Love it so sweet how Fili waited for Kili before he would enter. Now I need some chocolate

Thank you.. For making me cried a river of tears :"(

Two words. Loved it.

Oh, my heart! Thank you for sharing this!

I always loved that song, I'll go just beyond the moon, then I'll stop and wait for you...

How Fili saved Kili then, hitting on his chest, and not knowing how it came to be it saved him... Very well done, the right thing to do. :D Well written.

And what Kili said about Fili, and inscribed on the tomb, that is a brother, as much protector as partner in crime.

How Fili would not go on, even if he too would know waht was waiting for him, but waiting for Kili before he did, and how he could not go there for making it real. It's true, it is like that, but I imagine there at the end Kili knew it was time, both to make it real and to follow Fili.

Very well written, take care *hugs* Elenhin

He just dies of grief after he carves the inscription? Awwww...

Excellent. So many feels. Loved Kili"s second inscription. Too many tears to type any more.

awe this is so cute

... You are a brilliant writer. I especially loved the parts where Kili read the words inscribed on his grave and then spoke to Fili as well. :)

very nice :)

Do you hear the cracking sound? Well that is MY HEART BREAKING! This story gives me feels!

It's really well written by the way... :)

I almost lost it... OH THE HURT I AM FEELING! Fili died and then Kili died when he was in Fili's crypt just was so...so sad and sweet and, I going to cry now!

- Death to Elves

You connected with MistakenMagic's cannon beautifully! I might have had to wipe away a tear. Lol.

Thanks for sharing!

You are evil...but I loved it! Brought tears to my eyes. :'(

i almost couldn't finish due to tears. that was really well done though.