...she's on her period isn't she. I know ur pain sister

I love this story! Do we have a sequel here? Please...

No! There's no more! It's such a good story! I wish there was more.

*cries*

Dont you love it when you find a good fanfic and theres 12 more chapters

I hope u finish this it's a very good story

I totally got what you're trying to do to revamp it and stuff, but I've got to say that as odd as this story is, I really really like it! And the previous chapter was perfect in my opinion despite Draco being a general jackass. I really hope you decide to keep on going with this story. I'm not really sure what I'd suggest you change...when I read fics I usually just accept the decision the author's made even if it wouldn't have been my first choice so now that I've read this whole thing it makes it hard to imagine it differently. The revenge thing did seem drawn out but the last chapter was worth all that! And Ron and Harry get on my nerves but that's me in almost every fic (and the original series tbh) The period thing was unnecessary but I enjoyed it because as a girl, omg, that is such a realistic horror! I honestly think that you should keep all the plot points you've had so far, but maybe revise the way you go about having them appear...that doesn't really make much sense the way I phrased that, but hopefully you get what I mean? (feel free to PM me if you're looking for help or suggestions because I would be so happy if you kept on with this story!)

Hon, there is nothing in this story that needs to be changed. (except of course how quickly it gets updated. Lol ;) ) Just keep writing. In my experience, going back and changing stuff never works. You lose your train of thought, so when you do write the next chapter, its disjointed and such because of having to remember all the little things you changed I the story line. The only things I would suggest you do, are: 1. Do a spell check (when in doubt, go over your whole story and do a spell check and punctuation check. It clears your mind to continue writing well) 2. Write up a schedule. Tell yourself that your going to write A and B on _ day. This keeps you from forgetting what to write. 3. Write down all of your idea for the story. Keep a little notepad with you, or use your phones note app. Trust me, if you get a good idea, whether it be a funny, cute, angsty or whatever, write it down. There's nothing like when you in a writers block like having a couple of prompts to fall back on. That is one of the best feelings in the world. Lol. Well, I hoped this helps. Btw, personally, I don't think that Draco would do such a cruel thing to Mione. Keep up the good work! Love the story!

i like your story line a lot but this chapter was a little too fast with the whole draco and hermione romance. it was like she hated him because he was still really rude and hadn't warmed up to her get. but then he was nice and cared about her and she was starting to like him but he was never really nice enough for her to get to know him like that so it was like hermione was felling in love with a guy who was being a total dick. i just think next time you should slow it down a little bit more and show draco being some what nice to hermione and then they could start having feelings for each other. i don't mean to sound like i hate it because it is actually really good. i just think its just a little fast.

I'm glad you decided to pick this up again! The only thing I ever really had a problem with was that Malfoy seemed a bit too quick to change moods. He became a little too cruel over nothing, in my opinion. I can't wait to see where you take the story!

I actually don't really see anything that needs to be changed, just making chapters longer and developing their relationship a bit slower, but not too slow cause I still love dramione

I read again the last chapters, I think that you should change the fact that she reacts so harshly to Harry and Ron, not giving in right away is fine but that was a bit too much.
Another thing that you should change, in my opinion, is the last chapter. He went too far using physical pain to get back at her and the fact that she forgive him and even realizes that she's fallen for him is not only out of character and wrong but it even passes a wrong message, it sounds like those women beaten by their man that don't say anything because they love them and excuse their violence.
Anyway I think that Hermione is too submissive, so that is something else I would change.
Sorry for any mistake, English is not my first language..
I hope that my suggestions are useful and I'll wait for the new version of the story.

i've actually enjoyed reading this story and cant wait to read the new chapters you plan to re-write! goodluck!

so sorry u ended this story...it was a cute story...good luck in the near future

I really like your job. I can see an interesting stoy coming out here :3