to get back on track." she nodded to herself. Taking five minutes to regain her senses, she looked up and began searching the room. "Okay, I've chosen my avatar, what's next on the list?" Naruko asked, zipping her jacket back up. The box flashed once to gain her attention before more words formed on the screen.
NOW THAT YOU'VE CHOSEN YOUR AVATAR, WALK OVER TO THE DRAWERS. YOU CAN NOW CHOOSE UP TO FOUR ITEMS TO EQUIP FOR THE FIRST PART OF THE STORY. TAKE NOTE, YOU WILL NOT USE THESE ITEMS UNTIL AFTER YOU GRADUATE FROM THE ACADEMY AND YOU CANNOT CHANGE ITEMS UNTIL YOU HAVE ACCESS TO YOUR BIRTHRIGHT.
"Right. Got it." she smiled. She quickly made her way over to the drawers and began to look through them, noticing that the items fitted perfectly the way they laid. "Huh, so I can choose up to four items, ne? Let's see what each one can do!" she beamed.
Fusion Sword (Weapon: Sword)
Bonus: +30 Base Stats, 'Limit Break', +50% strength, +50% Kenjutsu experience when training.
Lightning Gauntlets (Weapon: Gauntlets)
Bonus: +50 Strength/Defence/Speed, Lightning-based jutsu nulled, +50% Speed.
Juubi no Kamiryu (Summon)
Bonus: + 50 Base Stats, ? ? ? ?
Crimson Death (Weapon: Sword)
Bonus: +75 Base Stats, 'Scorchtouch', Scorch Style Skill available, +100% speed, 'Sentimental Value - Mother's Emblem: Triple Experience.'
Ichiraku Ramen's VIP Card
Bonus: Free Ramen forever!
"Dattebane! Huh? That's weird, never said that before." she paused, rolling the word around her mouth a few times. "Actually... can I switch my avatar? I don't need to have all the biju inside me if I'm able to have the Juubi inside of me instead." she asked.
WHICH AVATAR DO YOU WISH TO CHOOSE INSTEAD?
"Can I go for the 'Hanyou' Naruko, please?" she asked politely. She felt a weird buzz in her body before the sensation faded away. "I really don't know if I could have dealt with nine biju trying their best to control my body. I'd be worse off than Gaara would be." she shook her head, a little disappointed with herself for not going through with her first choice.
DO NOT THINK SO LOW OF YOURSELF. IT WAS PURELY FOR THOSE WHO WERE CONFIDENT TO PLAY THAT STORY LINE AND NO ONE WILL THINK ANY LOWER OF YOU.
"Wow... thank you. That really does mean a lot to me." she smiled. "For the items, I'll choose both swords, the card and I'll choose to have the Juubi no Kamiryu sealed inside of me, along with Kurama." she nodded as she finished her choices.
YOU ARE WELCOME. YOU HAVE ALSO UNLOCKED THE 'KEKKEI KREATOR'. IF YOU WISH, YOU CAN CREATE A BLOODLINE AND DEVELOP IT DURING THE STORY. IT CAN BE A STYLE, A DOUJUTSU OR A PHYSICAL TRAIT, IT IS UP TO YOU. SIMPLY PICK UP THE SCROLL FROM THE DESK AND IMAGINE WHAT YOU WANT FROM IT. YOU WILL NOT ACCESS THIS UNTIL AFTER YOU MEET THE KYUUBI FOR THE FIRST TIME.
"Okay!" she nodded, quickly grabbing the scroll before plopping herself back on the bed. "Well, I know that there are three main dojutsus in the world; Byakugan, Sharingan and Rinnegan." Naruko speculated as she took the time to think through her ideas. "Byakugan is able to visualize a person's chakra paths and having a near three-sixty degree vision, Sharingan copies jutsu and recognizes the molding of the chakra used for them along some other perks and the Rinnegan is the eyes of the Sage of Six Paths, Madara and Nagato..." she paused before she began scribbling a design on the scroll.
