4/10. Why did you switch from third person to first person? Also hate that he calls her stupid/idiot. Stopped reading at chapter 12 skipped to chapter 26 and said enough is enough. Went downhill pretty quick.

I was enjoying the story up until this point. It doesn’t make sense for you to switch from third person to first person for no reason. I thoroughly enjoyed seeing different characters’ views and then it all changed to just one person, which is extremely limiting considering how everyone in this story is up and doing their own thing. I think I’m done with this story, it was a good read up until this point.

What do you mean Epilogue?
Please
Tell me
There will be oneshots
I love this story way too much for my own good

A family outing. I loved it. But please tell me that the fanfic is not over.

I loved. Melinoe and Macaria are the best combination of Hades and Persephone. And Hades being jealous of Macaria and she having a tantrum was hilarious.

I will miss this story. Thanks for sharing it.

I really like your story. Thank you so much 3

that was the funniest chapter I've ever read. macaria really does take after Persephone, and melinoe was even more interesting. the best part was when Hades told macaria that she couldn't have boyfriend and when all father mode on her persistence to have one. I guess he can be a father— sort of—but overall this was fun I can't wait to see what happens next

Thank you so much for update, I waiting for your story every week!

For Hades to demonstrate his health, he just has to act like a pervert. kkkkkkk. Melinoe is sweet, and inherited many things from daddy. I missed you

He reffered to them as children!
Not sausages.
Children.
Omg.

this never gets tiring. I love this book. and baby Melione is a whole mood! keep updating

I finally got to read the chapters you've posted at last I was a bit busy. They were really great I look forward for your next update.
I hope you are doing well!

Continue, please!

Damn Hades is actually improving. Persphone can't catch up lol.