Decent start, enough to say I would like to see where you were going with this but I guess that's not gonna happen. Ah well.

DAAAAAAMMMMMM! I never expected to see Miku be such a bad ass...Hopefully Luka was able to slap some damm sense into her soul mate. XD
I really like the story so far, so could you please keep it going.

I agree with one comment below : why Rebel!Miku stuttering? xD I mean she's a rebel, she can't be like that, lol. But maybe you have a reason for that...?

Anyway great first chapter, I'll be waiting for the next one...soon I suppose?

Thank you for your work and have a great day.

Pretty great first chapter. Looking forward to the second one. :)

I like it please continue

Oooh I think this is great except one thing... Miku's stuttering. If she is a rebel I would imagine she would have a badass attitude to go with it

Cool! Looking forward to the next chapter and the amusement park :B

I love mikuxluka so i hope you can make them end up falling in love with each the story is nice and interesting hope you continue it.

Haha, I chuckled when Kaito said "whore-ish" LOLOLOL.

Anyways, I like it so far. c:

Ooh rebel miku x) that's rare. Come on luka! Knock some sense into your soul mate

I like the story especially the part where everyone wants to change Miku. It's almost like an intervention!
And go Luka! I hope your Special Slap of Sense knocks some sense into Miku too!