"What if... I could make an advanced version of the Sharingan which would allow me to copy blood lines and dojutsus? Granted it may make me overpowered but with everyone I know I'll be going up against; Akatsuki, Orochimaru, Madara, Obito, Kaguya, Iwa and whoever else wants me dead more than alive... I know that I'll need all the help I could get while I can." Naruko nodded to herself as she began inputting the details. "Instead of the red eyes, I want the eyes to turn into a vibrant amethyst with gold wisps surrounding the iris. No tomoes or concen-... actually, golden tomoes would be pretty badass!" she smirked as she edited the details. She finished the drawing what she would imagine the doujutsu to look like. Looking back at her design, she nodded as she inputted the details.
EVERYTHING IS COMPLETE. I WILL ALLOW YOU A SAVE BEFORE YOU START SO THAT YOU NEED NOT WASTE TIME REPEATING THIS PROCESS. EACH SAVE POINT WILL TAKE THE SHAPE OF THE UZUMAKI EMBLEM. SIMPLY TOUCH IT AND TOUCH THE FIGURE INSIDE. ONCE YOU DIE, YOU CAN START AGAIN FROM WHEN YOU LAST SAVED.
"Thanks, whoever you are!" she smiled as the box disappeared from view. "This is gonna be a drag, 'ttebane." the blonde sighed before gathering her stuff together. She quickly saved her game, save her repeating the process of everything.
I SHOULD WARN YOU: ONCE YOU START THE GAME, YOU WILL FORGET EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENED IN YOUR PREVIOUS LIFE BECAUSE OF THE DIFFERENCE IN TIMELINES AND AVATARS. HOWEVER... I CAN ALLOW YOU TO REMEMBER ONE THING OF YOUR PAST.
"Oh." she paused, mid-step from stepping through the glowing white door that she knew would lead her to her second chance at life. She took a few moments to think about everything she remembered from last time before a small smile appeared on her face. "It's not so much a memory I want to remember... I want to ask if I could watch everything that would happen to me when my parents seals the Kyuubi away inside of me." she smiled as a tear fell down her cheek.
... I CAN ALLOW THAT REQUEST. YOU WISH TO FORGET EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENED ONCE BEFORE?
"Yeah. It'll give me a fresh start on life without having to remember the pain I felt on that day. I never want to experience that again." she nodded slowly. "I've already prepared myself for the oncoming storm which is my life without having to worry about making the same mistakes." she confessed, allowing her emotions to wash over her before she settled into a peaceful state.
VERY WELL. ONCE YOU ARE READY, STEP THROUGH THE DOOR. GOOD LUCK NARUKO. I WILL NOT BE AVAILABLE UNTIL YOU ACCESS YOUR APARTMENT BUT I WILL BE THERE TO HELP YOU SHOULD YOU NEED IT.
She nodded gratefully before the box faded from view. Once she steadied herself with deep breaths, she took the step through the door and her new life began. "Here we go, dattebane..."
-N:LR-
(Unknown Location: October 10th)
In an underground cave, four people occupied the room, while one of them laid back on a platform/table in the middle of the room. The woman had long red hair that fell down to her waist, accompanied by her vibrant, purple eyes. Currently dressed in a loose-fitting cream gown, covered by an olive shawl, loose enough for her to move around in and comfortable and light to wear. She was now gripping a hand in a death-lock due to the pain she was in at the moment.
"MINATO! YOU DID THIS TO ME!" the woman cried once more as she bore through the agonizing pains of childbirth.
"C'mon, Kushi-chan, you're doing great! I can't even feel my hand anymore!" the identified Minato replied, earning a slight chuckle from the woman, Kushina. Minato was a contrast to the screaming redhead: natural blonde, unkempt-spiky hair, deep blue eyes and an aura of authority. Nothing less of the Yondaime Hokage. He was wearing his jonin set-up: a long-sleeved blue mesh shirt, matching tracksuits that reached three-quarters of the way down his legs before it seamlessly changed into white wrappings that held them in place. He had foregone his vest and decided to just wear his trademark white cloak with red flames nicking the bottom of the material. Down the spine of his back laid the word 'Yondaime' written in kanji.
"Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh! MINATO NAMIKZE!" Kushina screamed once again as she continued to struggle.
"Almost there, Kushina-chan! I can see the head now!" one of the other figures spoke up, carefully guiding the labor along. The one who spoke had blonde hair, tied into two tails that draped behind her back, brown eyes that screamed power and an impressive bust. She was wearing a shawl similar to Kushina but she had wrapping underneath, securing her 'assets' in place, with a pair of blue, three-quarter-length tracksuit. It was an agonizing labor as the time now drove into the two-hour mark. If it was any other day then this wouldn't be that much of a deal but today was the day that everything would go downhill...
