I want to read the rest of this one.

(I'm aware no such currently exists.)

Enjoyed it... HECK I LOVED IT! Great read, Very great, fantabulous even! Makes me wonder what all he went through in those three years, and how it all started for him even more than when I submitted it! Alas, only you know the inner secrets of his time on Aselia.

Thanks for writing it all out!

Reviewpartthing: Fourth paragraph into his real explanation on what had happened. The one after, "My three years on Aselia Changed that."

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Friend-zoned... reality (or fictional reality) can be harsh at time. Me thinks ye did a good job of capturing it.

Reviewpart: I noticed an error! *ominous music* Look to the sentence where ye mentioned 'friend zone' and ye shall come across the error easily enough!

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OK! Now that I've read them all I can post up a review... thing. Firstly, they were all superb on shot's and I loved every minute of them. On the Maxwell one, I thought it would be funny if he met Maxwell the old guy summon, but I recall not where that is in the story's plot line. Probably right near the end.

I look forward to seeing more of them, you keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Reviewpart: I do not recall anything, but I wasn't looking. If it makes you feel ANY better, then nothing was glaringly obvious or detracted from the stories 'flow'. Or, so to say, I did not have to back track and look at a sentence again to get the meaning.

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Can there be a guy named Ajax who has a huge guilt complex he can hurt someone without having a guilt trip

Awww...the ending of that one was really touching. I like the detail of Richard pretending that the star was Earth and the beginning was nicely written with the little details of the moonlight and the fire crackling bringing the scene to life. Keep at it!

Though, unless there is a new speaker, you don't have to start a new line every time someone speaks. If Presea says two lines they should be together even if there is break for description between.

Random and crazy,
RBL

I still can't believe you got that work up when I left that review XD

Although I do not agree with Raine having her 'lost virginity' be the reason why she won't see the unicorn. Phobia are called so because they are crippling to the person who has them, they fully impede someone's life if the must cross paths with that which they fear. Raine probably was close to passing out or having a full on panic attack when they rode the washtubes. Also, one little known fact about Raine is that she was about 16 or so when she got to Iselia. Considering that she had her and her brother's safety to be concerned with until they reached Iselia, it's unlikely she did anything promiscuous. But that's just what I think :P No need to pay me any attention...

Max sounds like an interesting guy and I really want to know if these are parts from OC/SI fics already posted to Fanfiction or if you made them all up.

Random and crazy,
RBL

These 'tips' are funny! I'm wondering if they're taken from actual fanfics or if you came up with these yourself. I look forward to reading more of these!

Random and crazy,
RBL

THANK YOU! I LOVE IT!