Reviews for Her First
Langas chapter 1 . 5/24
Great story
KookieL chapter 10 . 4/3
aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
i really really really love this story
i love the interaction between sasuke and his three children
treblegirl1 chapter 10 . 10/22/2019
So cute!
orange.leaf.hokage chapter 3 . 3/19/2019
This is sooo cute I’m gushing
tiffanysnsd chapter 10 . 8/4/2018
I've never get bored reading of sasuhina family..their is the cutest
Lady Lavender Blue chapter 10 . 5/31/2018
Adorable and heart-warming. This is beautiful.
Midnights-AM-Child chapter 10 . 10/14/2017
This was the cutest story! I honestly wish there were more. It was so warm. I loved reading this after all the sorrow in the Uchiha line there's finally happiness and love. I am so happy Sasuke finally got his boy LOL Daisuke seems so sweet. Hikari reminds me of Hinata, with her love of Kaze and princess like personality. Katai sort of reminds me of Hanabi. She's so straightforward with her feelings. I feel like she was probably the easiest for Sasuke to raise. I like the dynamic between Sasuke and his kids. I would've liked to see more from Hinata's prospective, but overall amazing.
ColaGummyBears chapter 7 . 9/7/2017
Sasuke using genjustu and shadow clone in calming the kids down was clever and funny haha. Bad Sasuke.
ColaGummyBears chapter 1 . 9/7/2017
Hahhahahha how Sasuke acts to kids that aren't his is hilariously funny hahaha! And NaruSaku got twins!
ColaGummyBears chapter 2 . 9/7/2017
Fluffy indeed but those last words in the chapter made me tear up a bit. Good job!
chestnutpoby chapter 10 . 7/2/2017
Sooo cuteee~~ Love it~~~
cocoberries34 chapter 10 . 5/12/2017
This is such a CUTE story! You've got me sooo emotional.
Truly HEARTWARMING!
thepypops chapter 10 . 5/5/2017
Normally I don't like reading oneshots but I really liked these, because not only do we see how the life of the kids evolve but we also see how cute the relationship between Sasuke and Hinata is. I also like the way Sasuke is as a dad, it's believable, he acts as he probably would. He is sweet but also his stern self by saying stuff like "that's enough" and a firm "stop". I hope you keep writing because you're great at it!
soniyamalik444 chapter 10 . 4/2/2017
oh my god (lol) they are so cute but i could imagine how sasuke is tired because his all children are stupid hehehe
soniyamalik444 chapter 2 . 4/2/2017
soooo fluffy
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