This is so good! Please continue?

What an ending! Took me awhile to let it sink. Feel so bad for Sigrid. Can't wait for next chapter!

-stares at ending- ... I hope Sigrid didn't see that, but such a hope is likely naive. She and Bain are floating right there, after all.

Jakob was beginning to grow on me! I'm sad that he's gone :( please update the next chapter soon - I'm curious about how this will all end and tie in with the story.

Well now I'm sad, I was starting to like him... XD

I KNEW JAKOB WAS UP TO SOMETHING. It was too convenient... But maybe he's redeemable since he seems to actually like Sigrid.

I TRULY do not trust Jakob... He seems so nice and innocent but I'm willing to bet he's part of the plot against our favorite family.

I have a bad feeling about Jakob...

Finally !

DAMNIT! THE HELL?! Sooo sad!

NOOOOO not Jakob I was shipping Jakrid already. *cries* And she's going to poison somebody, I'm pretty sure. :) Definitely a lot of good action in this chapter.

You promised a happy ending ! Live by your word please lol !

Damn that cliffhanger! You better not let her die again. I don't think I can reread that twice.

DON'T DO THIS TO ME!
I have enough with GOT to think we have another unexpected death heading our way!
I honestly have no idea how this is going to go, but Tarin and Malik need their just desserts.

Hello! Happy new year! Finally, I managed to catch up with your story (I should have never fallen back in the first place). I like a lot the background you gave to Jakob, it is interesting and gives more depth to him than the usual prince for the girl... and also I like the human side of the Master. He loved once, and he seems to love both his children in some way, he is not a foolish, bad guy. The plot is moving forward on nicely with many twists (you are a master in that). I hate though cliffhangers :(