Soooo amazing

write more please

this is so cute, I can totally see this happening!

This is nice! Kiyi and her relationship with Zuko are my favorite things about the Avatar comics. It was kind of odd how they never showed Zuko and Kiyi and her parents clarifying the fact that she and Zuko are siblings, so I like that you chose to write about it.

There are some grammar mistakes scattered throughout the piece. I don't have time to list them all now, but if you want I can send you a personal message later. I think the word "pure" could be left out, as "innocent" fits better. I think the story doesn't really need the line breaks, since the switch in point-of-view only lasts for a couple lines.

There is also the matter of how Ursa and Kiyi's relationship turns out after Ursa regains her old face … but I don't know if you have read "Smoke and Shadow". If you have not, you should!

Kiyi and Zuko are just so adorable!
It makes me so happy reading about Zuko finding his family :)

I love it so much! Please write more Zuko/Kiyi fics! This is so damn adorable!

OOOOOOOOOOOOHHH SUPER ULTRA CUTE! SQUEEEEEEE

Me? I love it! This is exactly what I was trying to find when I searched for kiyi fics! So adorable. More? I actually want to write Zuko's version of the Pirates story tho...

I cried. I really cried. That was adorable. Zuko is my favourite character of all time and seeing(or reading) him bond with Kiyi like that made my heart melt. Great job!

Ah adorable and well-written. Nice piece

they're all so mean to Azula! I mean what kind of person just forgets about their relatives?

AAAAH, THIS IS SUCH A SWEET AND CUTE FIC! I really wanted to see this interaction between the two of them when reading The Search! ;A; It's so perfect! This makes me so happy! Thank you! It's perfect! ;u;

Aww, so cute! Zuko totally deserves a little sister who's not a homicidal psychopath... I wish they'd made the search longer to show us what happened next. I like the idea of Zuka making Kiyi a princess :D anyway, well done!

OMG THIS IS THE CUTEST THING EVER. I was thinking about how there needs to be more fic about Zuko and Kiyi and you did it justice! I loved it!