Gah teh cute is just too much!~M

That... Was super cute! I loved it!

Not ashamed to admit I teared up a bit. Fantastic story!

Really cute

Love it alreadu

love love love it (:

OH MY GOD THIS IS SO CUTE I LOVE ITTT PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I've left feedback over at AO3, but this story is way too awesome to not have attention drawn to it. So I'm purposefully leaving feedback here in case someone searches using the number of reviews as a filter. To those people, I say: READ THIS FIC. It's amazing. Quite possibly one of the sweetest, loveliest FitzSimmons fics around.

Omg, I just noticed that I didn't leave a review here. I know I already left a comment on the Archive, but this fic was so awesome, it deserves another.

Anyways, one thing I forgot to point out was how much I love Ali's explanation to her twins regarding their two aunts. Especially that last part about Leslie being Bryce's wife but Jemma wasn't Leo's. I bet she added a "yet" in her head. And she'd be right to do so.

Also, love their terms of endearment for each other. Love how they just started using them when they reunited after several days apart on that Christmas in Boston. And love how the terms stuck even until after marriage.

Outstanding once again! Was it a two shot, because if it is it's perfect.

-Crow

Another very fine chapter you posted. It was different from the other stories I've read, like last time, great job.
By any chance, are there going to be more chapters?

This is the best FitzSimmons story I have ever read. You captured the characters perfectly. AMAZING job. Such a sweet story. Keep up the great work!

Normally I don't review stories. Maybe it's laziness, my inability to bring myself to login, or maybe I find I am not the best at reviewing. However, I have to review one of your marvelous stories at least once. You, my dear, are a gifted writer. I love the way you write Fitzsimmons. They aren't too mushy, yet they're absolutely adorable. I receive many a feel from the way you write them. Your grammar and spelling are wonderful. To top it all off, the way you develop the characters is remarkable. Please continue writing Fitzsimmons fanfictions. You surely do them the justice they deserve.
Cheers!

That was absolutely amazing! I loved how you tied it in with the recent episode. You have so much talent and I can't wait to read your next story!

Amazing story! So sweet, I love it!