This is probably the most in character fan fiction I've read regarding these two. Easily feels like something that could have even been in the movie.

Wow, this was really great. I loved the ending, even though it made me sad.

Wow! Absolutely loved the writing style, but that ending! Damn, that kind of ripped my heart out and stomped on it. Why would you have such a great story then end it with that?! Makes me dislike Erik just a bit :'(

Aww! This turned out really great but the ending felt like a cliff hanger...nooo
It was good while it lasted though! I loved it

Loved the flow and the ending. You tease so good. ;-)

Ugh, screw you, Erik. SCREW YOU.
You could have had something beautiful with Charles but NOOOO. Just leave the fine. Huff.
But awesome story. As sad as the end was, it was also very in character.

I loved this!
But Erik... don't make me go through the screen and punch you in the face!

Oh, that was equal parts sad and fluffy

I loved this fic, it was so sad and I only wish it could have happened in the movie.

ahhhh! i love it, this pairing is great:) awesome plot and writing!

Wow. This was sad. I think everyone hoped for a hot se-... You know. This actually could have happened in the movie. (I fancy it did.) This was very well-written. I loved every moment of it! Especially the hot parts. ;) You are great. :D

Love this!