Reviews for In Deep and Out of Control
XYZArtemis chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
Lovely job!
Kathrine95 chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
I really liked this story, the way that you wrote it made it feel so short. Maybe you can continiue this story? It was very good!
EmotionalDreamer101 chapter 2 . 5/4/2018
Aww, That was really good! I love this, That was really sweet and heartwarming! :’D
Crystalzap chapter 2 . 2/8/2018
interesting, we never did hear much about what Merlin got up to in his childhood.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2017
You know, that could explain why he /can't/ teleport in the series- because the first time he did it was under such traumatic circumstances, the ability was subconsciously suppressed along with the memory. Childhood traumas can have long lingering effects decades after the memory is lost to time.
Golden Bearded Dragon chapter 2 . 4/11/2017
Brilliant! :)
Aaviaria chapter 2 . 7/12/2016
I absolutely loved it! I was grinning ear to ear through the whole thing! Well done once again!
Ihni chapter 2 . 4/11/2016
Merlin IS a puzzle! I loved the little part where he just solved the puzzle and didn't even realized it. This was a good story, well done!
Dossypet chapter 2 . 3/5/2016
Nice! :)
thescribblerdragon chapter 2 . 2/18/2016
I really liked the ending! Reveal fics are so common; it was nice to see something different. And I love reading fics where Merlin is really smart. And when he had a kind of hard childhood (cause it makes since). And I liked how Arthur was portrayed a lot. A lot, a lot. ANYWAY, keep up the good work :)
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 2 . 11/26/2015
Ooo mysterious :) I enjoyed this :) Great little story! I do wonder though, how did they get out? :P I guess we'll never know. Merlin is a tricky one ;)

Ps, ohhhh! Teleportation eh? Didn't realize they could do that! (just read the author note lol)
AliciaRoseFantasy chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
Awww Merlin! I really like this, it's very good :) And I like how they interact. Arthur does care! It's nicely written friendship :)

I hope they are alright and don't get buried!
guardianofdragonlore chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
There are puzzles that only a special person can solve. Merlin is one of those puzzles.
DragonThetan chapter 2 . 10/5/2014
I loved the ending!
Ondori-Naramaki chapter 2 . 8/28/2014
Oh, that was awesome! I love it! And the ending was so nice too - love that last line.

-Ondo
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