I don't read a lot of femslash (not really sure why, I like it enough to...guess I have too many ships already to add more to my reading list) but I really loved this. It felt really authentic to the characters and the show. Well done!

I have so little to say besides whoa. I loved the build-up, the reasoning behind this night happening, their discussion, the calm aftermath... I couldn't adoring that you managed to sneak in Scallisaac and Jydia feels in this fic!

I think the only, tiny moment that felt a little awkward was the paragraph that starts with "The conversation felt wrong..." It seems abrupt, kinda, although what comes after smoothed it out.

You know femslash is not really my thing but goddamn it, you created some serious urges in me with this one. It was amazing, tender but still very intense and I liked how you kept them both very much in character, up to their behavior in bed and "style", if I may call it so.

Wonderful job. I adored it!

Sooo, this was super hot, and it was EXACTLY what I needed to get pumped up for 3B tonight! :D As always, I love your writing. Thank you for this wonderful addition to the Teen Wolf fandom!

I really loved this story, it doesn't even seem like your second, great job!