(Time Skip)
The past four hours have exhausted the entire village of Konohagakure. It wasn't long after that the young girl united with her mother and father but things soon turned for the worse when a figure appeared in front of the five of them in a black swirl. A quick throw of kunai had killed the assistant that helped birth the child, leaving her body on the floor with no remorse. The figure managed to snatch the newborn out of her hands, leaving Minato with an ultimatum that no parent-slash-husband should choose... his wife or his daughter. The figure smirked under that infernal orange-swirl mask of his as he threw the child into the air, only for Minato to 'flash' and save her, leaving Kushina vulnerable as the figure transported themselves away in the same black swirl he used to appear with.
All his thoughts soon evaporated when he heard the roar of a beast he knew wasn't sealed away in his wife, knowing that whoever that man was had released the biju backed into the open. He knew that he had to stop the rampage before any more damage occurred to his village and his heart turned cold when he knew that he would have to condemn his daughter to the life of a jinchuriki. However, the plans went further down the drain whe he heard another thunderous roar appear from the skies. He turned his head upwards to find a colossal titan of a dragon appear in the sky as it began fighting against the Kyuubi no Yoko. Despite the creatures efforts to defend the village, the two titans continued to fight with no concern for the safety of the villagers and he knew that he could go no other way than to gamble and hope that he would be able to seal the two beings into his daughter.
He heart wrenched when he relayed the plan with Kushina, who violently disagreed with the plan despite her weakness. She begged him that there must've been another way around this but the look in her husband's eyes told her that he tried to come up with any alternative... only to find none. She wept bitterly as she handed her daughter over to him as the three of them disappeared in a yellow flash.
They arrived at the sacrificial altar as Kushina placed her in the bundle of cloths while Minato dealt with the intruder who chose to appear at that moment to prevent them from completing their plan. Taking the fight elsewhere, it left Kushina to deal with the sealing array her husband had explained to her briefly. It was another hour since the process began that the two titans made their way into the clearing, the same moment Minato returned to do his part of the sealing. They watched in awe as the dragon figure managed to land a heavy blow on the Kyuubi and knock it closer to the shrine before they both saw the entity's eyes locked on theirs. A subtle nod told them that he knew what would be done to him and he accepted his fate. The newly-made parents both sped through the same hand signs as they activated the Shiki Fuin jutsu to seal the two behemoths away in the child. Little to their knowledge, the seal had a slight alteration that would change the future of their daughter as they watched the dragon and fox fade into the seal that appeared on the child's stomach before they both felt themselves get dragged in the same direction.
What the two also didn't realize was that Naruko was watching everything from an outer-body perspective; shocked, to say the least. Unlike last time, she now knew the truth of her parents and remained speechless as she knew that this was different to last time as she realized that it must've been because of one of her item choices. Just as the two parents felt themselves being sealed away in their daughter, the two could've sworn they heard a voice coming from their child...
"Kaa-san, Tou-san... I couldn't have asked for better parents. Thank you for everything and I will make you both proud of me."
It would be another half hour when anyone would stumble across the sight of a crying child on her own at an altar. The elderly figure that appeared came across the sight of the young babe crying for comfort before two younger figures flanked him either side. The first figure brought a smile to the onlooking blonde as she could easily recognize her 'jii-san' from anywhere. The only time she ever saw him in his shinobi battle outfit when she saw him lying on a table at the morgue, having sacrificed himself from the same sealing technique her parents had just used but on his traitorous ex-pupil, Orochimaru. She couldn't believe she was watching the same person with a head full of brown spiked hair, the grey hairs only beginning to show through while keeping the rest of his naturally brown hair. The second figure she recognized as her 'baa-chan' but she knew now that she was also the one responsible for bringing her into the world. The twin blond pigtails, large bust and the unmistakable diamond-shaped tattoo on her forehead could only mean that this was Tsunade Senju, one of the three Legendary Sennin. Lastly, the final figure was truly a sight for sore eyes as she saw her perverted Godfather alive once more; Jiraiya. Still dressed in the ridiculous get-up that he usually wore, she noticed that he looked weird as a younger person. Probably because she always took to seeing him as an old man, she thought to herself.
