So cool pleas make some more

I don't like twilight, but good fanfic.

yay

noooooooooooooooooooooooo!
no way not the volturi!

OMG!
this is a awesome story.

girl

Liked it a lot. Poor Renesmee. But she's still as cute as a button. Good start

I am so glad that Leah can get over Sam now! I have been hoping that something would happen so she could and now you have written it. So I thank you. Also I really love your story. It's very engaging.

Good story...

yes give them a boy to be like edward and to take care of nessie

i thinking the shape shifrters jake

I love your creative ousts, but I believe you have left us hanging. Please continue this hole story.

Again I like the story but didn't it say in Breaking Dawn that Nessie had skin like a vampire's, and you have glass cutting her skin? And you have Bella pretty much hating Jacob even though their friendship was pretty much on track after Bella calmed down in Breaking Dawn (it didn't say it like that but it did say it). And you always have the wolves getting punked out by vampires like when Rose always scares Leah or Jacob and you have Bella scaring Jacob. You never say that they are scared but you write that they back away when theres an argument or Bella just easily throws Leah around and Leah does nothing back? Even Rose tossed Leah out a window? Do you hate wolves and hybrids? You make them so weak and fragile.

I like this story, it seems really good! But I ask one favor of you,,,,, please don't make Neesie a weak liitle thing. Most stories have her more human than vampire but honestly it should be the other way around, a vampire gene is stronger than a humans, and it states this in'' the twilight saga official illustrated guide'' written by Stephenie Meyer. And the vamp gene takes over or actually burns away the human gene in the transformation so Nessie should be stronger, like you wrote that she couldn't hold both of the twins for that long because the boy was so big. Not trying to be mean just asking a question so please don't bite my head off if you respond!

I just got done reading this story and I wanted to ask why you make the hybrids and the wolves so weak? Renesmess cant even hold the twins that long and then you always have the wolves getting punked by the vamps, Rose has pretty much tossed Leah around and scared Jacob, Bella has Jacob scared all the time. I figured they would all be more likeable to each other. And the hybrids should be a lot tougher I mean they are half vampire. I know your gonna say they are half human too but the vamp gene is stronger than the human gene and that's obvious in the transformation when they gene takes over. Please don't think Im being mean I just read so many fan fics where they make Nessie so weak, I mean you have glass cut her and in Breaking Dawn Edward tells Bella that Nessie's skin seems to be nearly as indestructible as a full vampires. I take it you don't like wolves and hybrids that much? Again Im not trying to be mean just trying to figure your story out. I hope your not one of them writters that cant take a little constructive criticism. I look forward to hearing from you.