Are you ever going to make chapters in this story please

Good story. I enjoyed reading it.
I hope to see thiy fic updated. I mean c'mooon! Blake and Jaune haven't even reunited jet. Not to mention with Pyyrha and your OC also starting to like Jaune, it will cause quite the war for his affection I hope.

The beginning were they are kids is kind of bland, not much conflict, plenty of fluff, but when they are at beacon, awhile new story. They added a whole new angle on Jaunes character, he's not just a lovable fool in this. I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!

haaah... hopefully this fic will be revived... i truly enjoyed it

I really do like this story. It's very heart touching. I just it can continue soon.

Please continue

MORAH

Are you ever going to update again? or should I give up hope? No rush if you do plan to continue I just want to know IF you plan to continue, because I love the story in this one. Its very good.

Kegi Springfield introduced me to this story and so far it's amazing. I hope to see ch.6 someday and what role Dahlia plays.

Found this fic through a keigi Springfield (I think that's their name) fan art and thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you decide to continue with it some day.

You did, make more plz

I hope this story continues.

Hope you update this one day

Keep up the good work!

"She picked up the item and turned the glass vile..." VIAL is a container. VILE is something that is evil or sinister.

"...that made contact with her crimson ones." Crimson is a shade of red, not yellow. Amber, gold, or sunflower petals would have sufficed.

Keep up the good work!