How saddening and touching. ... :'( :')

that actually broke me for a bit... man. I know exactly how jack feels... minus the scars. I got mine on my own. but man does that make you appreciate prime, or what?

touching my heart

Awww Poor Jack.

But so sweet, Optimus bonding with Jack and such :D

Optimus would make a SUPERB Dad!

This makes me wanna barf rainbows I LOVE IT! I wish their were more fics like this!

Awwww! That was soooo cute! That was a great one shot of them. I just love Optimus. He's strong and brave and courageous. He's also kind, gentle, understanding and knowledgeable. He's the perfect leader especially because he has the patience of a statue lol. Great job :)

I love this! The bond between Optimus and his human friends, the way the soldiers aren't used to Bots and their allies, even the use of the word "owlishly" (which I haven't heard used in a loooong time). I would be interested to see more stories of this nature :)

AWWWWWWW...

Nice one.

Don't tell me that like in some other stories Jack's father is Col. Leyland Bishop A.K.A SYLAS...

Cuteeee 3 we so need more of this type of story

Sweet moments between Optimus and Jack!
Grammer and spelling are good.
Paragraph form is solid.
The flow is a bit awkward but not overly distracting.
Overall a very good read.

I like this a lot. :)
So sweet.