"So this is Naruko-chan, hm?" Sarutobi asked as the three made their way over to the altar she rested on. With a gentle smile, he slowly picked her up into his arms and bobbed her up and down. Slowly, the crying lessened before it stopped altogether. Naruko smiled at him as she reached up to him, grabbing hold of one of his fingers. Tsunade and Jiraiya flanked the former Hokage as they watched in fascination the interaction between man and child.
"Looks so much like her parents." Tsunade smiled also, taking a good look at the whisker marks that defined her face. "I only hope that she'll be strong enough to face whatever life throws at her; Kami only knows she'll need it." she sighed tiredly. "Yet it begs the question about what happened to Minato-kun and Kushina-chan." she wondered briefly as Jiraiya took to examining the seal that surrounded the altar.
"No kidding." the Toad Sage deadpanned. "Daughter to two of the most world-renowned figures, both having enemies in both Iwa and Kumo, Jinchuriki to the Kyuubi no Kitsune and with no family to look after her." he explained. "Before you have a go at me, I can't stay and look after her. As much as I'd like to, I still need to keep the network... going..." he trailed off as he discovered an irregularity in the sealing process. "Sensei!" he yelled, startling the other three figures. "You're not gonna believe what I'm seeing here!"
"What is it, Jiraiya-kun?" Hiruzen asked his student, concerned for the tone of shock in his voice.
"The sealing method! Whoever drew it made a slight mistake in the drawing and it's had an alternative side effect which I doubt the two of them would've discovered until it was too late." he began explaining as he pointed to the anomaly. "Normally, the gaki would've given up his soul to the Shinigami for activating this jutsu in sealing the Kyuubi into her. However, this seal changed it so that everyone and everything with a pulse in a certain area of the place would be instantly sealed away inside Naruko!" he finished, getting two looks of pure disbelief and shock at what he was implying.
"Whoa!" Tsunade spoke up, not believing him, "You're telling us that Minato-kun sealed himself away inside of Naruko, along with the Kyuubi and that Dragon!?" she yelled.
"No. He sealed himself, the Kyuubi, that dragon entity and Kushina away into their child. I know the difference in the writing and I know for a fact that this is Kushina's work." he concluded, getting a stunned look from the proclaimed 'Kami no Shinobi'.
"This is a SSS-Ranked secret and forbidden from being passed on to anyone else. Anyone who disobeys my rule, put to immediate execution." Hiruzen sternly ordered, concerned for her safety and the legacy of her parents continuing through her. "For now, we must return to the damn council meeting for me to take back my old position as Hokage." he sighed, hoping he didn't have to. The four of them shunshined away from the altar as they prepared for the meeting that they knew would be more trouble than it was worth.
Just before the four of them left the clearing, Naruko could feel the mental tug as she drew closer to her body. 'Guess it's time. Here goes.' she thought before her soul entered the young body.
-N:LR-
(Time Skip: Council Chambers)
"What!? The Demon lives!?"
"We must kill the child before it strikes back!"
"We cannot let it control her or it will devour us all!"
"SILENCE!" Hiruzen yelled, blasting enough KI to send the civilian council unconscious from the thousand ways of their deaths flashing through their eyes. "Now, considering I do not need to waste my words on deaf ears, I would like to inform the shinobi council that Minato Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki have both died during the sealing of the Kyuubi." he spoke, earning gasps from the figureheads there... apart from one Fugaku Uchiha, who didn't seemed fazed by the news. Jiraiya and Tsunade, both hidden, nodded to one another as they knew that it was simply a cover story.
"Hokage-sama, can I ask who the child is?" the Inuzuka matriarch, Tsume, asked solemnly. She sat there in her full shinobi gear with her companion, Kuromaru, stiitng at her side. Her brown hair was unkempt and spiked, yet it didn't detract from her feral charms. Her jonin vest remained unzipped to prevent discomfort from trapping her assets. She wore a black long-sleeved mesh shirt underneath the vest and matching tracksuits to match.
"The child is Naruko. Naruko Uzumaki-Namikaze." Hiruzen replied. At that moment, silence filled the room in light of the revelation they just heard.
