... orochimaru is mean:(

awwwwww it such a sweet ending

Awwwww...
Such a,sweet moments...

What I don't understand is how sasuke could even push a baby out. Did it come out of his? Did they cut off his dick? These are the questions!

If I see fugaku on the streets, we fightin' I don't care, we fightin' and I'm beating his ass, disgusting like, rape is never the victims fault.

Hitting right on the nail.. Sus suspicious and even a bit unbelievable but I yes it can fly in this case maybe not good chapter anyway

nyaaa happy ending! :D

Aw, she is adorable! But doesn't Naruto have to leave soon for his away game?

Thank goodness. I was kind of wondering where duck-butt's been for the past few chapters.

Sweet ending!

You know stretching before a strenuous workout is worse for you because you could cause tears sprain etc in your muscles

this can not be overi m not done reading i want more pleasee

Ummnn...I don't know if this is your first time writing or something, but I...this really isn't all that great. I mean, I get what you want to do with the overall plot and the idea is good, but the execution not so much. The way the writing is, is very to the point and immediate and so it's actually very difficult to get into the story and get invested in your take of the characters. It seems as though you're just writing this to write and not putting much effort into it (though I'm sure that's not true). The wording is off.

Also, you really shouldn't put "they're having a bad day, stressed from work, or have been raped by someone" all i the same sentence. It seems as though you're putting it all in the same category when it isn't and that's pretty messed up. Rape isn't casual like that.

I hope I don't seem too aggressive or mean towards you, if I do, then I apologize.

Awww

Great job.
Thanks for share.
I hope you write more NaruSasu :3