"Minato-kun... had a child?" Tsume asked incredulously as her face turned to one of unbridled happiness. Her clan and Minato had always gotten along, to the point that the Inuzukas swore allegiance to any of his relatives or offspring. To have discovered that a young girl survived the ordeal of becoming a jinchuriki and still lived... it was nothing short of a miracle as tears softly fell from her eyes.
"So damn troublesome..." Shukaku drearily replied. He may have sounded apathetic but everyone there knew that he was greatly concerned for this child. Like the Inuzukas, the Naras gladly sated Minato's interest in their Clan and their natural affiliation with the deers at their compound. He also knew that if he supported the child, his teammates Choza and Inoichi would back him up in his endeavors.
"Hai. He had a child with Kushina Uzumaki. She had not long given birth to Naruko before sacrificing herself, along with Minato-kun, to prevent the Kyuubi from causing more damage than necessary to the village. Now, what I've said here is an SS-Class secret, about Naruko's heritage. The matter of the Kyuubi is an S-Class secret: both punishable by death." he explained, leaking his KI to affirm his opinion on the matter. "Now, I have a request to ask of all of you..."
"Hai, Hokage-sama?" the Clan heads replied in unison.
"I want you all to keep an eye out for the girl. With rumors spreading around the village about the jailer of the Kyuubi, people will seek her out and try to kill her. Please honor Minato-kun's last wish: please see the girl, not as the demon, not the Jinchuriki... but as the hero of the village that's keeping the Kyuubi safe for us." he solemnly sighed, rubbing the bridge of his nose as he knew things will only get harder from here on out.
"Why waste our time with a trivial matter such as this? I say we let the girl fend for herself and wash our hands of her. She will prove a pain for us later on." Fugaku spitefully spoke, not happy at such a statement. With that said, he stood up and proceeded to leave the chambers, leaving six stunned council heads and a very annoyed Hokage.
"I take it you heard all that?" Hiruzen spoke to no-one in particular. Out of the corners of the room, nearest the Hokage, two figures materialize into view, holding a baby in their arms. Everyone gasped at the sight: two of the three 'Legendary Sennin' was standing before them; Jiraiya and Tsunade.
"Yeah. Just to say, I'm not impressed, sensei." Tsunade spat.
"I gotta agree. This village is too corrupt to purify, in my opinion. I'm just worried about the girl..." Jiraiya finished, carefully cradling Naruko in his arms. Unlike most babies of their age, Naruko was happily smiling up at the Toad Sage, blue eyes twinkling with joy. Jiraiya carefully walked towards the middle of the room to show the shinobi council the discussed child.
"I don't get it, how could they say that such a beautiful girl could be a demon!?" Tsume softly raged, maintaining her gentleness as she stroked the whiskers on the girl's cheeks, earning a giggle that melted a few hearts.
"My thoughts exactly, Tsume-san. Hokage-sama, I will do my best to look out for the child." Hiashi bowed before proceeding over to the girl to inspect. Once he arrived, she lifted her hand to him to shake. A confused look in his eyes, his facial features softened as Hiashi took the gesture with a smile and let the girl grab his index finger.
'There is hope for the child yet, Minato, Kushina. I pray that she'll be strong enough to make it through everything that'll come her way and become a fantastic kunoichi like her mother. I hope I'm making the right choices...' Hiruzen thought to himself, hoping that the two people could hear him.
Well, this is the start of the re-launch now that I've gotten a chapter plan sorted out. I know this will probably upset a few of you about how the events turned out but I just had the inspiration of doing so as I continued writing up the chapter guides up till after the Chunin Exams (a good thirty-odd chapters ahead of now.)
In regards to the story as far as the relationships goes with Naruko, it will be YURI ONLY! She'll go through a rough and traumatizing experience which will skewer her outlook in love (explained in later chapters). She'll have the hots for strong, caring attractive girls and will try to pursue a relationship with several females. (For the CRA, I've got something planned for that.) The main harem, for now, will include:
Female Haku
Female Kyuubi
Now, the story will still retain the video game aspect but I realized that her having all her memories would be a moot point so I decided to erase her memory so that she can start again from scratch. She'll still have the memories of being in a video-game life and everything but anything to do with her previous life is gone.
For now, that's pretty much it. Till next time! :)